S. L. Garber-Ortiz

I really enjoyed your opening to 'The Golden Dart'.  I was sorry to see it was down.   I hope it will be back up soon.
I mentioned a few tweaks you might be able to use, but overall I thought it was quite good. I hope it'll be up again soon. Since your connections button is missing I couldn't send a private message. 

When I really like something, sometimes I give too many suggestions.
I just wanted you to know that I like your writing. I look forward to the next chapter.

T