Topic: Big thanks to Temple Wang and Pamlajj
Temple Wang is a wonderful and generous reviewer, coupled with her talent as a writer and she is certainly one to have in one's corner, THANK YOU SO MUCH! My book is going to be so much better because of you.
I promise to pay attention and learn so I can be a better asset for you
Pamlajj, I hated your input, wasn't very fond of you for haven given it, that is until I realized just how freaking right you were. I knew way down deep I was taking a wrong turn when deciding what section should follow the start of chapter one, but I was trying so hard to make it the strongest start ever I...well, I screwed up. Thanks for being honest about what you saw and how it made you feel! I'm completely lost as to how to advance that chapter but you were right, the reader needs to get to know Summer before they can care about her whinny bits.
I love this site and have missed you guys more than I can express.
It's nice to be home