Topic: Cat screaming.

How would you write about a cats terrified scream. Can I use the word, "scream?" Is it gnarl whine or a screech?

Thanks

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d a reynolds wrote:

How would you write about a cats terrified scream. Can I use the word, "scream?" Is it gnarl whine or a screech?

by "scream" do you mean a short, sharp sound because its tail has been stepped on? "scream" or "screech" is good. Certainly not "gnarl" or "whine"
or do you mean that long, plaintive sound in the night? "howl" is good even if usually meant for dogs and applies for different reasons than for dogs. Someone who has heard the sound of a cat howling, knows exactly what it is, if not always what it means. It is a groan but has a sound from anger rather than a sound from pain.

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In this case a cat is in bag being swung from a rope. It's terrified, going berserk in the bag. Screech might work though.

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KHippolite wrote:

A cat in a bag being swung around isn't howling... it's yelping (fright) or snarling, spitting, and hissing (anger)

I'd still say 'screech' or 'scream' although I have never heard the sound of a cat being tortured so I can't relate.  I doubt it would be the howling I spoke of.  I say no to 'hissing' and 'spitting'

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Scream, screech, yowl, and show the the jerk swinging the bag so I can kill him/her.

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I think the terms are 'caterwauling' and Katzenjammer.

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Shrieking works too.

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MeowMF works for me. Take care. Vern

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Lol, Vern. Thanks all. Screeching might work. Caterwauling, which I'd heard of, is actually the correct term, however I asked five people and they'd never heard of it.

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They've never read Old Possum, or seen the musical Cats?  Of the Jellicles: "And pleasant to hear when they ... caterwaul."

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njc wrote:

I think the terms are 'caterwauling' and Katzenjammer.

I think that is 'howling' but has a different sound related to their mating ritual (from the female involved) rather than the howling that comes from territorial defense.

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d a reynolds wrote:

Lol, Vern. Thanks all. Screeching might work. Caterwauling, which I'd heard of, is actually the correct term, however I asked five people and they'd never heard of it.

'Caterwauling' is the wrong choice because it a howling sound from a female cat in heat, and also it is likely a typical (moron) reader won't know that, and you've put another word out there (with the help of a moron publishing editor) that does not mean what it really means.

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Thanks all, I think 'screeching in terror,' will be the one I use but thanks all and Janet's shrieking came close too.

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I think Janet Taylor-Perry is closet with 'yowl'.

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Charles_F_Bell wrote:

'Caterwauling' is the wrong choice because it a howling sound from a female cat in heat, and also it is likely a typical (moron) reader won't know that, and you've put another word out there (with the help of a moron publishing editor) that does not mean what it really means.

You're kind of a dick....

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d a reynolds wrote:

How would you write about a cats terrified scream. Can I use the word, "scream?" Is it gnarl whine or a screech?

Thanks

It could be interesting to use an unexpected word. I don't know what word, but "gnarl" rather than "scream" would be surprising. I'm not saying that's good or bad: just saying it could create a more noticeable sound than "scream," which is more what one expects to hear from a terrified cat. Sometimes the right choice is the one that doesn't quite fit. Perhaps not for this scene, though. smile

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I owe many interesting corners of my vocabulary to writers better educated and more literate than I.  I'm not sure about limiting `caterwauling` to the mating call, but I'm reluctant to assume that a reader doesn't know a word, especially when it is an especially suitable word.

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Agreed, NJC, I also have built my vocabulary the same way.  Reading Stephen King, for instance, sent me to the dictionary more than once but I'm grateful for it.

  As for cats - hmm, I bet if you look up "Cats Having Sex", you will get an idea of how they would scream.  You don't have to watch, just listen - it might give you the effect you're looking for in your writing.  Good luck!

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Bevin Wallace wrote:
Charles_F_Bell wrote:

'Caterwauling' is the wrong choice because it a howling sound from a female cat in heat, and also it is likely a typical (moron) reader won't know that, and you've put another word out there (with the help of a moron publishing editor) that does not mean what it really means.

You're kind of a dick....

Which kind is that?

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njc wrote:

I owe many interesting corners of my vocabulary to writers better educated and more literate than I.  I'm not sure about limiting `caterwauling` to the mating call, but I'm reluctant to assume that a reader doesn't know a word, especially when it is an especially suitable word.

And my point would be if the author uses the word "whistle" for the concept "laugh," and if the poor reader looks up "whistle" he will find a completely different concept than what the author intended in "laugh."  Even worse,  is the subjectivist author who in Clinton-esque fashion defends his incorrect use of "whistle" with the claim: It all depends on what "whistle" is. Your "whistle" might different than mine. .  This is cultural nihilism of the order that severely afflicts Western civilization from time to time and the trickle-down effect into politics and science is never good and usually signals collapse. [Weimar -> Nazi Germany]

"Caterwauling" is a combination of noises surrounding the mating of cats. However, isolating the sounds from males from that of females, the males call out the same sounds as their howling in territorial defense, in a sense that is what they are doing here, but the females' sounds are unique and hard to compare to anything else.  It is fair to call the whole mess of sounds is "caterwauling" and is completely different from the sound of a single cat in distress which the original poster requested.

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Not sure that 'caterwauling' is quite so specific, but if the cat is terrified and not just angry, it's probably not the word.

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I guess that 'screaming' is correct

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mqWqrmsS-uU

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Dill Carver wrote:

I guess that 'screaming' is correct

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mqWqrmsS-uU

You can detect some of the female sounds of the caterwauling in there, and considering the male cat has barbs on his thingy, it's not hard to understand why.

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Lol, Charles, you weren't wrong. They can make creepy sounds.

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That poor kitty! She looks terrified. sad