Topic: Dynamic Dialogue Course

Hello everyone. I'm currently offering a course in creating Dynamic Dialogue. I'd love if you'd consider joining!  Here's the information:

How do I create dynamic dialogue? How can I identify what I’m doing wrong? Why doesn't my dialogue read like natural speech? If you have asked yourself any of these questions, this course is for you.

LAMackey, a founding member of TheNextBigWriter.com is offering a six-week introductory dialogue course for beginner writers. As a professional video producer, she has been writing and editing commercially dynamic dialogue for television and video over twenty years. Drawing from this experience, and using the posting, editing, and communication tools on TheNextBigWriter, she has created a class that will help anyone write dialogue like a pro.

Some of the basic topics covered in this class include:
•    What is Dialogue?  The Dialogue Mantra 
•    Simple Rules of Punctuation.
•    Dialogue Tags & Character Movement: types & roles.
•    Effective & Ineffective Dialogue
•    Making Dialogue Believable & Expressing Character
•    Final Reviews & Group Analysis

Who would take this class:
Writers who are struggling with creating dynamic dialogue and who want to learn the basics.
Requirements:
•    You must have a completed dialogue driven scene between 200-1000 words prior to the start of class (novel excerpts are fine). You must be the sole author of this writing.
•    You will be required to create and post weekly samples of your writing.
By the end of this class:
•    You will have attained the skills to create dynamic & believable dialogue.
•    You will have written or edited a previously created piece that applies the principles learned in the class.
Class Structure
Assignments will be posted twice a week for six weeks. They will consists of a written lesson, a homework lesson, and a group review session. Class interaction will also be part of the experience. Assignments will be posted using the site's posting system or in the forum. Conversation and feedback will be provided in the class forum or in the reply comments to posted documents.
Class Cost
There is a fee of $5.00 USD to take the class. Both Premium Members and Basic Members can take the class although Premium Members will have a few more tools to use, such as in-line reviews. All new members of TheNextBigWriter are given 7 free days of Writing Membership after which they can decide to remain a Writing and pay the membership fee or downgrade to a free Basic account.

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I didn't see in your posting when the class begins.

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LAMackey wrote:

LAMackey, a founding member of TheNextBigWriter.com .

Probably nothing to do with your credentials, but how can you be a "founding member" when you only joined in September according to your profile? Take care. Vern

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vern wrote:
LAMackey wrote:

LAMackey, a founding member of TheNextBigWriter.com .

Probably nothing to do with your credentials, but how can you be a "founding member" when you only joined in September according to your profile? Take care. Vern

Because Sol can easily perform miracles.

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njc wrote:

I didn't see in your posting when the class begins.

The course runs Sept. 21--Nov. 2

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LAMackey wrote:
vern wrote:
LAMackey wrote:

LAMackey, a founding member of TheNextBigWriter.com .

Probably nothing to do with your credentials, but how can you be a "founding member" when you only joined in September according to your profile? Take care. Vern

Because Sol can easily perform miracles.

Verryy interrestinnng. Hmm... maybe you can get him to conjure up a winning lottery numbers combination, worth about 185 million at present for Powerball. Take care. Vern

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I'll take a winning lotto number too!

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vern wrote:
LAMackey wrote:

LAMackey, a founding member of TheNextBigWriter.com .

Probably nothing to do with your credentials, but how can you be a "founding member" when you only joined in September according to your profile? Take care. Vern

I believe this person can be a founding member if he/she has been a member for some time by another name, and came over with the rest of us from the old site. The LAMackey account may be new, but the person has been around for a while. By the way, does anyone remember who used that drawing as their personal picture when we moved?  JP roll

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Detective Lundstrom is on the case!

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j p lundstrom wrote:
vern wrote:
LAMackey wrote:

LAMackey, a founding member of TheNextBigWriter.com .

