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dagnee wrote:

I think we need to look at the name of the genre: Science FICTION. I don't know about anyone else in this thread, I am not a physicist, I only know what I read about. I have trouble getting my head around the notion of a transporter, my little brain can't envision a whole body being taken apart in one place and resembled hundreds of miles somewhere else. When I run up against something like that in Syfy...I just go with it.

I think getting your reader to suspend their disbelief should be the aim of any fiction writer. No matter what the subject, if you write it well enough to get the reader to 'go with it,' you've accomplished 90% of your goal.
big_smile

Certainly it is easy enough to downplay the modern role of the story-telling author to perpetuate convenient myths. We have scientists themselves, and the news media to do all that, and authors are as much victims as anyone else.

Nevertheless, there is much to be said about common-sense understanding of scientific myths even if you'd prefer to ignore it. There is no necessary truth to the process of creating an identical copy of the human mind hundreds of miles away because we might be able to do the same with a single photon,  and common-sense understanding of climate-change models that have never made a valid prediction over any period of any duration should not affect our entertainment crafted for us by novelists and movie producers.

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njc wrote:

I point to Heinlein's post-Time Enough For Love works, where he lets the tech become magic and thumbs his nose at posterity, damaging his 'franchise' enough that nobody is likely to try to cash in on it.

1980's magical realism

Anarchist-libertarians reach a point in which they don't care to have the real reality get too much in the way.

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dagnee wrote:

The short answer: First, Science Fiction not based on science is fantasy. Second, Love is a chemical reaction, not an emotional one. Third, The Universe does not have an intellect. It is mostly a chemical reaction and not an intelligent response. You can use weather for an example, a hurricane does not strike coastal regions because it is angry at that particular area, but because of a condensation of water vapor.

dags smile

PS...I forgot to include, everything we imagine about the future is filtered through our desire to believe there is only one cause for every effect and can only be pure conjuncture.

Yes, that is a good summary. That sci-fi speculation (with rare exception like The Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind -- Weather -- Chaos Theory -- Butterfly Effect) depends on a 19th, early 20th century model of how the universe works that is wrong in a fuller context in which Chance must operate.

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max keanu wrote:

Kraft Easy Cheese, - a vat of goo, yet to be named, but I name it here.

This product will last ten thousand years and probably do the job for you.

http://www.quill.com/cheese/cbs/5063220 … B_50632201

wtf is charles talking about?

Sometimes if you have to ask, it is not for you to know.

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Tom Oldman wrote:

If I have to, I'll choose "Don't care". I've read some really marvelous SF novels that had glaring "plot holes" as you call them, and that didn't detract one whit from the story itself. And, yes, I know what a plot hole is. I've written a few myself.

But, we are far afield of the original question.

No, not really, because I was pointing out that a scientific plot device to advance a plot ought to be scientific, and I believe the  OP (Norm D'P/Dirk) was seeking such a plot device.   Sci-fi literature (and there is some still being written here and there) was read by geeks who enjoyed speculative science and were rather intolerant of plot holes solved by silly science (I am of that group), but once sci-fi as a genre became dominated by film (Star Wars) in which there is rarely any scientific content at all,  the plot holes are there for another reason. I can't guess which sort of plot hole you enjoy, but my money is on this last sort and not for reasons of lack of any science. There is at least some honesty in the label Space Opera and the fact that the SciFi channel changed its name to SyFy. I haven't actually found any sci-fi literature on TNBW that is not more properly Space Opera or Cowboys and Indians in Space or Action/Adventure and some dystopian fantasy mislabeled sci-fi.

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Tom Oldman wrote:
Charles_F_Bell wrote:
Tom Oldman wrote:

But aren't you applying the science of NOW to the far future, Dirk? Perhaps by 4017 some new processes would be fairly simple. You have a 'black box' the size of, say, an 18-wheeler with an input chute. You drop the air car into it and the box hums, slurps, crunches, lets off condensation in the form of simple steam, a buzzer sounds and several bins along the side of the box receive ingots of whatever metals are in an air car. You don't have to explain it, it just is.

