Dirk B wrote:

He already does sleep next to me. I could stop him from doing that, but I'm happy if he's happy. He has started nibbling a little harder on my skin, though, after I give him some chin and head scratches, which he loves (and requests). He's definitely not biting, but it is somewhat unpleasant.

Our ginger, Ajax, gets wound up from tummy rubs. There's a balancing point between loving on him and chumming the waters.
After that is a whole lot of "No more bitey-bite, just kissy-kiss."
Of course, we say the same thing to Jon Moxley, but what can you do.

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njc wrote:

Do you think that applies to a story like The Finishing Stroke in which the engaging, chapter-length "prologue" sets up the events of the "main" story, years after, and the chaper-length "postlogue" is set still years later, when Ellery Queen has the knowledge to fully interpret the clues?

There's nothing wrong with a chapter-length prologue or epilogue.

There's also nothing wrong with not having a prologue or epilogue, and just calling it chapter one.

What's ruffling my feathers is people who post a chapter 1 and call it "Prologue," and then "Chapter 1" as chapter 2, and "Chapter 2" as chapter 3, etc.

(No, <redacted>, I'm not looking at or talking to you at all. Why ever would you think that? big_smile )

To be fair, I haven't read any Ellery Queen (yes, I know, gasp; I've read all of Christie and Sayers, though, so tongue ).
So I can't properly tell if your question is serious or sarcastic. smile

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Ok. I apologize, but I have a minor rant.

Your prologue is not Chapter 1. It is your Prologue, which comes before Chapter 1. That's why it's called the Prologue,.

Amazingly, the Portfolios for Books on here actually take that into account. When you're choosing your Chapter number, you can actually choose Prologue as an option.

Even more amazingly, if you accidentally misnumber your chapters? You can change the order of them quite easily. In the "Content" section of the book, you can click on the chapter numbers in the left-most column and quickly edit the number to be anything from 1 to 99. And maybe even more than that, though Epilogues are treated as 100 so I haven't experimented to see what would happen. Even more amazing, you can have multiple chapters published with the same number, so you don't have to worry about rotating one to an empty socket first. Just change 1 to 2 and 2 to 1 and be done with it.

However, you can't turn a chapter into your prologue from that screen.

However, you can change it into your prologue from either the Chapter Edit screen (by clicking on the chapter number in the chapter info section) or from the Publish screen (which will take you to that same place, so same thing).

So.

There should be no more excuses for people to have prologues as chapter 1, and chapter 1 as chapters 2 and 3, and chapter 12 as chapter 10, etc etc etc.

ahem

Thank you for you time.

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Ok. This one's a minor quibble, but only because I just discovered that it's only in one section, and it can be worked around.

In the Portfolio, in the Content (#3) portion of one's book, the Chapter Number for Prologue is 0 and Epilogue is 100. You are given the option to edit those chapter numbers directly on that screen (by clicking on the numbers). But you can't set it as "0" for Prologue, because it won't accept that 0 is a number.

(And yes, that's a long time mathematical debate, I'm well aware.)

If you do the same thing from the Publish (#4) portion, it takes you to the edit chapter location, and that can let you set it as Prologue. So it can be done. It just doesn't work quite right in that other area.

Dirk B wrote:

Ask, and ye shall receive. Please let me know if the link doesn't work. It was generated by Google and points into one of my photo albums. The weird URL is a Google thing; goo.gl is one of its domains.
https://photos.app.goo.gl/M85Edr2WJcPHfmom6

Link works. And OMG!!!!!!!

Dirk B wrote:

The cat litter the shelter asked me to use (since he's still their cat for the moment) is environmentally friendly and pet friendly, but it's not very good for masking #2. Yeesh!

I have had decent luck with Arm & Hammer. We're using FelinePine right now, but Naturals was decent as well.
Of course, it may also be that I've had housecats for, godess, 40 years consecutive now? I don't notice it so much anymore, maybe.

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Kdot wrote:

It doesn't work the other way unfortunately. If you post 1000 words, then edits bring it down to 100 words, the story only pays for 100 words, not the original 1k

So it lowers the reward for shrinkage, but doesn't affect it for expansion? That seems unfortunate.

