Topic: Newbie posted new work

I hope it’s not too forward but a longtime member advised me to alert you to a posting of my short story, Just A Shower.  She said it would result in more reviews and a better trial of the site.  If this is too pushy, please disregard (I’ll get back in my proper place in line.). A word of caution:  Just A Shower includes explicit sexual and adult content.  However, I don’t believe it’s gratuitous.  Thanks so much for any help and if anyone thinks I’m out of line, whisper in my ear.

Re: Newbie posted new work

Nothing out of line; if you don't ask, you don't know if it would work or not -- sometimes it does, sometimes it doesn't. This is a fickle bunch and much depends on the tone of the question, in which case you pass muster in that you're not playing the "poor-little-me" card. I actually read your story yesterday, but didn't have time for a review. Most likely I'll get around to it this weekend, that being Sunday and Monday for me. I will say the sex is certainly not gratuitous, not even close. Good luck. Take care. Vern