Call it the Stanislawsky Car Rendering Asunder Process (SCRAP).

~Tom

There is a point in a story when Sci-fi may become magic should the author let it. If one adopts  the attitude that anything is possible (given enough time) then science becomes magic, or the stalking grounds of the Gods.  I ridicule this attitude in my book Remembrances and Reconciliation when in the year 12484 C.E., 0110101011 01110100 Jones discovers the link between collisional quenching of excited-state bismuth atoms by various gases and the meaning of love. I feel (in that superior way of mine) I can ridicule that attitude because I feel I know enough to believe that although the universe is causal, it is not deterministic.  Instantaneous travel across great distances by means of quantum entanglement is the latest sci-fi magic. Such a thing is possible in conception, but applied to biologic systems, I know with certainty just below absolute that what we speculate now will not be the result.  We, in our 20th-century materialistic determinism, that is a false philosophy, are wrong.

Huh?

Did you understand this much? There is a point in a story when Sci-fi may become magic should the author let it.

Agree? or Disagree? or Don't care?

Do you understand "plot hole"?  If a sci-fi writer creates his way out of a situation by using a sci-fi speculation that is no more than magic, he is a bad writer.  The rest of what I said relates to the fact that not only writers who are not scientists but many scientists themselves simply want to believe in magic because it is fun to believe in magic, but real science dictates that the condition: you do A and you do B you will always get C applies to very few (and some say no) processes in 100% certainty of outcome, and magic basically says that all one has to do is do A (wave a wand) and do B (say: abracadabra) and you will get C (a pot of gold).

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Tom Oldman wrote:

But aren't you applying the science of NOW to the far future, Dirk? Perhaps by 4017 some new processes would be fairly simple. You have a 'black box' the size of, say, an 18-wheeler with an input chute. You drop the air car into it and the box hums, slurps, crunches, lets off condensation in the form of simple steam, a buzzer sounds and several bins along the side of the box receive ingots of whatever metals are in an air car. You don't have to explain it, it just is.

Call it the Stanislawsky Car Rendering Asunder Process (SCRAP).

~Tom

There is a point in a story when Sci-fi may become magic should the author let it. If one adopts  the attitude that anything is possible (given enough time) then science becomes magic, or the stalking grounds of the Gods.  I ridicule this attitude in my book Remembrances and Reconciliation when in the year 12484 C.E., 0110101011 01110100 Jones discovers the link between collisional quenching of excited-state bismuth atoms by various gases and the meaning of love. I feel (in that superior way of mine) I can ridicule that attitude because I feel I know enough to believe that although the universe is causal, it is not deterministic.  Instantaneous travel across great distances by means of quantum entanglement is the latest sci-fi magic. Such a thing is possible in conception, but applied to biologic systems, I know with certainty just below absolute that what we speculate now will not be the result.  We, in our 20th-century materialistic determinism, that is a false philosophy, are wrong.

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Norm d'Plume wrote:

I'm writing a scene where I use a superacid to dissolve vehicles (e.g., aerial cars) into their constituent elements, which are then separated and reused to create new vehicles.

Please correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm assuming that lowering your average Volkswagen into such an acid would cause the acid to churn like crazy and release a ton of noxious fumes into the air.

But what happens to the elements? Are some of them completely vaporized? Does the acid bind with some of them forming other compounds? What might be a way of separating the elements/compounds from the acid?

My sense would be that you would have to break up the vehicle, like take off the tires and glass bits, or you will get unpredictable results. 

The combination of hydrochloric, sulphuric, and nitric acids will dissolve about anything inorganic and you will generate a lot of explosive hydrogen gas.  The final solids (in solution that will have to be evaporated) will be the salts of the metals dissolved.  Reversing, getting the metal from the salts is a long, difficult process of electrolysis whereby there will a mess of impure products.  When I hear of such a Sci-fi scheme, I can only think, good luck with that.

http://www.docbrown.info/page03/AcidsBasesSalts04.htm

A complex sentence is not a run-on when all subjects and verbs can be identified -- even if a verb or a subject is implied

Simple form: Neither Bob nor Bill scattered the litter but rather Joe (did).

