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I thought only I did stuff like that. I once wrote and posted and entire chapter of Galaxy Tales and completely forgot to include God in the chapter. That shows you how useless that character sometimes was to the story.

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Things aren't going well for Laurie on the other site. They're already uncovered three nasty holes in the plot  which only acrobatics will patch. Ignorance was bliss

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Well, at least you're getting more than isolated chapter feedback.

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They're capitalizing "niche" when it's used in the general.

Bob walked back to Redhill Niche. Sally parted ways, headed back to her [N](n)iche.

Just when I thought I had evicted all the capitals in general use, now my head's boiling

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>>Just when I thought I had evicted all the capitals in general use, now my head's boiling

Ah, the accursed memories of capitalization in Galaxy Tales 1, 2, 3 and Archangel Syndrome 1 & 2. sad

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Actually, chatting with them, I can kinda see why they're using the capitals, since I'm kind of re-purposing an existing word. Unlike City/city or Village/village, niche generally can't refer to a settlement on its own. I should consider coining my own phrase.

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Ugh: https://www.seriouseats.com/sriracha-to … ize-or-not

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That's hilarious. I feel the author's pain. smile
I forget how many times I went back and forth between imperial and Imperial in Galaxy Tales/Archangel, but it was too many. I finally settled on lowercase because that's what Star Wars did in its books, but then Jack argued that I should treat it like Canadian. Eventually, I went back to several sources and discovered I had somehow screwed up the earlier research for imperial in Star Wars. They do capitalize it. Not sure how I screwed that up. It became absolutely clear as I toyed with different names to replace Realm. Most of the names fell into the same category as Jack's example, where it definitely required caps.

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They're near the end of reading, and I fear the fate of yet another draft has been ascertained. Pity. I thought this one was finally headed out the door.

If I can stick to a firm One-chapter-a-day, it'll take about a month. But I really want to be working on my angel story. Choices, choices.

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I decided to go back-fill the old chapters leading up to the ship. Please ignore

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So I face this weird problem where Dirk mentioned my characters mis-quoted the verse count in Deuteronomy.
I checked a random online bible and my French version: Both have 69 verses. Eng KJV: 68 verses. Some online KJVs differ

68's:
This NIV has 68: https://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?s … ersion=NIV (Their KJV version also 68)
MIT: https://web.mit.edu/jywang/www/cef/Bibl … UT+28.html

69's:
https://www.biblegateway.com/verse/en/D … %2028%3A69
https://www.sefaria.org/Deuteronomy.28. … p;aliyot=0

I feel there is no one choice I can make that half the readers don't trip up


Edit: It's the spot with all the curses promised to sinners, and we learn here that due to the android massacre if the Antiquties, the world has added few more curses to the end such as don't sleep with an android etc. This will be extremely important later on, so the particular chapter is perfect for my needs, though I could theoretically just invent a new "chapter 28.5"

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May I suggest using an alternate timeline? tongue

See Deu 29:1 for discussion on 28:69 vs 29:1. I suspect the Bibles you checked that are missing 28:69 have it as 29:1.
https://www.revisedenglishversion.com/c … eronomy/29

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Argh. "Thank you, captain" or "Thank you, Captain"

I wouldn't say "Thank you, Bus Driver" but https://www.grammarly.com/blog/punctuat … ob-titles/ says this also capitals as it is replacement for a name.

Okay, shoot me now x.x

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Ah, my favorite topic. Capitalization alone has probably added months to my writing over the past 12 years. smile

I questioned Gemini about this. It sees bus driver as merely a job, whereas it sees doctor, captain, astronaut, etc. as titles of respect. Of course, I'm sure there are plenty of cases where there would be no consensus as to whether to use titles of respect for given careers. I intentionally questioned it about astronaut and it says it should be capitalized in direct address ("Hello, Astronaut."). The latter is goofy since I've never heard of someone addressing an astronaut that way, although I suppose it's possible. Another case is someone with a master's degree vs. someone with a doctorate. Basically, no one calls me Master Dirk (except maybe if I had had a butler as a kid, lol), yet a friend of mine can be addressed as Dr. Lomow. Yet, if I'm a Jedi master or a mage, it would be Master Dirk.

If I had had hair over the past 12 years, I wouldn't anymore.

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How about pastor? Or sister for a nun? Father for a priest should be capped I think.

I asked AI Chat about nun or Nun, and it has 6 comments, the last two were interesting:
1. Cultural Variations: Different cultures or languages may have varying rules regarding capitalization.
2. Consistency: Always maintain consistency in your writing regarding capitalization rules.

So, make sure you know what the language and cultural rules are and be consistent. That's tough. Do Canadians, Brits, and Aussies have different rules for caps than Americans? :-)

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Father is an interesting case. Most Catholics use Father to refer to God the Father, and use father to refer to an unnamed priest in a given sentence. For example, Father Romano is walking around the Sea of Galilee. The father has never been here before. The Holy Trinity consists of the Father, the Son, and Holy Spirit.

I recommend the above approach to minimize confusion. Ditto for pastors, nuns, and sisters. If the "title" is followed by a name, capitalize it (e.g., Pastor Brown).

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Disregard any VQE posts you see cropping up. That's gonna be written at molasses-pace since I'm mainly running edits of the angels story

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Kdot wrote:

If you're looking for the story of a good guy who triumphs over evil, you are in the wrong place.

That's hilarious. You should use that somewhere on the book cover. And the picture of the girl is nasty.