Dirk B wrote:

That means you only need to trade reviews with three other people on a regular basis (assuming everyone's posts are generally of similar length) in order to keep posting your own material.

I'd uploaded all of Piscau prior to publishing any of it. The total cost for me to publish it was 180.01 credits.

That's not including the "Joan Dark" stuff, which so far has cost me 56.8 credits and the next three (so far) are going to be 23.59.

Also, I'm not sure the ratios add up correctly.
The points earned for reviewing my published "Joan Dark" are 15.09, with a "new author bonus" of 7.63. Total of 22.72.
That's 40% of the total cost, when you include that bonus, but only 26.6% once the bonus goes away.
And I only earn a bonus if I read new authors. So while I'm providing a bonus for people who've been here, I'm not getting those same earnings even for their new works.

There should be a bonus for reading new stuff, not new authors. Give me an incentive to read stuff worth less than a point otherwise. smile

Please don't get me wrong. I'm on the hellscape that is Booksie, where they're too busy arguing about AI illustrations and bot accounts sending harmless messages. (Not sure what you've done to avoid that issue, but well done.) I've been there months longer than here, and only have six brief reviews, one of which is from a bot account. I'm not wanting that. smile

I'm just overwhelmed trying to juggle real life, my own writing, a couple of private proofreaders I've started with, and trying to figure out how to earn enough on here. smile

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So in another forum, I just saw this little snippet:

Dirk B. wrote:

In case you're not aware, you can "edit" chapters that you've already posted, which doesn't cost extra points

Isn't this a bit of a loophole? One could hypothetically post a one-word chapter, publish it, then edit it to its full 3K-word length.
*eyes her many currently unpublished chapters, including multiple 9-pointers*
Can't imagine who'd think of doing that….

Kdot wrote:
Dirk B wrote:
Kdot wrote:

Dog

In English? Pffft!
Canis!

I raise you an "Anubis"

Don't piss off ancient gods, they don't like it.
If you're going Egyptian, stick to Bast.

Dirk B wrote:
Kdot wrote:

Dog

In English? Pffft!
Canis!

Or Diogie or Siatie

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Just for the record, it's fixed. Thanks, Sol.

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I imagine I'm not the only one, but I'm getting a

NET::ERR_CERT_DATE_INVALID

So I can't login from my work computer right now.
Anyway, just making sure it's noted somewhere.

Dirk B wrote:

to which he doesn't answer anyway,

He's a cat. That's their thing. Get used to it.

Dirk B wrote:

I figure now's the best time to rename him

Over the years, my cats have been named:

  • Jinx

  • Bandit

  • Smokie

  • Whiskers

  • Odysseus/Odie

  • Nostradamus/Nos

  • Hel

  • Esmeralda Weatherwax/Esme

  • Greebo

  • Blue

  • Broccoli

  • Hope

  • Sam

  • Elliott

  • Prince

  • WB (pronounced Wub)

  • Crowley

  • Castiel

  • Rayne

  • Beans

  • Ajax

Yes, most were indoors only.
No litters, though three pairs were/are siblings.
Most I've had at one time was 7. Current is 5.

I support having a TNBW-based "AI Reviewer" available. Obviously I don't know how difficult it would be to implement, so I can accept it if it isn't. I use Grok to aid my research, and also as an alpha-reader. And I am fully aware of the weaknesses of it in many regards. I do not use it to create. I may bounce ideas off of it, ask if my characters are consistent, or if my hypothetical consequences make sense, but I don't have it rewrite my stuff (and often curse at it when it tries).

I'd think that hunting down people using AI to review would be nigh impossible anyway. I looked at a couple of "AI detectors" recently and one of the biggest complaints was that they were too inconsistent. It is what it is. If someone is burning through a bunch of reviews too quickly, then maybe? I don't know. All I know is I do my reviews by hand, and I'd hope others would do the same for me. I can't control what anyone else does, nor do I wish to. Too "Big Brother" for my taste. (1984, not the TV show. And yes, I've had to make that clarification more than once in RL.)