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I'm a big believer in good, original, meaningful titles. It's so useful in drawing potential readers in.

In my opinion Lost in Darkness is very cliche sounding, so perhaps it's a good thing you feel forced to rename it.
"Ever so Darkly" doesn't sound great either.
Take out "dark" if you want to stand out among the pack.

I haven't read your book, but from reading your post it sounds like revenge is a key element.
You could incorporate "revenge" into your title somehow.
Personally, I like to give the reader a hint of the content in my titles. Mention the knight/slayer directly maybe?
You might like "A Vengeful Knight Reborn" or you can go the Crime and Punishment route and call it "Betrayal and Redemption" though
that runs the risk of giving away some of the plot in the title.

Honestly, I like Bavarian Slayer. It's simple, cool, interesting and tells me what to expect. I'm not into vague sounding titles much.

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