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(281 replies, posted in Alpha to Omega - Review Group)

Great job! The quality of your writing speaks for itself.

Finished inline reviews of Stefanie's Day of Darkness, chapters 20 and 21.

Posted an inline review of Jube's World of Phyries, chapter 16.

Completed a review of chapter 3, in Randall's, Carnage in Singapore.

The new chapter fours are posted in the A to O version. When I get enough points I'll post them in the other one.

Completed a review of of Stephanie's, Day of Darkness, chapter 19.

Completed a review of NJC's, Earth by Fire, chapter 7.

Completed reviews of Chapter 13 and 14 in Suin's, Being Fifteeen

Completed a review of chapter 28 and 29 in Alkemi's, The Souring Seas.

Completed a review of chapter fifteen in Jube's, World of Phyries.

For those who've reached the end of chapters from me to review. Be patient. I'm waiting to build up points to post two new chapters in book one.

Completed a review of chapter fourteen in CJ's Raven's Curse.

Completed a review of chapter one in Randall's Carnage in Singapore

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(281 replies, posted in Alpha to Omega - Review Group)

Sorry A to O groupies that I've been negligent in doing reviews. It's been a busy summer. In addition I've decided to update all the chapters in book one that I haven't updated this year. So, you should see some revisions in the later chapters. I have a vacation coming up where I'm hoping to catch up on my writing. I usually plan for that but results are typically less than stellar. Hopefully, this time will be different.

Completed reviews of chapters 17 and 18 of Stephanie's, Day of Darkness.

Completed reviews of njc's, The Sorcerer's Progress, CH 4, 6.

Completed inline reviews of Suin's 'Surviving Fifteen' chapters 9-12.

Completed a review of Suin's, Surviving Fifteen, chapters 8 and 9.

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(281 replies, posted in Alpha to Omega - Review Group)

I recently received some regular reviews that were helpful summary overviews. Since I encounter so many reviews from point grabbers, I was pleasantly surprised by the altruism.

If you've been deluged with connection updates from me, I apologize. I've been doing a once through of all my book one chapters.

Posted inline reviews of chapter 26 and 27 of Alkemi's, The Souring Seas.

I was reviewing chapter 26 and 27 and I noticed that you were including specific dates in the story. I'm curious why you decided to pin this storyverse to modern events. IMO, this pulls it out of the Sci Fi genre and places it more in the speculative fiction column. Sci Fi stories with specific dates tend to age poorly. I'm thinking of 2001 A Space Odyssey or Space 1999. I think the story can work well with or without dates, but I think readers who have a futurist perspective can be irritated by 'dated' material.

Posted inline reviews for the prologue and chapter 2 of Jube's, The World of Phyries.

Completed a review of chapter 13 in CJ's, The Raven's Curse.

Completed a review of chapter 6 in Randall's, 'A Cartel's Revenge'.