Re: Punctuation
. I wasn't trying to shame you with my family anecdotes yesterday.
I was just sharing some of what went into the read for me beyond a sense of the structure.
I got that, I totally got it. In return I was being flippant; totally non-serious about something that is. Family.
You know me, foot often in my mouth. Ever the oaf:)
Anyway, back to Mars. Discussing it with a Sci-Fi fanboy colleague, he said that I should listen to the audiobook rather than read the pulp. He said that if I read the text I'll hear Mark Watney talking to me in, my voice. What I need to do, he says, is to hear Mark Watney talk to me in his voice.
I think he might have something. On Amazon it allows a listen to a sample of the audio-book. I tried it and yes, the log thing sounds more plausible or natural when spoken. It is a spoken log rather than a written log after all. The 'only-person' POV and all that.
Sorry for insulting the Waltons too! I couldn't help it. I actually love that show; especially the talking horse.