New guy

Welcome, Alypius. I had a quick look at your book. Although you're likely to get a few initial reviews, I agree with Temple that you should publish your story in a group that requires/pays points. That way readers will have an incentive to read it and keep coming back for more. You accumulate points by reviewing material from other writers, which you then use to publish your own work (usually in Premium, but you can also cross-post to other groups). It's fairly easy to accumulate points (leave 5 comments using an inline review or 50 words in a regular review). Generally, though, if you want to establish long-term reciprocal relationships with other writers, you'll have to put in more than the minimum effort. Giving detailed reviews has the added advantage that you learn how others write.

Hope that helps.