Looking for reviewers of poetry

Hii,
I been looking for reviewers of poetry and feedbacks to refine my work, Dirk sir suggested I post a note about it here. The poem is called 'Bird', It reflects an internal battle with identity, guilt, and freedom. It tells about the haunting voices and shadows, questioning self-loathing, forgiveness, and the true meaning of freedom. Through raw emotion and vivid imagery, it explores the conflict of reconciling with inner demons and longing for peace. The speaker feels trapped by past traumas, societal expectations, and their own thoughts, torn between self-loathing and a desire for forgiveness they feel they don’t deserve. They seek a reason for their emotions, something to blame, and a way to escape it all.