Star Wars 9.1

For any Star Wars nerds, I've put up a short story called Star Wars 9.1, which I plan to post on fan fiction sites in the near future. Would appreciate any feedback you'd care to give.

In a scene that takes place after episode 9, a Whill named Elrond has a conversation with Rey about his secret involvement in the key events of the original trilogy (episodes 4 - 6). Whills are immortal beings conceptualized by George Lucas that went unused in the final trilogy.

As with my Dune short story, Star Wars 9.1 is basically me totally messing with Star Wars canon without appearing to mess with canon. Just for the hell of it. :-)

Thanks
Dirk