Topic: To readers of "Frozen Tide"

Especially Norm d' Plume, Graymartin, Nathan Child's, allen, and mbledsoe. I've decided to drop the Ghost/Illsa sub-plot and make this a completely stand-alone novel (although there may be another familiar character who pops up, just not someone from the Ghost books.)

I've gone ahead and deleted chapters 16-22 and will be posting new versions in a week or so. I'll be making some slight changes to previous chapters (mainly changing the Spector character) but will update you in the author notes when I repost Chapter 16.

Most of you had concerns with the Ghost subplot; I had the same concerns myself, but writing it that way allowed me to move the plot forward and devise a way to end this without Ghost. Now I've figured that out, I've decided to play with that version and not continue with the Ghost-version.

That's why this site is so cool - it gives us the freedom to experiment like this.

Cheers,
Don

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Re: To readers of "Frozen Tide"

Revised chapters (starting with Chapter 16) are being posted. These are new, so if you've read before you can get credits for reading the new versions. I'd appreciate some reviews to see if I've addressed concerns.

And K, yes, I did try to write a Ghost Who Cries into a story without letting readers know from the beginning. Now, I try to sneak him in with only the illuminati suspecting. smile

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