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Chapter ten changes are up (Campagna meets Connor). Not enough changes to be worth annoying people for a fresh review. The most important thing is that the Antichrist is at least half human. That's one of the ways the cops will distinguish him from mere demons. If you douse a demon with holy water, he dissolves like the chief exorcist did in chapter eleven. I'm going to include toy water blasters among the weapons, filled with holy water. :-)
Next, a very quick polish of chapters eleven and thirteen, then I need to start plotting new stuff. It occurred to me that I could include another murder in this act, if I want to. Chapter twelve will include Campagna investigating Connor's early life, the first meeting of the task force hunting the Antichrist, and the evaluation of evidence from the historical murders.
Does it matter that the only detectives on the task force are Campagna and De Rosa? The rest are beat cops from the scenes at the basilica and the villa, chosen because they already know about the crucifixion. Mostly constables. Since this is no longer a conventional investigation with lots of clues and sleuthing, I figured the beat cops would be good for chase scenes, no-knock searches, and shootouts.
80% of the way through God Emperor of Dune.
I'm considering rereading the Foundation series after I'm done with Dune. It's been forever since I read those.
I highly recommend the Heechee Saga if you've never read it. I've read it about three times. I think it's five books.
That was the first book I liked in my original pass through the series.
Yep I suffered through books 1 and 2 to reach a good part. Something I'd never do nowadays haha
I study the writing technique from these masters, even if the story is boring.
And Leto is history. I think I'm going to take a breather from Dune and skip to the Foundation series.
I decided to keep reading until the end of the Dune series timeline, including the final two books written by BH/KA. I recall not particularly liking their two books, but I'm enjoying Heretics of Dune more than I remember. I also liked Chapterhouse on past reads. 3.75 books to go. Also good progress on plotting the investigation of Connor's history by Inspector Campana. I originally thought I would spread it out over many chapters, but I'm now wondering if I should roll most of it into one focused chapter, albeit with a lot of minor scenes as Campana bounces from location to location in her search, something like a Law & Order episode.
I need a name for the team that Campagna and De Rosa are leading. I threw in a dedicated forensics unit to scrape demons off the pavement. I'm considering the Alpha-Omega unit.
Milano, Marino, Moretti, Michel(Angelo), Maria. Time to update my names bible before I use any more names with an M. And I've lost count of the number of names I have that end in o.
I have a high incident rate of female names ending in -a but I don't fight it. Most readers don't spot that
Just finished Heretics of Dune. Pretty good overall. Three books to go, then It's off to the Foundation series. Haven't read that in decades, and I'm pretty sure I only read the original trilogy, not the whole series. When I browse suggested books on Kindle, I realize I've already read many of the classic sci-fi novels from my teens. For the most part, I only remember the titles.
Isaac Asimov was once asked what he would do if he was told he only had a year to live. His answer: write faster! :-)
Just finished watching The Forest on Netflix, a six-part French miniseries. I wouldn't have watched it if I'd known it involved rape and murder of teenage girls (not shown), but I forced myself to finish it. What a great mystery story. There were so many secrets hidden by townsfolk that kept the viewer guessing who did what to whom. The ending was excellent. And the soundtrack added to the tension throughout. It'll be interesting to see if the police case in my second act can come close to something that well-wrtten. Technically, I'm going for something more like Angels & Demons, so it doesn't need to be as intricate a web as the miniseries.
A minor addition, "teacher" can be made to pass the uniqueness rest.
Imagine your 5-yr-old running in the door:
>Mom! Dad! We caught a bug today and Teacher let us keep it
(Later same book, talking to a friend)
Dad: Our son's teacher gave him a bug.
Here, Dad cannot use capital because uniqueness lost
Another example, the Lone Ranger & Tonto walk up to two villains.
Villian: Hey lawman (Addressing Lone ranger as one lawman among many)
vs
Villain: Hey Lawman (Using a common term that everyone in the scene understands who it is)
In this above case, I'll take either as long as it's consistent that no other good guy is also Lawman
I rediscovered in Chapterhouse that Frank Herbert used the Jews as a secret society that had survived the millennia since Old Earth. I had planned to rewrite Galaxy Tales to project Anglicans forward into the year 4017, rather than the generic Christianity I used in my previous drafts. Should be ready to start that in ten or so years. :-(
I don't recall this, but it's been a while since I last read it. So much going on in that book
Chapterhouse Dune epigraph: it is possible to know so much about a subject that you become totally ignorant.
I don't know if you have Netflix, but I'm finding French thriller series are terrific. Usually just six episodes. I highly recommend La Mante. You think you're watching a story that is primarily the hunt for a serial killer, but the whole thing lays the groundwork for an incredible ending that is much more satisfying than nabbing the killer.
Chapterhouse is an interesting book, besides being enjoyable. Many of the chapters have very little dialogue and even less action. Just characters ruminating on interesting topics that moves the story forward.
You might as well berate a cow for eating grass.
- Chapterhouse
Big ass plothole coming up in the next chapter. Campagna has an opportunity to grab a sample of Connor's blood for a DNA test, but doesn't. The only fix I can think of is that she's overwhelmed by events and forgets to do so until it's too late (eg his blood is cleaned up before she comes back for a sample. Meh.
Problem solved. The DNA sample disappears from the lab before it can be analyzed. What she doesn't know is that she's being watched at every turn by demons, who are trying to keep her from determining whether or not Connor is her son.
Technically, the above solution also works for hair follicles. Place a demon in the lab and he messes with or destroys the sample. As a result, no DNA results.
Hey Dirk. This will boil your mind, I bet.
I've been getting riddled with caps issues on "Earth". eg: "Bye everyone, I'm headed to Earth."
but "I would travel to the four corners of the earth" apparently the rule is lowercase.
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