Congratulations, Randy! Why am I not surprised? Your excellent writing deserves recognition.
Alan
Congratulations, Randy! Why am I not surprised? Your excellent writing deserves recognition.
Alan
Excellent!
Thanks, Dirk! Mission accomplished,
I forgot how to do it! Duh! Thanks in advance.
Alan
Bill,.
Wishing you continued progress in your recovery and I'm happy to hear all is going well. Keep at it!
Alan
Hi Everyone ...
As most of you know, I've been away for a couple of months. My wife's medical condition continues to decline and, recently, at a more rapid rate. I've been totally exhausted from providing the care she needs on a continuing basis. It's what I have to do to keep her out of a nursing home. She begged me to promise her that I would do everything in my power to make sure of that, and I did make her thatr promise. She watched both of her grandmothers wither away in a nursing home with poor care and little attention. I will do everything in my power to honor that commitment
For practical purposes, she is bedbound Her medical treatment team put in a request for a special exception to our insurance company to pay for home nursing. Surprisingly, they approved it! So, sometime next month, that process will begin. I won't bore you with the details, but it will take a tremendous load off my shoulders.
I've written very little lately other than tightening up a novel I started posting here several years ago: "Death Watch". So for the next week or so, I'll simply be reading and reviewing as much as I can.
I'm closing in on 80 years old and still in very good health - at least that allows me to care for her - the most important thing.
Looking forward to cruising the hallways of TNBW with all of you fine writers!
Alan
PS: I bought a brand new, very expensive laptop. Four days after I had it, it was hacked and all my email accounts and passwords for most sites were blocked from me. I had to call all my credit card companies, bank, mortgage company, etc. That's been a real PIA. I'm setting up a new email account, which I will post here. I'm locked out of all my previous emails.
Ditto to everything written above!
Alan
Hi Dirk ....
Thanks for the welcome back and the suggestion. Unfortunately, that didn't resolve the issue. But it obliged me to create new passwords for many of my sites - I was going to do that before year's end, anyway.
BTW, the reason for my extended absence was Di had another stroke and two minor strokes soon afterward, and then we both came down with a moderate case of COVID. Di's speech and mobility were affected, but she's improving.
I'll be back to reviewing in a day or two.
Again, many thanks.
Alan
Hi Sol ...
I renewed a quarterly membership in order to access the site again after a couple of months away. I'm not worried about any money I may have coming in return - don't worry about that. But I do have two other issues needing attention:
1. I was going to post a new chapter to a WIP. For a 1543-word chapter, the site wanted to charge me 9.43 points. Based on previous postings, I think 4 to 5 points would be normal. I've previously posted chapters in excess of 2,000 words that only cost me 6.8 - 7 points to post.
I did not post the chapter. The WIP is "Alabama Greene", if that helps. I know you're busy, so I'll wait to post the chapter until I hear back when you have time to do so.
(I posted this another thread earlier today, but saw that you wanted any issues needing your attention on this thread, so I reposted it here.)
2. When I last accessed my account before the site crashed, I had three hundred and twenty something points accumulated. It now says I have 266 points. If you could make those up I'd be most appreciative.
I'm not requesting any more than the two issues aforementioned, but I'd gratefully accept anything else you feel might be appropriate.
Thanks in advance,
Alan
Hi Sol,
I was going to post a new chapter to a WIP. For a 1543-word chapter, the site wanted to charge me 9.43 points. Based on previous postings, I think 4 to 5 points would be normal. I've previously posted chapters in excess of 2,000 words that only cost me 6.8 - 7 points to post.
I did not post the chapter. The WIP is "Alabama Greene", if that helps. I know you're busy, so I'll wait to post the chapter until I hear back when you have time to do so.
Thanks in advance,
Alan
Congrats, Randy! Your work is always worthy of commercial publication. You are one helluva International Spy/Thriller author. Here's wishing you lots of success with this and all future novels.
Alan
Dirk ...
If the clause following the word (that or which) would change the general meaning or definition of the sentence if omitted, use "that". Otherwise, use "which" should be used. That's what i was taught at the University of Maryland many, many years ago. I think (though not sure) that rule still holds true today. Hope that helps.
Alan
Welcome, Martin!
Yes, it is a splendid idea to start looking around becoming involved. You might care to read and review a few stories, novel chapters, poems, etc. If you read posts that offer points, you can start to accumulate points in order to begin posting your writing when you are ready to do. It's a great community. I've been here over 12 years and have learned so very much about the proper way to present my writing. Many good authors and poets hang out here who are ready to offer support and suggestions for improvement.
I'm an American but my father's side of the family is Welsh ... left Wales in the early and mid 17th century. The were primarily from Pembrokeshire and Glamorgan.
I hope you enjoy your time here and find it helpful. Wishing you the very best.
Alan
Welcome to the site, George. Good to have you with us. I've been here since 2008 and haven't regretted a minute of it. There are many excellent authors and poets here who can provide a wealth of information and assistance. I've workshopped five novels here that have been published. The help and input I received from fellow authors here has been invaluable.
Wishing you the very best with your writing. Take care and be safe ...
Alan
Way to go, Randy! You've earned it. Good luck.
273 as of this writing. Not been very active lately due to moving into our new house recently (lack of Internet for 9 days) and my wife's ever-dangerous health issues. Four to six appts almost every week - but it keeps her alive, so no complaints; just the issues as they are. Keep writing, everyone. Happy Thanksgiving to all!
Alan
Hi Stella ...
Welcome to the site! I've been here many years and my writing has improved dramatically, much to the credit of the folks on these forums. I hope you enjoy it as much as I have and equally benefit from it your time here.
I do think it would behoove you post the entirety of the first chapter, That would give us a better opportunity to look at the foundation of your story and general feel for your writing style.
Good luck with your writing!
Alan
Congratulations, ladies! All three were terrific posts. WTG, Bobbie!
Alan
Hey Randy ... so cool, my friend. You are an excellent writer and deserve this. Continued success!!!
Alan
So sorry to hear about that, my sweet friend. Will call you tomorrow afternoon or evening. It;s been rtough here, too. Here's hoping for everything good. Luv ya ...
Alan & Di
Thanks Ann & Randy. She's really tired today but seems to be relatively stable.
You're welcome.
Many thanks to all who have expressed your kind thoughts. Diana is home now. She's weak and mentally ragged out but her specific health issue is much better. Again, many thanks!
Will be back to reviewing and posting this evening.
Alan
Hi Dirk ...
In Creative Writing 101 I was taught pretty much the way you explained your style - other than don't use the "and". The one difference was we were suggested to limit the wording to four rather than three words. But a cruise through the internet earlier today said the styles vary significantly after the value of 100. In such cases, use what your publisher/editor/supervisor suggests as the rules are variable throughout the writing/print industry.
For what that's worth. Hope it helps. Good luck with your novel ...
Alan
Thanks everyone. She's doing a bit better today. We appreciate all of you.