Yes, two on ED and treatments for erectile disfunction.

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Margo H. Bournevaux wrote:

Hi all!
I'm new here, looking forward to meeting y'all and reading some of your stuff.
I'm working on my first novel, which is exciting and terrifying at the same time. Any advice?

Hello!

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mikejackson1127 wrote:

Hi everyone. I'm truly sad to say that I'm leaving tNBW. I've got some things going on in my life that can't be put on hold. Don't know if I'll come back some day, but I will miss you people!

I wish you the very best!

Mike Jackson

I'm sorry .Take care.

T

Dirk B. wrote:

Following the crash, the restored site is back to 90 groups, most of which aren't used. We were down to about 10 groups after the cleanup done many months ago. We'll have to redo the cleanup, which included deleting unused groups, combining and/or renaming some of the groups that remain, and assigning new moderators, where needed, for those groups that remain.

If you created a group or are a member of an actively used group that you would like preserved, please repond to this thread with the name of the group, to ensure it doesn't get deleted.

Thanks
Dirk

I joined poetry but it's dead.  You can kill it.

casper pearl wrote:

Hey everyone! Been a very long time, but I just published my first novel, "Chuck Steak", which began on here all the way back in 2009. I know, I'm super old and outdated:) I originally wrote "Chuck Steak" as a short story for a contest, I want to say it was called "The Worst Wedding Ever". Although I didn't place, I received enough positive feedback which motivated me to turn it into a novel and submit the first 3 chapters in that year's Strongest Start Competition.


I wanted to drop by where my writing career really started, and I wanted to share the good news, because this site helped me find my voice, and it helped me push forward. Plus I made many great friends, some who helped me stay the course off-site after traditional publishing and all the politics involved nearly killed my passion for writing. Because of that, I’d like to encourage anybody who’s struggling to keep going, write for yourself, and let your emotions fuel your projects. It will pay dividends, and no matter how your project sees the light of day, know that finishing it is a feat to be grateful for!


If any old pals who were previously interested in my writing are still hanging around, or new ones are certainly welcome as well, I’d love some support! Just released my book yesterday on Amazon and am hitting marketing pretty hard, so if you like the idea, any review at all would mean the world to me! Here’s the summary:


Death once had a near-Chuck experience.


Meet Chuck Steak. His insides are well done. He’s a cop, but not just any. He’s the best. Hasn’t been one like him since the ‘90s. Won’t work with partners and disregards the collateral damage his boss is always screaming about.


Chuck Steak is USDA Prime badass, so having a bomb planted inside Mia, his secret, longtime girlfriend who’s been dreaming of marriage for almost a decade, should be just another day at the office. The problem is, an elusive villain challenges Chuck to deliver Mia’s dream wedding within a week’s time, or she’ll blow.


Overwhelmed with “girly tasks”, Chuck’s forced out of his action-heavy comfort zone and into scenarios which require words instead of bullets. One results in the loss of his right hand, and when it’s replaced with a black hand, this white cop (now .65% black) encounters a new kind of villain: racism.


With time against him, Chuck will have to find a non-violent way to convince the love of his life and her disapproving family that this isn’t another publicity stunt—that after all of these years, it’s finally time to ditch the legacy he’s been slaving over in favor of the family she’s always dreamed of. All while overcoming unexpected hurdles like his own department and their trigger-happy mentality toward minorities, backstories, a feminist gang, incredibly friendly Muslims, dementia, depression, gender equality, and trying to maintain action-orientated roots in an increasingly politically correct world.


CHUCK STEAK is a violent, brutally honest satire of our very diverse, yet segregated society. It attempts to seamlessly blend themes of love and hate while examining the reasoning behind people’s sometimes idiotic actions. All while turning tropes on their heads and obliterating stereotypes with explosions.


Here's the link to the Kindle version: https://www.amazon.com/Chuck-Steak-Meat … t+the+meat


Hope to eventually catch up with some of you;)


Thanks everyone!

I'm so happy for you.
Congrats!

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I really enjoyed your opening to 'The Golden Dart'.  I was sorry to see it was down.   I hope it will be back up soon.
I mentioned a few tweaks you might be able to use, but overall I thought it was quite good. I hope it'll be up again soon. Since your connections button is missing I couldn't send a private message. 

When I really like something, sometimes I give too many suggestions.
I just wanted you to know that I like your writing. I look forward to the next chapter.

T

Hi,

I was on TNBW many years ago for quite a while. I hit a few bumps in my personal life and I took a very long break.   I came back just before the site crash.  I was on my last day of the trial--when the site went down.  The good news is I only have three chapters and 2 poems posted.

The bad news is that I was given several reviews of my novel that I could never access.  These reviews--along with my original account seem to be gone forever.   

Once I get enough credits to repost, I'd love it if those authors could be so kind as to review my novel--Plum Crazy.  If you can't--I understand.

If I did a review for you that is now gone, please let me know so I can re-issue that review.

My previous account was TLaughs--but it won't let me choose name, but it also won't let activate it. I am now TirzLaughs.  In the old, old, old days, I was TirzahLaughs.

So let me know if you need replacement reviews.
Please consider re-reviewing my chapter when it's live again.

I do appreciate it. 

Thank you all!  I was just getting ready to by the year membership when it died. Haha.
Another 7 days and I'll buy if the site is still on.

T