Topic: How much truth do you put into your writing?

"Writers write what they know." I've always heard that. Stephen Kings says, "Fiction is the truth inside the lie."
For the sake of discussion, how much "truth" do you put into your fictional writing? How much of yourself is part of your characters?
For example: I had a student say the words that follow to me. AND I had books thrown at me in the classroom, though I was never actually hit. I took a small real-life incident and let my imagination run to create Lucky Thirteen. http://amzn.to/1ld8grm


Dupree burst out laughing. “You a scrawny little white woman. You come in here tryin’ to change somethin’ you don’t know nothin’ about. You know what these slits in my eyebrow mean?” He pointed to two shaved spaces in his eyebrow. “Maybe you should be afraid of me.”
Larkin did know much of the gang liturgy and symbolism. She had learned quickly during her first year in the classroom. She had also learned not to show fear to these kids, so, although shivering inside, she calmly replied, “Mr. Parks, it appears you do not know who has the power in this room. Perhaps, you should leave us.” She moved toward the intercom.
Dupree jumped up from his desk and shouted, “Try it, bitch!”
Larkin raised an eyebrow and pushed the button. At the same moment, the literature book from beneath Dupree’s desk hit her in the face.

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The subway rides, bar scenes, sightseeing trip in Hokkaido, and Manga drawing are mostly personal touches in my novel.

But I would have never pushed that button.

~Tom

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A lot of what I write is inspired by true life experiences. To some extent, my experiences, but more often than not, the life stories of other people who are close to me, particularly family members both past and present. Interestingly enough, I often don't recognize these connections until after I've written the story.

For example, many elements of my second novel HIGH MAGA were inspired by stories of the women in my family who survived WWII Germany. I don't know how I didn't see this from the very beginning, but the novel was finished and published before it dawned on me where it all came from.

A short story that I recently posted on tNBW, Lamya of the Sea, was inspired by my great-great grandmother. I never met her, but I've heard stories about her from my father. She immigrated to the States with her sister in the 19th century, and never spoke to any of her family about the life they left behind. Recently my father discovered the single link he had to her past on the internet; an estate where she lived as a girl. Why she and her sister abandoned that life and crossed the Atlantic, we'll never know. It seems remarkable to me, given the time period, and the fact that they were two young women all alone. Something desperate must have driven them forward. The mystery has always intrigued me, so I spun it into a fantasy story and "Lamya of the Sea" was born.

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Glad to see I'm not the only one.

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Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

"Writers write what they know." I've always heard that. Stephen Kings says, "Fiction is the truth inside the lie."
For the sake of discussion, how much "truth" do you put into your fictional writing? How much of yourself is part of your characters?

I have been inhibited by the near certainty readers will just assume far more truth in all or some  of the particulars of what I write than is actually true.  Necessarily "write what you know" means believability of scenes, such as New Yorkers interminably writing stories set in New York, as if everyone should care anything at all about New York, per se.  An author whose great Aunt Flossie was a manic-depressive alcoholic and therefore must know everything there is to know about bipolarism and/or alcoholism gives way to a fallacy of appeal to authority, but, on the other hand, an author who has had no close personal contact with a manic depressive will be guilty (perhaps) of lending truth to lies and myths on the subject.

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lending truth to lies and myths on the subject.<<Hmmm. Wonder if that what Stephen King meant.

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Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

lending truth to lies and myths on the subject.<<Hmmm. Wonder if that what Stephen King meant.

Alas so, then.

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It isnt so much truth as it is A truth. I have always thought of it this way. Your characters ARE NOT you. YOU are not your characters. BUT, you MUST UNDERSTAND your characters. You must have a deep and intimate understanding of each and every character that you write, their experiences, their frame of mind, their thoughts, their reasoning, their logic, all of the psychology that goes into who and what they are. If you dont, your character wont be convincing. This is similar to how actors "Get into character." They become the character, in a sense. Of course, they dont actually become the character, and their original self must be preserved, but they integrate enough into the perspective to be able to convey a realistic version. That IS the truth that they create. This is why it is easier to model our characters based on ourselves or people that we know, or use real life events, changed or modified to fit. It is because that is what we know. That is what we already understand. The characters that are nothing like us, those are harder, because we must come to understand a truth that we do not already know. So, basically, each character and each situation must be a truth, even though it is, technically, a lie. For no character goes loved or hated if it is not within a realm of realism.

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Gods Ghost wrote:

It isnt so much truth as it is A truth. I have always thought of it this way. Your characters ARE NOT you. YOU are not your characters. BUT, you MUST UNDERSTAND your characters.
This is why it is easier to model our characters based on ourselves or people that we know, or use real life events, changed or modified to fit. It is because that is what we know. That is what we already understand. The characters that are nothing like us, those are harder, because we must come to understand a truth that we do not already know. So, basically, each character and each situation must be a truth, even though it is, technically, a lie. For no character goes loved or hated if it is not within a realm of realism.

