Topic: WIP The Princess & the Offworlder

There is a 3rd M/C in the book, a shadowy figure, and I wrote about her at the end of the book.  John Hamler made the excellent suggestion that I should have chapters on her throughout the book.  I just finished doing that, and realized that renumbering the chapters would be a pain.  There will be V.2 chapters which include her--they will actually be two separate chapters in one, to avoid the chore of renumbering.  If you read V.2 of these chapters, and have already read V.1, just skip to the new stuff.  This will save you a lot of work and I will  really appreciate it.  For new readers, read V.2.

The Chapters affected:  4, 6, 8, 18, 34.  Ch. 44 will be renamed.

I hope you enjoy the new character.

Love, Rhia

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Re: WIP The Princess & the Offworlder

What up, Rhia? It scares me when you take my suggestions. I'm not sure if I'm comfortable being any kind of influential! Of course, I still think it's a decent idea. Lemme know when the shadowy new stuff is ready. When I find the time I'd like to maybe skim through the entire novel again, see how it all shakes out.

Cheers

John

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Re: WIP The Princess & the Offworlder

Don't wory, John.  I only take your good suggestions.  (lol)  I'm going to be doing reviews for a while, to catch up with that, and earn enough points for these new chapters.  And I appreciate you rereading the whole book, once it's completely posted.  Love, Rhia.

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