This IS NOT ambiguously interpreted as: Bob and Bill did not scatter litter but scattered Joe.

Correct?

Complex:

No parade had passed by the Club in a decade; neither accident nor deliberation scattered the litter about Boynton Beach but rather the negligent nonchalance of people who did not care or could not care about this town in South Florida that did not come into being as did the jewels in the tropics, Palm Beach to the north and Delray Beach to the south.

Neither accident nor deliberation scattered the litter but rather negligent nonchalance of [...] (did).

Correct?

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max keanu wrote:

aloha  charles
i ran a successful book and video store on kauai for five yestermorrows. to eat i had to read quickly through 100-500+ author-offerings each month. one or two f*&k-ups and I was eating the fish I might be able to catch in the wailua river that month.

Usually, i read so much crap that I knew how to disqualify an author in less than 25-50 words if the bio sucked. however, many times a picture and 10- 20 well-written words pumped up my curiosity enough to go for Ingram's or other publishers promo come-ons  for a new author or even an established author going off genre. Spending MY money on a new author sometimes gave me a starvation diet for the month, and when you go hungry, you learn quicklyl.

Okay, this practical advice (although, frankly, I don't think it applies to TNBW) is depressing because it re-enforces the reality etched into the back of the mind that quality of product is a form of mass hysteria as far as a successful marketing scheme is concerned, and the sale of book is thus tied to irrationalism.

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max keanu wrote:

And, any bit of information about a person may bring the mind meld and meshing moment  of being and nothingness closer to the reading edge we all cautiously walk upon, as time is always fleeting and of the essence.

It looks to me like you'd prefer to judge a book by the appearances and circumstances of the author. In a better world, prejudgements do not happen, and an opinion is based on content rather external appearances.  Tell us exactly what sort thing an author might put in his bio that would make you jump at his writing with eager anticipation. The mind-meld teaser exists in a good content blurb which is a hard thing to write indeed, but "This is a story about a fish with a conscience" ought to have more impact than "This author never graduated from high school" unless you would like to say: "What can an uneducated rube possibly have to say about fish?" Then how far do you take this? "What can a (white/black) (male/female) possibly have to say about a (black/white) (female/male)?"

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becket wrote:

[...]  I also think literary fiction carries with it the obligation to be very well written. That quality is enough to constitute entertainment for some readers.  One of my favorite novels is John Updike's "In the Lilies of the Valley." I doubt, however, that it would ever have been published had Updike not written "The Witches of Eastwick." Shakespeare is marvelously literary.  At the same time, he had to fill the seats of the theaters in which his plays were performed with paying customers. There's a lesson there for all writers.
That's my story and I'm sticking to it.

There is no free market in "literary fiction"  It is a status market. Updike went to Harvard. I read one book of Updike, from a sense of duty to my education, and I don't remember it being a bad book in any sense except that it was completely forgettable. Literally, I do not remember a single thing about it -- even the title (though not Eastwick).  C.P. Snow (Cambridge, U.K.) recommends Updike over there, and Updike recommends Snow over here, and it is a done deal.  There is some musing that self-publishing on the internet will change things, but to sell a book is and will be always all about marketing, and in that sense the internet makes things worse with the "review" postings that have suspicious origins, but even so, the status market for literary fiction cannot change because unless a verifiable Harvard man will positively review a verifiable Cambridge man's book at Amazon, the book will not sell.  On the internet it is possible that those actively looking for literary fiction will find literary fiction via search engine but for two problems: (1) an author may (sub)categorize his book as literary fiction when it is no such thing according to the standards listed in my OP; and (2) the sample provided by the online seller is of the first XXX words and by definition a work of literary fiction is impossible to judge by those first XXX words.

