Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread
Spot on. You just named my book for me.
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Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi → Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread
Spot on. You just named my book for me.
A
How often we know not what we wrought or wreaked?
Hey, folks. Don't run away just because we're doing the writing exercise. Come on out of hiding. This doesn't mean you have to stop talking in order to avoid Kenny and I.
I miss you guys. Where'd ya go?
I had some time yesterday, so I managed to burp out another autism story for anyone who has a free moment.
Thanks in advance if you can find some time!
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Posted a review - I'm starting to struggle to choose a favourite one, this last one I think just bumped the previous contender off the podium. But it was like a 0.0001 milli-second kind of race finish!
Really? I thought this one was more clinical and less...I dunno...less personal, perhaps? New Jersey came up with an idea (which I love) that this should be the title of the compilation of short stories. I love the idea of making the focus about jumping him higher, learning more, etc. What do you think?
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Really? I thought this one was more clinical and less...I dunno...less personal, perhaps? New Jersey came up with an idea (which I love) that this should be the title of the compilation of short stories. I love the idea of making the focus about jumping him higher, learning more, etc. What do you think?
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No it's no less personal than any of the others IMO. Reason is you've brilliantly combined your frustration/difficulty/longing with your appreciation to be within an environment where you can drop your guard a little bit. But then again, even when you can drop your guard, you can't because you dropped your guard a little bit, but you still had tabs on Collin, so you're still on duty even though you are where you are.
Collin rushes through the door, a blazing smile on his face. In my mind, Autism hoots, "Friend-play-missed-him-oh-look-a-squirrel!"
^^^^^^^^^ this nearly had me in tears - I don't know if I can explain it in words though. To me, this means Collin made a connection (friend), and a deep emotional one at that (missed him), with someone outside of his immediate family. And we see it for a moment, and then it's gone again (look, a squirrel). But to me, it's not gone like in missing, only hidden, hidden so close but still so far. And to me, in this piece you're trying to bring that emotion/connection to the surface again, but not for Eric or someone else, for you!
So no, it's not clinical. You probably think it is because you're trying to keep a balance and not make it too raw/emotional. You keep that balance (and I don't think it's something that's easy to do)
And yeap, it is a really great title! NJC is good like that. Makes everyone else looks bad though .... *mumbles under breath* :-)
Whooooo-hooooo! Anyways, yeah, we're getting really excited on this side of earth!
Your wine will fly from Perth - Auckland - San Francisco - Seattle.
And then soon after it will fly: Bellingham - Toledo.
I shall have well-travelled wine and think of thee... (glug) Shan't waste a drop, ere the curse shall fall upon me! (In Purgatory, it is said that all people are held upside down in a barrel filled with all the wasted spirits that they failed to consume during life. If they drown in the barrel, then they can't go to heaven)
I shall not drown!
If I had known you 16 years ago, I would've asked you to do ALL the toasts at my wedding!
Despite being a female, one of my friends asked me to be the best 'man' at his wedding. I got to do the toast and I must say, it was brilliant. Instead of gushing about the couple, I compared him to the prince in a fairy tale, searching far and wide for the damsel of his dreams. He fought his personal demons and triumphed, scaling the troubled waters as he waited for her to appear. I was his loyal sidekick back then, councilling him that he would find her but only needed to be patient. What I should have said (back then) was, "Chill out. She's not legal yet."
(remembers the moment with a satisfied smile) I brought down the house.
I've got a new short on the site called 'Social Stories'. Two pages, max. Is anyone free to review or browse?
Janet,
I renamed and reposted the story under Aut-ku. I've consolidated using your changes as a guide. Nearly everything included. THANKS!
Amy, I will get to your story this evening, I promise! I should have gotten to it testerday, bu ... I'll explain later.
Amy, have a look at the character who is speaking in data balloons. I don't mean to make light of a serious matter, but what do you think of him? (If you hadn't noticed, the authors specialize in going over the top often without ever going off the deep end.)
Is there a specific character speaking in data balloons or is this the name of the cartoon? As to the cartoon strip, it is very tongue-in-cheek, I like the art, and the cartoonist gets the point across without ever offending (that I've seen) I think I've only read maybe 4-5 postings so far as you've recommended them. Each time, I enjoy what I see. Does that answer your question?
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Kohlberg said that people only can comprehend the thinking of one level above their functioning level. He also mentioned that people can revert (Ex: the horrors of WW2 Nazi Germany where good people did horrible things to avoid punishment) In my opinion, when you say, "Isn't the very point of civilization to train us to emulate this and eventually assume it?", you are self-contradicting your own reasoning. ("I can't imagine finding such people in one town, much less one room.") Kohlberg recognized that such idealism is rare and these people end up being leaders if they aren't burned at the stake.
Moral development and development of techne are different, and don't always go together. The National Socialists completely perverted their society's moral development, but pointed to both techne and the fine arts of their ancestors to prove how 'advanced' their culture was. 'Advanced' and 'civilized' aren't the same.