Real people are boring, and it is a little surprising how authors are real, boring people.  What they do is put real (boring) people in unexpected, unusual, or fantastic situations and conjecture what happens. Conversely, there is the hero character of the fantasy put into real(ish) situations and conjecture what might happen.  A difficult story is one in which the main character or some ancillary characters are not "real", rather quirky, annoying, and not all that likeable.  That is a story for the ages if not for TV and pulp novels. For that reason I'd have to say that I disagree with: "For no character goes loved or hated if it is not within a realm of realism," for why should a character be loved or hated rather than just appreciated for what he (really) is even if he is not like "real" people -- so long as he is not boring?

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My point was in the psychology of it, not literal translations of metaphor and analogy. Superman was also Clark Kent, Spiderman was Peter Parker. It is in this, in their mannerisms, their thoughts, their feelings, their humanity, good or bad, that the connection is made, because that is what people identify with. The supernatural does not do without the element of realism. Even aliens on Star Trek have a decidedly human element. We route for Ripley on Alien because of the infinitesimally unlikely, yet significant (in our minds) possibility of ending up in her position. Even the quirky, unlikeable, or even villainous traits of a character can be identified with. It is only through this identification that the character can be hated or loved. Contest it all you want, but the fact of the matter is, THAT is the truth, it is the realistic elements that that draws us to a character, and that is why Stephen King speaks of the truth in the lie, the Peter Parker in the Spiderman.

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One of my favorite surprises while writing my space opera is when I realize that I can use an experience out of my own life, put it on steroids, and insert it into the story. Happens over and over.

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Gods Ghost wrote:

My point was in the psychology of it, not literal translations of metaphor and analogy. Superman was also Clark Kent, Spiderman was Peter Parker. It is in this, in their mannerisms, their thoughts, their feelings, their humanity, good or bad, that the connection is made, because that is what people identify with. The supernatural does not do without the element of realism. Even aliens on Star Trek have a decidedly human element. We route for Ripley on Alien because of the infinitesimally unlikely, yet significant (in our minds) possibility of ending up in her position. Even the quirky, unlikeable, or even villainous traits of a character can be identified with. It is only through this identification that the character can be hated or loved. Contest it all you want, but the fact of the matter is, THAT is the truth, it is the realistic elements that that draws us to a character, and that is why Stephen King speaks of the truth in the lie, the Peter Parker in the Spiderman.

I would say that the exaggeration brought by comic book characters, in their disguise modes, makes the notion that "real" people are boring more palatable. In a broad sense, the style extant in American literature across all genres that is "naturalism" is a hoax for the agenda-driven author to pretend he is giving the reader "reality" when he is in fact giving no such thing. In contrast, somewhat in reaction to naturalism, neo-romanticism and surrealism, carries with them a style a kind of honesty in purpose and have given to literature real art by embracing idiosyncrasy (or "the best" particularly in romanticism) and a purpose-driven story that is transparent rather than phoney as it is in naturalism.

Moreover, I contest the notion that character "traits that can be identified with" is something important, but rather it is the artful means to transport the reader's mind to understand traits that cannot be identified with, some being that which one is not, is important and makes for  a great story. In the end, even for commercial purposes, hating or loving a character is unimportant, but instead it is in having interesting, purpose-driven characters. It cannot be that a "mother" character who likes to bake cookies and never has an unkind word for anyone has any particular purpose for an author or reader except to operate cheaply and at a low intellectual level through stereotypes.

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Man, youre missing it entirely. What is the difference between the new Spiderman movie "The Amazing Spiderman 2," and the first Spiderman movie with Toby Macguire ? They were both had plenty of CGI, special effects, plenty of Spiderman, Villains, and dialogue, yet one was beloved, while the other scrutinized, hated, and generally trash-talked, even to the point of Sony firing the actor. What is the difference here ? It lies only in the script and the actor. We like Toby and the writing because we BELIEVE that he cares for Aunt May, we BELIEVE that he loves Mary, we BELIEVE that what he says throughout the movie is what he would really say if in that position. We BELIEVE that he is feeling and thinking and acting.

Any trait can be identified with if done properly. Even if you dont have the trait yourself, such as a hatred for Batman (Two-face, for instance), we have met people who have hated, we have met or seen people who have killed on tv. The main reason that people watch videos of people in dire circumstances is often to connect with them or identify with them better. We want to FEEL closer to other people, even if we dont know it. We want to know what they are going through, and to understand them. So, even if we arent the villain, we can, to some extent identify with the villain, as we have all seen or known or heard about them.  The question is, how does a villain act ? What would a villain say ? How would the villain feel ?

