Re: What happened?
If I point out to someone one time that they need to make sure quotation marks are both before and after their dialogue, I don't feel it necessary to highlight it every time in the remainder of the chapter. If I point out they are constantly changing tenses, then any writer who is serious about their work will go through the entire chapter and make necessary changes. I don't see the need to keep pointing it out. Therefore, your 5,000-word chapter with 25 paragraphs may only be highlighted by me in the first 10 paragraphs if you repeat your mistakes throughout
... but why would you expect the writer to make all the effort? Shouldn’t you as the reviewer be willing to spend three hours fixing poor craft and lazy self-editing? How dare you!!