Re: The Archangel Syndrome
Some of the green can go. For example, mention of the treaty vs the weapon's development doesn't come up again for what... 15 chapters?
Below is the proposed replacement for those idiotic mattergy weapons in the opening battle.
Aussie said, “She’s charging her new cannons.”
“Analyze!” St. James said [snapped].
“Based on their energy signature, I believe those are hyperspace weapons, able to fire at a target through higher dimensions. Whatever energy makes it through hyperspace to its target would effectively bypass our shields, which don’t exist there. Development and use of such weapons is strictly prohibited by the Neuer Mond Treaty.”
“Since when has that ever stopped the Imperium? Weaknesses?”
“The beam such a weapon fires is known to spread out very quickly in higher dimensions, obeying the inverse cube law. By the time it hits the target back in spacetime, it has lost considerable energy to space. As a result, Such weapons require enormous energy to fire a blast strong enough so that the energy that hits the target still has sufficient punch to penetrate a ship’s hull.
“The Hercules must be bypassing its powertron’s safety limits to concentrate sufficient energy to fire, risking a breach. Many of her other systems are dropping off to compensate.”