This is what you are missing. The SITUATION may not be real, but the FEELINGS are. That is why it is important to "Get into character," to understand the character, to know the character, every character, no matter how small their part. Two Face isnt real, but we know hate, we know anger. We have all experienced it at some point in our lived to varying degrees. Therefore, the hatred, the anger, that Two face operates with in relation to Batman must be real, even if the situation and the people are not. This is the truth in the lie. It must be a truth, or it cannot hold weight. Without this identification to the very real aspects of life, we simply do not care. Have you ever found yourself routing for the Alien in the Alien or AVP movies ? Has a random Xeno ever caught your attention and had you sobbing when it was killed by fire ? No. In fact, there has never been a main character of anything without some amount of anthropomorphization. This is because we MUST identify with it on some level in order to care, and we can only identify with something that has an element of realism, AKA, the truth within a lie.

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Gods Ghost wrote:

Man, youre missing it entirely. What is the difference between the new Spiderman movie "The Amazing Spiderman 2," and the first Spiderman movie with Toby Macguire ? They were both had plenty of CGI, special effects, plenty of Spiderman, Villains, and dialogue, yet one was beloved, while the other scrutinized, hated, and generally trash-talked, even to the point of Sony firing the actor.

This is what you are missing. The SITUATION may not be real, but the FEELINGS are. That is why it is important to "Get into character," to understand the character, to know the character, every character, no matter how small their part. Two Face isnt real, but we know hate, we know anger.

This is because we MUST identify with it on some level in order to care, and we can only identify with something that has an element of realism, AKA, the truth within a lie.

For one thing, you are missing the point that we all ought to be referring to writing as a novelist or short-story crafter or essayist, not a hack movie/TV writer. I'd say exactly what has happened to American literature, to contribute to its downfall as any kind of art form, is that authors are thinking like only so much as contributors to TV/movies and not as the sole creator of a product that is and ought to be always very different from movies. The novel can afford to be more complex and heavily crafted than anything put on film, and the rule of thumb  since novels have been adapted for movies, is the better the book, the worse the movie,  for something, and often  so many things, have to be left out to make a movie. Maybe it is true for the commercial product of the movie is that it is only so much can be devoted to any one character and all which MUST be identified with, but movie studios have had a history in making the flop, probably predicted so much as a flop -- the artful flop having a different approach -- so long as the studio's annual balance sheet is in the positive. Those flops, I guess, are not anything you have seen or care to see, but from time to time the "low-budget" film does make it commercially. Something by David Lynch comes to mind. Tell me with which character in Mulholland Drive is a normal "real" person is supposed to identify?

Second,  "The SITUATION may not be real, but the FEELINGS are . . " is just so much gibberish on the tropic of truth written into fiction, for no one including me has suggested that fiction contains anything that is not really 'not real' in toto, but rather from what truth can an author draw to make fiction, and I am saying that such truth, feelings or situations, is always contextual and not classifiable as something "which can be identified with." What you can identify with may not be something I can identify with, so how is the author wrong in not choosing me as a target audience, except, perhaps, in a bean-counting way?  Sometimes it is that a real person is simply boring and sometimes a real person has a disjunction between events and his feelings that any normal person will not identify with -- by Bret Easton Ellis, for example.

Third, I disagree with the premise: "This is because we MUST identify with it on some level in order to care . . " because "identifying" and "caring" might be subordinate to anything else the author wishes to convey, and I think perfectly rightfully so.   Both in the novel and the movie American Psycho what is it that we're suppose to identify with and/or care?  Victims of senseless murder, in some sense, possibly, but to think that was the point of the story is to completely miss the point of the story.

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Truth is relative.  You can't write what you don't understand. 
Writers are great researchers,  great at putting ourselves in other people's shoes.   We can take our own experience, our own research and describe events we may not have experience.

I don't know what it's like to shoot someone, freak out and then bury the body in the middle of the night.

But I do know that terrifying feeling of being alone and having someone rattle your door locks.  I have experienced a freak out.   I've snuck out late at night to do things I shouldn't (just not body burying). smile    So I research shooting a gun.  I pace off the logistics in my living room.  I might even take a target shooting lesson. 

I so I combine the things I've experienced personally with what I've researched to create a unique experience.  I'll then run that writing by someone who is familiar with the set of circumstances in real life...and take their feedback and edit the scene again for 'realism'.

So I don't know that specific event...but baby I can fake it with the things I do know combined with what I'm willing to learn.

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@ Charles
1: Your inability to understand analogies is not my issue, and it will only hold you back in life. I was presenting a concept that is not exclusive to movies, but was an EXAMPLE that is prevailent throughout all works of fiction. Your ignorance, I am afraid, will not be curable regardless of how much logic I present you with, and it will only work as a detriment to anything you write.

