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So here I am, never fully gone, as the few who have received reviews can attest.

I have, somewhere, a couple of chapters I might add to Book Two, but my main thinking, these last couple of months, has been large-scale structure, Books One, Two, and Beyond.  I've spent the last few days wrangling with the over-extended Erevain sequnce, and I think I have a solution, though I want to work out some other Book One things before I start writing and posting.

What do my readers (if any I have left) prefer?

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What are you considering, structure-wise?

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Multi-volume, multi-section structure.  The first two sections get Merran's family reunited, but reveal problems brewing in the wider world(s) that her parents tried to leave behind.  Shogran is only a symptom.  So the second and third part will take a long time to map out.  The first two parts have to be worked out sooner, but I can put books one and two in some kind of order, and map out book 3 and the second section while I do it.

Section 3 has the tentative title Apostles of Ruin, just to give a sense of where I hope to go.  (I have possible volume titles.)

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While I wrangle with the bigger questions, I'm working on a backstory bio for Kirsey.  Part one isn't too hard.  Part two will be a bit harder.  Part three might be a substantial challenge

Estimate 20,000 to 40,000 words.

If it works out I may do more of them.  Shogran will be a challenge.

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I'm a big fan of self-contained sub-stories contributing to a greater story. Gives the reader less to commit on initially. Having to commit to a lot of reading is a downer for me, and what keeps me from reading Patrick Brown-- the knowledge that I have a bazillion books to read before I get any satisfaction

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Kdot wrote:

I'm a big fan of self-contained sub-stories contributing to a greater story. Gives the reader less to commit on initially. Having to commit to a lot of reading is a downer for me, and what keeps me from reading Patrick Brown-- the knowledge that I have a bazillion books to read before I get any satisfaction

That actually makes sense Kdot. One of the best novel series I have seen was the Malazan books, yes Erikson is a serial killer worse then R.R. Martin, but every little story had a purpose.

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Still working on the backstory.  I've got a rough but workable outline for part 2, and a rougher one for part 1.  Part 1: Kirsey's young childhood and his heritage.  Part 2: Kirsey taken away to be trained at the Academy.  Part 3: the problems of a young man too good for some Masters and too young (and inventive) for others.  Part 4: Finding a place in the Academy, and losing it.

Part 2 looks like it might run 3,000 words, and Part 1 a bit shorter.  Parts 3 and 4 will probably be similar, so we're talking about a novelette.  But my numbers may be off.

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Oh, I owe reviews.  My computer is getting the Dreaded Windoze Upgrade.  I'm not sure how long it will take me to get everything else working again.  ((insert three lines of imaginative imprecation and blistering, intemperate invective, garnish liberally with fuming anhydrous frustration))

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Time for a hard backup, if you haven't already.

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I made two, before the Winpocalypse.

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Still working, slowly, on scene outlines for part two.  But some big-issue answers for part 3 came to me as I was sleeping off a bug of some sort, and I've got parts of a top-level outline for part 3.  I don't know yet just how much is going in part 4, and whether there will be a part five, or it will all go into part four.

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My experience, having posted book 4 of 12 is that readers love longer series as long as each release carries weight. One of the biggest complaints about [G u i l d C o d e x] is NOT that there are 3 "added" books (and a spinoff series) but that book 5 of all that didn't have as much development. It means book 5 would be considered as great if it move things along farther/

Therefore, all the part 5... but keep swinging for the fences

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These parts all belong to one book, and probably one of moderate size.  A prequel of sorts, it traces the youth of the super-sorcerer Kirsey.  Maybe as far as taking up with the wolves, maybe not.  I'll see how many I can construct.  Actually, when I get to the actual text I'd love you to review it.  At which time you can point to placed to recip.

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I've got outline material for about two thirds of Prelude to SP: Kirsey.  I found myself filling in a later chapter (or maybe several) dealing with Caneth, Melayne, and friends leaving the Academy.  It has a certain slapstick quality and I'm wrassling it into a second draft.  Again beginning in the (late) middle, I hope to have it up in 60 hours.  It's also the beginning of the end for Kirsey's career at the Academy.

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in formal releases, what book do you currently see emerging first?

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Probably the Prelude(s).  I have an idea of what I want the covers to look like, and I'll probably have to spend on some custom work.

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I am in the doldrums creatively.

Here's a video on creativity be John Cleese: https://m.youtube.com/watch?feature=you … b5oIIPO62g .  He states that we need a mentally playful mood, and names some things that block it.  Looking at the walls of my apartment, at i complete projects, and at tasks that need to be done is doing it to me.  I'm trying to make progress, even small progress, on the various tasks and projects, but that is only part if the problem.

Some of you know that my social needs are low, but not zero.  Another writer, successful and published, says that she needs to see a few strangers a day, shopping, dining out, etc.  And that is what is denied me.

I'm hoping that we get at-home tests for both antibodies and infection, produced affordably in billion-a-day numbers.  That's what it will take to peel back the restrictions.  It looks like the first ones are about two weeks away, but the quantity and price will make it take longer.

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I'm in a similar bind. Since I have a long commute, I've trained myself into writing during transit. With no commute, I find it hard to maintain the discipline in what had become automatic. I was at about 750words per day and that's been lost for the past week or so.

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Amateurs. I'm always in the doldrums. Add four tax returns (mine and family) and I'll be out of commission for a month.

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I haven't been getting many reviews done, but I've got one started and another on the list.  However, right now, I've been asked to work on something else.  That will have me tied up through mid-week, or maybe all of it.

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My work has me learning new computer programs and new Covid19 procedures. This keeps me busy well into the evening. So, I’ve started doing reviews on my lunch break through my phone. It’s irritating because I’m unable to do In-Line reviews.

On another subject, I’ve become bored with medieval-inspired fantasy and begun to think about doing fantasy anchored in a later time; perhaps Golden Age Persia. Are there any examples of this in published works you’re aware of?

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Look at Alma T.C. Boykin's Merchant series, Merchant and Magic, etc.  They're Kindle-only for now, not high adventure but exploring a magical world in a different Medieval setting modeled loosely on the Hanseatic League.  She's got her own pantheon and in some of the later books the gods have had enough and step in.  Nobody wants to see that again.

The series is stalled right now because one of her other series has become popular, and needs far less research.  But it shows a different approach.

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To those waiting on reviews: I'm tied up into and maybe through Tuesday.  I'll get back to you then.

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New post forthcoming?

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Not for a while, I'm afraid.  I'm in reactive mode.