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Tom Oldman wrote:

To add to your request, Max, how about making it mandatory to write something in the Bio box - even if it is just "Let me get used to the site before I tell all". When I go to the 'New Members' pics and click on them, I like to see right away something other than just "This person has not...."

If I put in the Bio box that I am the Prince of Moldavia, the Bessarabians at TNBW will want to cause trouble like they always do.

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becket wrote:

Thank you.

And don't let yourself be fooled into thinking that writing to the rules means there are rules for story-telling.  There are none for that. Strunk, CMS. etc.  lay down the rules for good writing as much as a bureaucrat lays down the rules for good living. There are those other rules for fiction which constitute writing to a formula for selling popular commercial fiction. These rules are as useful as might be the rules for making the best rotary phone. 

________________
consider: Lee Child Debunks the Biggest Writing Myths 
http://www.writersdigest.com/whats-new/ … ting-myths

Show, Don’t Tell

Picture this: In a novel, a character wakes up and looks at himself in the mirror, noting his scars and other physical traits for the reader.

“It is completely and utterly divorced from real life,” Child said.

So why do writers do this? Child said it’s because they’ve been beaten down by the rule of Show, Don’t Tell. “They manufacture this entirely artificial thing.”

“We’re not story showers,” Child said. “We’re story tellers.”
_______

Rules are for setting yourself within a social context, for comprehending how you as an individual will fit in with others. Anyone advising you to "fit in" regardless of your desire to "fit in" comes from a collectivist culture that gave us oriental despotism and Chairman Mao.  A writer or any artist from a Western European culture, and especially an individualist culture like that derived from England, is acting counter-culturally, that is to say: against the broader rules for social conduct, if he "fits in."

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becket wrote:

I am not posting this with the intent of gaining support for my own ideas. My intent is to provoke a discussion that may be of benefit to aspiring fiction writers myself included.  Style manuals range from the elementary (Strunk) to the comprehensive such as "The Chicago Manual of Style" and "the U.S. Government Printing Office Style Manual." These manuals clearly apply to expository writing, theme papers, master's thesis, technical manuals.  How rigidly to they apply to narrative writing such as fiction?  The most common forms of narration in fiction are third person and first person. Do the rules of rhetoric apply equally to both?  Is realism ever adequate grounds for ignoring a rule?  -30-

Other than for punctuation, those rules do not easily apply for dialogue, and sometimes likewise for 1st-person narrative.  I say "easily" because different people will speak more according to the rules than others.  I sometimes wish there might be a guide how to write dialogue outside the rules for certain purposes.  I believe the better the author, the better he will contrast dialogue with his narration by bending the rules for dialogue and strictly adhering to the rules for narration. Strunk and Harbrace and "The Practical Stylist" by Sheridan Baker are fine, but the point of CMS is that editors and publishers claim authority to be the last word and that is CMS (or another the name of which escapes me for the moment).

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becket wrote:

I own one text about literary theory, only one. It may surprise you that I do understand your comment.  I do believe that good fiction should inform and entertain. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. Do I have a choice?
I would love to develop a readership for my novels. I have a protagonist who struggles with his acceptance of God. I have another who struggles to overcome the devastation of rape.  Another who simply seeks respect.  I also have my Falstaff. I will never develop a readership if I cannot sell.  Thus, I hope I entertain as well as inform.  Markets are what they are.

The thrust of what I said goes back to my original post (that was stolen off of Wikipedia) on the meaning of "literary fiction." It is *not* really well written fiction that may or may not sell commercially.  I thought you might agree because you wrote (or I inferred from what you quoted New Yorker once claimed) that there is a qualitative difference between literary and genre fiction; literary being like peas and beets and all that yucky stuff which is good for you and genre being like chocolate and whiskey which will make you feel good.  I opine that for three generations (pretty much since literary fiction became a label) peas and beets has been socialist propaganda, and I would like to point out that even if one is in that mindset, the meaning for literary fiction as "good for you" (socialism is good for you and capitalism is bad for you) is limited and not interesting. However, judging from your response I gather you think literary fiction just means well written stuff, to entertain (chocolate and whiskey) and inform (peas and beets), that may or may not sell, but you believe well written stuff to entertain and inform can sell for some reason unexplained, just like selling whiskey and beets together is rather dependent on a good advertising agency and not on any characteristic of whiskey and beets sold together in the same fun-pack for all the family.

