51 (edited by njc 2017-10-21 23:03:29)

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Incidentally, Dorothy Sayers indulged in a Tom Swifty in =The Nine Tailors=:

" 'With the big sugar nippers they nipped off his flippers,' Lord Peter Wimsey quoted flippantly."
And if anyone knows from what his Lordship was quoting, please let me know.  (Oh, IIRC this occurred while examining a dis-handed corpse.)

Re: Dialogue tags to be avoided

One of the weirdest things I've ever read was The Sound & the Fury by William Faulkner. It starts out nearly unreadable, and as it changes perspectives, slowly comes into focus. In the middle of the book, the story is told through the point of view of a man contemplating suicide. The section is absolutely beautiful, but I recall it being nearly impossible to read. It begins somewhat penetrable, but as the character's anguish & sense of disorientation builds, his delivery stretches into one long run-on sentence of anguish which you, the reader, have to try to structure into language. I found the technique fascinating. I still remember that novel as one of the most complicated and excellent books I've ever read. He makes our inability to communicate -- to understand our own emotional centers -- palpable. With words on a page! With punctuation! #artist

53 (edited by dagnee 2017-10-22 18:30:00)

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njc wrote:

Incidentally, Dorothy Sayers indulged in a Tom Swifty in =The Nine Tailors=:

" 'With the big sugar nippers they nipped off his flippers,' Lord Peter Wimsey quoted flippantly."
And if anyone knows from what his Lordship was quoting, please let me know.  (Oh, IIRC this occurred while examining a dis-handed corpse.)

A Lay Of St. Gengulphus - Poem by Richard Harris Barham:

Thus, limb from limb, they dismember'd him
So entirely, that e'en when they came to his wrists,
With those great sugar nippers they nipp'd off his 'flippers,'
As the Clerk, very flippantly, term'd his fists.

smile

54 (edited by njc 2017-10-22 20:36:56)

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Wow!  Thank you.

Where can I find this?

Found it: http://www.exclassics.com/ingold/ing17.htm