Probably nothing to do with your credentials, but how can you be a "founding member" when you only joined in September according to your profile? Take care. Vern

I believe this person can be a founding member if he/she has been a member for some time by another name, and came over with the rest of us from the old site. The LAMackey account may be new, but the person has been around for a while. By the way, does anyone remember who used that drawing as their personal picture when we moved?  JP roll

If they were a founding member under any circumstance, then it should say so on their profile whether they are using a different name or not and of course they could also say they changed their name which would probably gain more attention from those who knew them by another name. And their profile should also list their membership date as the previous earlier one, not this month. But then who's counting other than me; I see things which don't look kosher, I get curious - good thing I'm not a cat. No big deal other than inquiring minds want to know. Take care. Vern

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What's far more important is whether the instructor has the credentials to teach.  Who cares whether someone is listed as a founding member or not?  What they have to offer is far more important.

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Randall Krzak wrote:

What's far more important is whether the instructor has the credentials to teach.  Who cares whether someone is listed as a founding member or not?  What they have to offer is far more important.

And you might note I said as much in my opening statement of "Probably nothing to do with your credentials ..." but obviously you didn't note that. However, since you brought it up, one might also question the validity of those credentials if such an unimportant fact is misrepresented. And as I also stated, it's no big deal to me. Of course it might be to someone interested in such course, but then again, maybe not. But who cares? Take care. Vern

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Yes, I read what you originally said.  If it's no big deal then why raise it in the first place?

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Randall Krzak wrote:

Yes, I read what you originally said.  If it's no big deal then why raise it in the first place?

If you read what I said you would know that "inquiring minds want to know." I happen to be in that category; if you're not, then that also is no big deal. Take care. Vern

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It's tough being a gadfly, isn't it, Vern?
But to get back to the original thread: A lot of our other instructors have posted their photo along with their credentials, which goes a long way toward instilling confidence. Of course, they were asking for a lot more than five bucks for enrollment.
As I recall, Sol himself called for members who felt they had something to share with others. LAMackey bit the bullet and stepped up to the plate. (Yes, I did that mixed-metaphor thing on purpose.) Maybe this was the solution for maintaining a member's anonymity while making help available to all.
Maybe, in future, all member-instructors can have a pretend name and be identified as member instructors. Then those who want to learn can accept their help without niggling concerns about "credentials."
What do you think?  JP

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In my opinion Vern was right to question the membership credential. I’ve been in and around tNBW since 2006 and am not familiar with ‘LAMackey’

I too was interested if this was a tNBW old timer returned to the site under a new alias?

We live in a world where the corporate and governmental standard business ethic has become ‘the sale comes first and truth comes second’. No wonder that spam and scam are so prevalent. We also know there a plenty of substandard and charlatan products and services offered to amateur creative writing students.

LAMackey is asking us for a monetary investment to enrol into this course and we are all entitled to expect a legitimate product, quality and value for money.

Please don’t misunderstand or misconstrue my sentiment here; I am not for a moment suggesting that  LAMackey’s course is not a fine, upstanding and legitimate product.

However, in-line with Vern’s thought process I too wondered about the ‘founding member’ credential. It is after all promoted as a sales device, a marketing credential; to establish a substantial tie-in with the tNBW site that reassures the tNBW buyer. If true it lends a degree of legitimacy to the product whereas if the introductory credential is a false or untrue claim, how do you qualify anything else about the product?

I know that all Americans over fifty reckon they were at Woodstock, but in my opinion you cannot wear the medal if you didn’t serve in the campaign.

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j p lundstrom wrote:

..... Then those who want to learn can accept their help without niggling concerns about "credentials."
What do you think?  JP

Wow. you should buy stuff from me. For I am indeed the Certified King of all you don't know and all my products are solid gold and packed with protein (no trans fat, MSG or sugar - honest). Oh, yeah and I was at Woodstock, so you can add my experience of that to the value of my product. wink

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I can verify that LAMackey is a second account for someone who is a founding member.

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Then I'm thinking crazeesharon or Janet Taylor-Perry

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SolN wrote:

I can verify that LAMackey is a second account for someone who is a founding member.

Glad you cleared that up. In that case should she not be listed as a founding member on her profile? Of course if she had been, we wouldn't have had all this fun dialogue. Take care. Vern

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j p lundstrom wrote:

It's tough being a gadfly, isn't it, Vern?
  JP

No, not really. If something doesn't appear kosher, I will question it; no bother at all. Sol verified LA as a founding member under a different name, but that after-the-fact verification wouldn't have been necessary if she had been listed as a founding member on her profile regardless of what name it was under. Pretty simple solution for any future claimants don't you think? Take care. Vern