751

(46 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Norm d'Plume wrote:

Another idea would be to find an in-your-face place to put a site tip to encourage new members to go introduce themselves and their work in Premium and ask for feedback. And nudge them to do reviews to get reviews. Perhaps they get a popup tip right after posting.

Dirk

An excellent suggestion, Dirk.  If we, as old members, still run into glitches (many of our own making), think what it must be like for a new member who can't figure out what remedial steps to take.  Many's the time I'd like a manual.  There really needs to be something that is built into the site, though,  that doesn't require action by the new member. 
It's like going to a party.  You know you're dressed right, and you took a bath and brushed your teeth, but nobody talks to you.  You could go around and introduce yourself and strike up a conversation with everybody, but it makes things so much nicer when the hosts welcome you and get you started.

752

(46 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

As good as all your suggestions are for helping new writers get reviews, I still think the lack of activity stems from one thing.  With all those illustrations taking up so much space on the home page, there's just not enough room to hold new works up for viewing for much time.  As Linda noted a few weeks ago, things seem to disappear before we get a chance to see them.  Not everyone has a chance to look things over every day.  Old refrain: on the old site, the list stayed up, and the date, category and author's name were clearly listed alongside the title.  Maybe it's time to reserve the pictures (my favorite feature) for the review and portfolio pages. 
Another old note:  I'm sure I received ten free points when I joined TNBW--what happened to that?  I remember joining another site and leaving when I  saw that I'd have to earn points before I could post any work.  It wouldn't be quite so disheartening to new members if they could post their first chapter for free.  They might feel a little more amenable to waiting for the first review.  I do go over the new members list daily, and when I find someone with a posting I'd like to read, I read and review.  But if they have no points, then they can't post, can they?  Self-defeating.
In addition, having made connections with certain writers, I feel more concerned about reviewing their work before taking on new writers.  I like the private messaging feature, but it's a little like a sorority/fraternity atmosphere, and those can be toxic.
BUT I still feel the key to getting new authors' work reviewed is keeping them in view for as long as possible.  Let's do something like the old listing again.
NOW you may brand me a foot-dragging reactionary.  JP

753

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

SolN wrote:

Not sure if this is the right place to post, but here goes:  I tried to read the work of a fellow Cop Shop group member, but got the notice that I needed to connect with the author.  The piece was marked for group members and connections.  Does that mean we have to be both group members AND connected?  Also, since we're all members of Premium Group, doesn't that make us all members of the same group?  Thanks for your help.  JP

As long as you are members of the same group and they post to groups then you shouldn't need to also connect with them. If you are getting problems try logging out and then back in and see if that resolves it. Let me know.

Sol

It's a different day, and I'm still getting the message to connect with the person in order to read their work.  JP

754

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Yes, I think we should go back to being a points group.  The no-points status was supposed to be temporary, until we were able to post in multiple groups for one fee.  Please go ahead and change us back.  Thank you.  JP

755

(7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

John--the way to retrieve it is to go to "Reviews," then "In-line Posted" (you'll see your review marked as a draft), then select "View."  It'll open up and you can continue from where you left off.  I had the same trouble.   The title "In-line Posted" is confusing--it's there, but it's not really posted.  JP

756

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

Let them review in Premium, jp. I know I'm not going to post in 2 groups for double points.

I thought we weren't charged extra for posting in multiple groups anymore.  Sol, where are you?

1.  When we have our contest, we need the stories posted in Cop Shop so people can find them to review.
2.  When people take the time to review our stories, they should receive points.
Therefore, we need to make sure that people reviewing Cop Shop stories receive points.   

(I didn't do that well with logic in Geometry; you know what I mean.)

757

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

JP, you still might have to make the connection. If the piece was not posted in Cop Shop and you aren't connected, the author's settings might have Only Connections. Not sure. I sure hope the person didn't block you. Who have you angered? smile

I did go ahead and request the connection, Janet.  It couldn't hurt.  The only thing is I don't want to make connections with so many people I can't review all their work.  I feel like I'm neglecting friends when I don't review their work. 

And Janet, I decided not to anger anyone this week.  JP

WAIT!  I just thought of something else--if Cop Shop is no points, and people access a story through the group, does that mean they do't get points for their review, even if it is posted to Premium Group for points?  If that's the case, we need to change the Cop Shop group status back to points.

758

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Not sure if this is the right place to post, but here goes:  I tried to read the work of a fellow Cop Shop group member, but got the notice that I needed to connect with the author.  The piece was marked for group members and connections.  Does that mean we have to be both group members AND connected?  Also, since we're all members of Premium Group, doesn't that make us all members of the same group?  Thanks for your help.  JP

759

(5 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Hey, Allen and Janet--Good on you for sharing your information!.  If you get a chance, could you also post your references in the "Resources for Crime Writers" thread?  I think, that way, it might be easier for someone to find help next time.  It would be good to have a growing list of resources. JP

760

(2 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Seems like an 18-year-old could outrun a 58-year-old.  A sad commentary on the physical condition of our youth!