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becket wrote:

This may have come from the New Yorker Magazine discussing the difference between literary fiction and genre fiction, "One is good for you, the other makes you feel good."  My two cents worth is these need not be mutually exclusive of each other.

Would a single employee of or contributor to New Yorker magazine since 1957 consider Atlas Shrugged, for example, literary fiction (in 1957) or now a literary classic?  You see: "good for you" in last three generations is judged to be writing for socialism/progressivism or likewise unconnected to Realism (neoplatonist, spiritualist) such as the Alchemist by Coehlo; and there you have your "not mutually exclusive"  literary and (eventually) commercial success. Intelligently crafted bull**** (Harry Potter) sells, but who among the literati-critics admits that once in a while a novel of great philosophical and socio-political importance (good for you) whose structure and style is awkwardly noncommercial is both a commercial and literary success except in one respect: in contrast to The Alchemist that has sold some 7 times the number of Atlas Shrugged, the latter stubbornly pushes the reader to understand the novel in the precise meaning the author intended whereas the former is to be interpreted in any manner whatsoever, not in any objectively realist manner -- to my mind in any meaningful way -- literary fiction bull*** that sells and pleases the critics.

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becket wrote:

I associate scenes with a theatrical play.  There is a standard formula to them.  They have beginnings and ends.  They take place in one physical location (setting).  A transformative event occurs in each scene.  Scenes represent a progression along a character arc as well as movement along a plot and act(three act or five act) structure.  My limited experience has shown me that the length of a chapter has a significant impact on pace.  That experience also indicates that editors prefer consistent chapter lengths.  If chapter length poses a risk to reader interest or fatigue, it's wrong.

I disagree that a chapter in a novel is comparable to a scene in a play.  The chapter is more like an Act in a play for it is permissible and often desirable to have scene breaks within a chapter. Moreover, this analogy to a play argues for longer chapters, not shorter.

Chapter 1. John is talking outside his house with his neighbor. He invites the neighbor inside.
Chapter 2. John is talking inside his house with his neighbor.

No.

Plays/movies/TV are inherently limited by practicalities (expensive and time-consuming scene breaks) that novels are not.  The novelist and his readers are freer than the playwright and the screen adapter.

"Scenes represent a progression along a character arc as well as movement along a plot and act(three act or five act) structure"

Substitute "Chapters" for "Scenes" (and I say: "Acts") and  one must realize that such chapters, if the novel is not to be dull and formulaic, ought to vary and flow with the demands for character arc and plot progression and not remain fixed to idiotic notions (even if true)  that editors prefer consistent chapter lengths.

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j p lundstrom wrote:

I checked my O.E.D. and found high-school and high school, but not highschool.  Definitions were given for North America and the UK.  Where are you?

Obviously not in that period in the future in which high-school will have evolved into highschool.

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maxkeanu wrote:

15000 wordies? that's a darn short story, or one of my long and meandering chapters. if a read is captivating from the get-go, 15k is a snap-crackle-pop and then the read is over!  Then "boo-hoo" cries the reader, and then ... and then... and then hopefully the reader wants more... and more... and more! "Yeah, more words for me to eat scribe!!! ", they'll scream!

I am leaning toward breaking things up according to chapters if only as a benefit to the reader. It is a writer's conceit to think that his work is so masterful and captivating no reader ever has reason to put it down.  I was thumbing through Saul Bellow's Humboldt's Gift for some tips in style for long dialogue and noticed he has no chapters in 487 pages but rather section/scene breaks designated by diamond rows -- amounting to the very same thing as chapter breaks without benefit to the reader for referencing to himself or others  named source such as "I have finished chapter 4 and my favorite is the second, not at all the first so far . . ."  The book is a first-person ramble suited to such lack of organization through chapters and in my opinion gives itself over to the dull monotony first-person narratives have.

