Being at Sixes and Sevens

I got some great criticism of Chapter Six of Rhiannon the Nude:  New Fairy.  I was told the chapter was too long.  So naturally when I went to re write it, it became even bigger.  So it is now Chapter Six and Seven.  For those who have already read Chapter Six--you may have to re-read it before you read Chapter Seven.  What can I say?  I'm only elfin.