761

(1 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

POP COP QUIZ #12: Hit the Books!
Maybe there was a movie, maybe not.  The important thing is the book.  Name the title and the author.
1.    A nurse’s friend leaves her a key to a public locker in the train station. Inside the locker is a suitcase, and inside the suitcase is a three-year-old boy: naked and drugged, but alive.
2.    A crime reporter loses his job, then decides to write one big story to end his career.
3.    Sweden’s first serial killer tops off each murder with a snow sculpture.
4.    An out-of-work lingerie saleswoman gets a job as a bounty hunter.
5.    A twelve-year-old runaway in L. A. witnesses a murder, then goes on the run for real.
6.    City of Angels, 1948: struggling to pay his bills, a veteran is offered cash to find a missing woman. He does find her, but that’s only the beginning of his travails.
7.    A transient is arrested for the murder of his brother, a U.S. Treasury agent.
8.    Twenty years ago, four teenagers at summer camp walked into the woods at night. Two were found murdered, and the others were never seen again.   
9.     A six-year-old boy falls to his death from the top of his apartment building. While the boy's body is still warm, the police pronounce his death an accident.   
10.    The year is 1954.  A U.S. Marshal comes to a hospital for the criminally insane to investigate the disappearance of a patient—but nothing is what it seems .

ANSWERS TO POP COP QUIZ #12
1.    The Boy in the Suitcase, by Lene Kaaberbøl
2.    The Scarecrow, by Michael Connelly
3.    The Snowman, by Jo Nesbø
4.    One for the Money, by Janet Evanovitch
5.    Billy Straight, by Jonathan Kellerman
6.    Devil in a Blue Dress, by Walter Mosely
7.    The Killing Floor, by Lee Child
8.    The Woods, by Harlan Coben
9.    Smilla’s Sense of  Snow, by Peter Høeg
10.    Shutter Island, by Dennis Lehane

762

(13 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Very basic mystery-writing tips at
http://teacher.scholastic.com/writewit/mystery/tips.htm

A lesson from P D James:
http://www.randomhouse.com/features/pdj … iting.html

"Consider this part of the oath written by G.K. Chesterton for the British Detection Club: 'Do you promise that your detectives shall well and truly detect the crimes presented to them using those wits which it may please you to bestow on them and not placing reliance on nor making use of Divine Revelation, Feminine Intuition, Mumbo Jumbo, Jiggery-Pokery, Coincidence, or Act of God?'"

Read the rest of this entertaining article at
http://fictionwriting.about.com/od/genr … yrules.htm

763

(4 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Year: 1950  My main character has become dependent on barbiturate sleeping pills.  If she is knocked down, receives a concussion, and is subsequently given more sleeping pills (they're trying to kill her), is it conceivable that she might walk away from that in the morning?  I think I might have gone over the top with this.  JP

764

(13 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Just went looking for story-writing information, and I found this discussion of crime writing.  Easy to understand, quick to read, and useful.
http://www.bethanderson-hotclue.com/wor … a-mystery/

Not written as clearly, but still containing good information:
http://www.writing-world.com/mystery/opening.shtml

765

(1 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Better watch out, Allen!  After all, his name is Jack the KNIFE!  They don't call him that for nothing...  JP

766

(10 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Thanks, guys!  Now I'll have to think it through... JP

767

(74 replies, posted in Fight Club)

I didn't know you could dump a review.  How empowering is that?  Authors, you no longer need to fear critics!  JP

768

(10 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

In Illusion Show, Jerry has to hand over investigation of a murder to the sheriff.  Would he 1) expect to continue collecting evidence/taking statements regarding the case if such things arise?  2) provide office space for them to work out of, since their office is over an hour's drive away?  3) be kept informed of the sheriff's department's progress on the case?  Could he choose to investigate the murder without help from the sheriff's department?

769

(1 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Really, really good story!

770

(7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Cool, Jack!

771

(74 replies, posted in Fight Club)

I'm not going to quote the quote of the quote of the...(you get what I mean?) here, but do you mean to say you've found a place on site that saves your place in a book you're reviewing?  Amazing!  I got to check this out!  Is there a limit to how many books you can put on the shelf?

772

(7 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Allen--yes, though Jack is right, technically.  I find it hard to write two "ins" in a row, too.
Jack, you're right about John Goodman. 
JP
There are still seven left--keep going, everybody!

773

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Something is happening here.  I sent a message yesterday that went through eighteen times.  Then the site went completely unresponsive.  I had to leave the site, and come back again to do any work.

774

(7 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

PByrd--Yes!

775

(7 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

You got two--right off the top of your head!  You go, girl!