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mikira (AKA KLSundstrom) wrote:

This isn't to pay a publisher, the project is to get funds to help me pay for a professional editor, cover designer and a list of other things such as both paperback and hard cover books, plus money to help me promote the book once I publish it, because I will probably look at self-publishing this novel.

South Park Riffs On Startups, Kickstarter

http://techcrunch.com/2014/09/26/south- … ntroversy/

Some of the highlights include Stan explaining to his dad that he doesn’t need school anymore because he’s doing a startup now. “We don’t want to do anything,” says Stan. Then Kyle chimes in and explains, “That’s why we want to have a startup company.”

Cartman tells a conference full of faithful fans. “And now our company is thrilled to show you all the latest innovations we’ve come up with. To begin with, we have moved the couch from the left side of the office, to the right side,” he tells them.

Cartman' 4-point plan

1. Start up
2. Cash in
3. Sell out
4. Bro down

SolN wrote:

Just create a new version if the book and publish it in the points group as you get the points. You can purchase some points if you absolutely need them fast. We had this on the old site and will be launching the option this week.

Publish One - no points
Publish Two - points
Publish Three - points
Publish Four - no points
etc.
in sequence of chapters of the same book appears to not work but "versions of the same book" requires literal creation of two separate books one (One, Four, etc.) -no points- and then another (Two, Three, etc.) -points-
rather than one book with different versions of chapters according to points, or no points attached.

It also seems that publishing a chapter when several chapters already exist requires adding up all points for every chapter (rather than those points only for that one chapter) to publish.

vern wrote:

If you post to the Premium group, then everything requires points, so no problem. And the "free" group is being phased out (if not already) so there will be no more zero points. Simplest thing to do until all freebies are gone (if not already) is to post and read from the Premium group. Problem solved. Take care. Vern

The immediate problem for me is I am on a bit of a deadline for a revision of a 35,000 word novella which requires, I think, 140 points to post into Premium, and there is little chance I will be able to gather that many points in a month's time reviewing, but I could post the first 4 chapters, say, for 10-12 points and the rest for free, although ideally it would be staggered according to those chapters I need help on, making the "publishing" too confusing, right?

It looks to me that either every chapter in a book has to provide points or none can. Has anyone split a book into two, one part providing points and the other not? Especially, say, chapters 1-3, points, 4, no points, 5-6, points, 7-9, no points, staggered that way? Way too annoying, right? Half (beginning), points and half (end), no points?

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becket wrote:

Would appreciate suggestions/encouragement.  Entered "Down Easter" in a best unpublished novel competition.  The comments coming back were very upsetting - notably I had too many (protagonists) characters to follow.

I don't think there can be too many protagonists if each is different and defined to be different for a particular reason. I think you can have too many villains and foils.  In Men in War and Men v. Nature there are usually many protagonists, some more important than others and a single enemy (even if collective or non-human),

becket wrote:

I think one of the things that makes me unique is that I present nautical fiction from a hands-on perspective - what its like to helm a square rigger, what it's like to use a shipbuilder's adze.  This is not everybody's fiction, for sure.  As someone who has spent his working life pushing paper, I know the satisfaction of woodworking as a hobby and wish to share and encourage this.  It's so gratifying to finish something of beauty.
Becket

Writing fiction from an expertise's POV can be boring to most readers if the underlying story is weak.  Michael Crichton was correct in his assumptions, ditto for most of the good '50's-'70's sci-fi writers,  without making scientific/medical conjectures forced and boring --Jurassic Park being an exception. Nevil Shute was an aeronautical engineer, and it showed (deliberately, I suspect) in his fiction just bordering on the nerdy, but his stories, realist but not naturalist, were good even if usually with a single protagonist.  I think there is a valid relationship between the simplicity of the story and the message it may carry and fewer characters of any type.