2. It was not gibberish. You have absolutely no understanding of what you speak of. You can identify with many things that you are not in a 3rd party fashion. You can identify with the victim and the villain even if you have been neither, because they are both rife with human feelings and the inner workings of the human mind as well as analogous situations and circumstances to which you can relate.

3. Yes, you identify with through your fears, through your empathy, sympathy, thoughts, and many other, more subtle aspects.

@ TirzahLaughs

YES YES YES. You get it. You understand. That is what it is all about, the truth, a truth, within a lie. Thank you. I appreciate your reply.

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Gods Ghost wrote:

@ Charles
1: Your inability to understand analogies is not my issue,


2. It was not gibberish. You have absolutely no understanding of what you speak of. You can identify with many things that you are not in a 3rd party fashion. You can identify with the victim and the villain even if you have been neither, because they are both rife with human feelings and the inner workings of the human mind as well as analogous situations and circumstances to which you can relate.

3. Yes, you identify with through your fears, through your empathy, sympathy, thoughts, and many other, more subtle aspects.

1: You don't know anything about reading or writing a novel or else you might have used one to show your point as I have done. Your knowledge of comic-book movies is sufficient, though, but completely irrelevant except to show even more clearly that the "real" people of those are always boring and ordinary and nothing of the stuff for a good novel. If it is the objective to write a book about "real" ordinary people to act as props to "identify with" and to love or hate then the objective is to write a boring book about a bunch of ordinary people. The style of naturalism, the alternatives to which I am sure you have no idea exist, does contain a lie about the importance of ordinary people with whom we are supposed to "identify with" by casting ordinary people in falsity of oppression or mental degradation or other such social-justice propaganda in straight drama or in the false universe of magic or spiritualism.

2 & 3: "You identify through your fears, etc."  If you mean to consider of the fictional character as the same as oneself, why don't you direct your response to what I said rather repeating yourself:

I am saying that such truth, feelings or situations, is always contextual and not classifiable as something "which can be identified with." What you can identify with may not be something I can identify with, so how is the author wrong in choosing me and not you as a target audience, except, perhaps, in a bean-counting way?  Sometimes it is that a real person is simply boring and sometimes a real person has a disjunction between events and his feelings over those events that any normal person will not identify with -- see: Bret Easton Ellis, for example.

There are few examples of contemporary and well-known novels not of the naturalist style, even if not completely surrealist or neo-romantic in the avant-garde European way:  Palahniuk and Ellis of the former and Ayn Rand of the latter and those never use characters as props for the reader to "identify with" but also never have boring and uninteresting/pointless characters as do 99% of contemporary novels that you would hold up as example of good writing if you ever read any.

If you have not read a single novel, and I don't mean the movie version, that is not naturalist then you have nothing of interest to say about the inclusion of "truth" in writing, period.

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Dude everything you say is borderline retarded. I dont direct my argument towards your points because you arent making logical arguments. If someone were to tell you that Christmas trees have feelings and then ask you to argue against it, you couldnt, because they arent presenting an argument, but an opinion based on nothing, which is the case we have here. You spout gibberish with absolutely no understanding of the concepte, principles, or psychology that we (the rest of us) are discussing.

On top of that, you have not presented me with logical argumentation against a single one of my arguments. It is the equivelency of telling me that I am wrong because potato, with a few big words that you dont understand thrown in. We are not in the midst of a real argument (hows that for realism ?), but a lopsided conveyance of concept and thought versus an inability to understand that concept and thought. It is not possible to argue away sheer ignorance.

I have read plenty of novels, and have written one myself (a novel, not a novella), and, even if I hadnt, what I am saying is still factual. Complain about how normal is boring all you want (even though the word normal hasnt been said by me a SINGLE time throughout our discussion, which shows how little your comprehension levels are (which, btw is a large part of why this discussion has proceeded thus far. You think I am arguing that normal and boring should be every character's M.O., yet I am saying nothing of the sort. I am speaking about how you connect the abnormal to the normal, and you simply have no grasp whatsoever of what I am saying. I assure you, it is literally as if I am arguing with a potato.)), and enjoy writing about a superhero meteorite in the asteroid belt, which has no feelings or thoughts or characteristics or anthropomorphization whatsoever (which is about the only thing that you could write that doesnt adhere whatsoever to the principles I am conveying. As I said, there has never been a main character without some level of anthropomorphization).

The fact of the matter is that people must identify with something on some level if they are to care about it. Arguing against this is futile, as it is a fact. Period. Period period period. Argue all you want in the most ignorant and unhelpful of fashions, but it will still remain a fact. Argue that red and green are the same color and that dirt is tasier than doughnuts. The facts will remain facts.

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Gods Ghost wrote:

Dude everything you say is .

Yeah, like whatever.