Re: How to Breathe Underwater (trilogy: Lessons in Skills for Life)
No major quibbles. Details don't override the pace. Of course you can thin / make precision-based finesse on future passes. But nothing felt brushed over - nothing screamed to me "missed opportunity".
Gosh what a kind review K, thank you very much. I'm trying not to overwrite any of these chapters, but I had to change the voice here or it wouldn't work.
Do you feel that it works as an early tempter for the other side of the world? It isn't planned to appear until the 2nd third of the book now, so should I add another tempter somewhere in between the chapters about Izzy's learning curve?