I suspect that lots of people in civilized societies are at the upper levels, at least most of the time. But the people who can bring the advances about are rarer. Techne is different. You can get away from barbarianism in three generations if the surrounding pressures are right: if people are more likely to survive if they form a cooperating community and profit more from peaceful trade with other communities than from looting them. It's rare but possible. But developing techne--the useful arts and the knowledge that backs them--is the work of hundreds of generations, and can be lost if people stop doing it. Do you know how many people's entire professional skillsets are needed to make a cellular telephone? I sat down once and came up with twenty-odd, and I suspect the number is closer to a hundred. And that didn't count the petroleum drillers and their geologists, or the people who make the drilling equipment, the people who make the chip-manufacture equipment, the people who mine copper and refine it ... you get the idea.
I see children being taught to invent their own ways to add under Common Core, with the tried-and-true method derided as 'the granny method', and I see a generation of children taught that they can, on their own, replace the work of five hundred years (since arabic numerals became common). I compare this with Captain Kangeroo and the respect taught for 'Grandfather Clock', and I see teachers teaching a civilization to cast itself adrift and drown.
Such children will not have the skills needed to make the very computers on which they are being taught to depend.
There is a specific character speaking in the data balloons--the guy in the giant mecha suit. His name is Count Walkenstorfer, and he's one more variety of Spark (Mad Scientist) in that world. No, the cartoon's name is Girl Genius, and there is a very long-running story arc.
More precisely, the 'data balloons' for speech are used when the speaker is a machine, is embodied in a machine, or is speaking through a machine.
Oh, and I got the Spark's name wrong. It's Valkerstorfer.
Janet,
I renamed and reposted the story under Aut-ku. I've consolidated using your changes as a guide. Nearly everything included. THANKS!
*blushes and drills big toe into sand*
I love make-up words as much as I love road-trips! (that's lots BTW) And it was only a pleasure - your Collin stories are only a pleasure to read!
Amy, have a look at the character who is speaking in data balloons. I don't mean to make light of a serious matter, but what do you think of him? (If you hadn't noticed, the authors specialize in going over the top often without ever going off the deep end.)
I like njc's cartoons. Somehow, there's a cartoon he can use for every situation he needs a cartoon for too!
Re this one, I learn something every day (or at my age, sometimes are reminded of a lesson I've learned previously and should've remembered LOL). I think that's a good thing. Once you stop learning, you've either stopped breathing or you think you know it all. Both are equally bad. IMO
JR
I like njc's cartoons. Somehow, there's a cartoon he can use for every situation he needs a cartoon for too!
Not mine, no! I'm just a fan. But the Foglios have covered so much in their story that you are sure to find something. Candied fish, for instance. Lab Full of Exploding Things #5. The Island of the Monkey Girls. An aperatif made from hedgehogs and toothpaste, a green-haired warrior princess who proclaims herself `Daughter of Chump` and, of course, the Mad Social Scientist.
By the way, if you read that second sequence, you might have noticed the Spark named van Reijn. His approximate dates would have matched a famous van Reijn from our version of history.
Amy, I'm still trying to do something decent with Erevain. I hope that the effort I'm putting in won't be another false start.
There are some other pulls on my time as well. Nothing as severe as what you have every single day.
Erndog,
If I were in charge of that school, the kids teasing Alex would have gotten the same punishment he did. They attacked a classmate's weakness, not once, but continually. That is the sort of barbaric behavior that needs to be civilized out of us.
A fight between two more or less equal kids is tolerable. A kid fighting back against a bully is noble (and our educational establishment is determined to punish it because they want a monopoly on 'treating' the bully). But an attack against a specific weakness is only legitimate in war.
Our schools protect the aggressor and punish the defender, teaching kids that they need Authority for protection.
All I know is that I bet those kids playing keep-away with Erndog's son never did that again. My situation with Collin was different since his language is limited, so my teaching had to be very streamlined and blunt. I believe Alex is verbal. Social stories would still work with him, though. A tool is a tool.
So far, we have been lucky. Collin's class thinks he is fun and love his movie quotes. I'm hoping these kids will stick with him through the teenage years. We'll see. Kids change when they grow up. I might end up having a hat incident. When that comes, we'll deal with it. There is a boy in Collin's special ed who was pointing his finger at people and making shooting noises. I got called from the principle as he worried that my son might feel threatened. I thanked him for informing me and told him I didn't care. (You have to know the little boy and you'd be as unconcerned as I was). They were making a mountain out of a molehill.
I'm not sure where I'm going with these short stories. It seems that I'm trying to teach other parents as well as celebrate my son. He doesn't have the words, so I'm his translator. We'll see how it pans out.
Oh, my four year-old peed in the potty yesterday. We dropped everything and took him swimming at the local state lodge pool. Halle-fricking-lujah!
One less thing on the plate!
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I'm not sure where I'm going with these short stories. It seems that I'm trying to teach other parents as well as celebrate my son. He doesn't have the words, so I'm his translator. We'll see how it pans out.
Other parents, or other people?
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