Topic: How many secondary characters should I name?

My current WIP is set in Rome, and most of the characters are Italian. My major characters have both first and last names (e.g., Gregorio Romano). Since many Italian names are rather complex for English speakers, I'm trying to limit the total number of foreign names. As a result, I'm wondering what to do about secondary characters. Should I give them names, or try to refer to them by just their role or title (e.g., medical examiner, director general)? For example, the medical examiner will give a verbal briefing of an autopsy, then disappear for at least several chapters, if not permanently. I had a senior constable in one scene whom I referred to solely as senior constable. However, I also had a nameless chief inspector but was eventually convinced by a reviewer to give him at least a last name. Referring to him as chief inspector over and over became too much.

Thoughts?
Dirk

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Re: How many secondary characters should I name?

Strictly from personal preference, I would say if they only show up once there is really no need to name them if they have a sufficient title to identify them. If they have a recurring role then they probably should have a name, the shorter the better, which would then remain consistent throughout. For me, too many names, especially when bunched, clutter the story so much as to confuse or at least slow down the reader. Not generally a good idea. Just my opinion of course for what it's worth. Take care. Vern

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Re: How many secondary characters should I name?

I just finished writing the part for the medical examiner. There are seven references to her, but she's in a room where meeting participants did a round of introductions. I didn't actually write any introductions (too boring); I just said they happened. I think that means she needs a name like everyone else. The director general's there too.

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Re: How many secondary characters should I name?

One of my criteria is 'associate the reader in.' If a character is not just stage dressing, he or she should have a name. People in real life have names. Real Life Cop shows name people. I would name them, but if they are minor, not dwell on them.

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