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I finally looked up what x.x means. You use it so much I figured I should learn what it means. My favorite, though, is -.-  Couldn't find it online.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Nuts. I just changed Lo Bidda to Low Bidder in my Strongest Start entry. Back to the edit screen.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

And your suspect opinion is?

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Is Lo Bidda Corporation an obvious variant of Low Bidder Corporation, or should I make it more obvious for the spoof-impaired?

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https://writersweekly.com/angela-desk/h … book-sales

I plan to have a cab driver named Leonardo.

Why Apollo? I like Asteroid/Comet Omega.

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Welcome, G. You've done step one. :-)  Now please introduce yourself and tell us a bit about the story you've written.

Okay two books. In the meantime, I need a good name for a doomsday asteroid or comet rapidly approaching Earth. It should be a name that combines a scientific designation with an obvious doomsday connection.

Dune, the best-selling sci-fi novel of all time used omniscient/headhopping. The author and his son have written well over a dozen books in the Dune universe. Movie, two miniseries, another planned movie, etc.

Just saying...

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Also check out Fiverr. They have some highly rated editors. If you're sure your manuscript is written the way you want it, then you probably need just a copy edit, which is cheaper. Personally, I plan to start with a line edit. The more reputable ones will do a sample edit, although you'll probably have to pay for it (e.g. $50 or $100 for 10,000 words).

Outlining to be begin before the end of this month. I have only one important book to reread before I start.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Lo Bidda Corporation. Done.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Turns out the Supreme Court ruled in 1983 that Parker Brothers no longer has a valid trademark on Monopoly. So LowBid Corporation or Monopoly Corporation? They are a technology monopoly.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Nuts. Just when I thought ACME was the Bugs Bunny cartoon name, it turns out they are also referred to Acme. I had just changed all instances of Lowest Bidder to Acme. I guess LowBid Corporation wins by default.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I'm waffling between Lowest Bidder Corporation and Acme, Inc. The latter is less wordy, even if I drop Corporation and Inc. Anyone want to stop me before I change it back to Acme? Either way, it's intended to be silly. The former is my own creation whereas the latter is instantly recognizable as a variant of ACME Corporation. The name ACME dates back a century, so Bugs Bunny has no right to the name Acme, Inc. Also, although my Acme technology is always breaking down, ACME products always worked exactly according to specs. since ACME turned out to be a subsidiary of the Road Runner Corporation. I could consider LowBid Corporation, but it's not as funny as Acme. Or Lowbid?

Thoughts?

The main reason I use the book summary is to attempt to draw the reader to my book, beyond just what the picture and book name can give. It's like the back cover of a physical book.

The main reason I use the chapter summary is to provide guidance about changes I'm making on the fly (e.g., I changed my characters' Imperial titles part-way into the book and didn't want to keep using the old titles for the rest of the draft; I also didn't want to go back and republish the early chapters with the title changes). Too expensive. So I say in the summary "Going forward, I've changed the the titles of my Imperial characters. From now on, the Emperor is referred to as Augustus, the Empress as Augusta, etc. I'll clean up the early chapters in the next draft."

I've pointed this problem out before, but it has yet to be fixed. There are formatting bugs in the Content and Chapter Summaries. I write a well-formatted summary that's structured and easy to read, and it gets clobbered by the formatting bug (random line breaks and html tags). This seems like it ought to be an easy fix, unless there is some unknown purpose to this behavior. It makes the site's main feature, the inlines, look sloppy the moment you click to read a chapter. I think it would make a better first impression for new users if the inlines looked solid.

Thanks
Dirk

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

The final chapter of Galaxy Tales is up. It includes minor edits from my v2 reviewers. This book will now be shelved while I switch gears to write The Lord of the Earth. Galaxy Tales needs a major rewrite, where I convert God into two different archangels, one for Joseph and one for Apollo. It's easier to have fun with archangels without being too irreverent to Christians, my target audience.

Seabrass and K, thanks for helping me finish v3.

Amen!
Dirk

It's a localized problem. I just clicked on your pen name above and it took me to your profile.

Rayner, I can't remember if I already told you this, but you can subscribe to this thread (upper right of the screen) to be notified via email when there's a new post.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

THE LAST JEDI SPOILERS. The final two hours of The Last Jedi aren't as bad as I remember. The ski speeders on Crait were pretty silly, though. Must be old tech. Killing off Snoke near the beginning of his character arc was dumb, but it makes room for Kylo Ren. Not sure why he would put Rey ahead of Snoke, but so be it. I still think they're playing out Jacen Solo's character arc from the non-canon books. It remains to be seen if Rey kills him or not. I'm guessing not. Far too simplistic to kill off the bad guy and have a happy ending. And they definitely should have let Finn take out the cannon on Crait. That would have been a powerful ending for him. Let's face it, they have to start killing off some of the good guys to get down to Kdot's Rule of Two (Two characters left standing? Place your bets!)

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I can't believe Netflix yanked episodes one and two of Lord of the Rings. Fortunately I own the DVDs. Short version, not the interminable extended editions.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Good luck with Transformers. When the autobots fight, all you see is metal on metal all over the screen. A lot like the crazy effects in Dr. Strange.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Interesting trivia: the episode of Gilligan's Island mentioned above was rated as the third funniest episode of any show of all time by Inside TV Land. TV Guide rated it number 50.