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Charles_F_Bell wrote:
Dill Carver wrote:
Charles_F_Bell wrote:

The fact of the matter, evidenced in my more recent fiction writing, is I find value in expressing more in fewer words, and, in fact, point to the folly of the naturalist detailing every single fact{*} while entirely missing the context and meaning of facts.
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Great stuff. How's that working out for you?

Readers love nothing better than reading bullet points. Be sure to hi-light the pertinent words in case they are skipped over within the brevity.

What?

Dill Carver wrote:
Charles_F_Bell wrote:

The fact of the matter, evidenced in my more recent fiction writing, is I find value in expressing more in fewer words, and, in fact, point to the folly of the naturalist detailing every single fact{*} while entirely missing the context and meaning of facts.
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Charles_F_Bell wrote:

What?

This I assume is some of your "more recent fiction writing" ?

A complete mystery thriller novel encapsulated within a single word? Brilliant. Breathtaking. A work of genius.

I was going to suggest to you a sequel called;

Where?

I was asking what you meant by: "Readers love nothing better than reading bullet points. Be sure to hi-light the pertinent words in case they are skipped over within the brevity" and what it has to do with what I wrote.

But you know that already.

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This was a book recommendation, not an invitation to a Jaegermonster bar fight.

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njc wrote:

This was a book recommendation, not an invitation to a Jaegermonster bar fight.

For me, it turned out better than you intended. Almost any controversial subject, or subject that can be made controversial, brings out the best in the good critical thinkers and the worst in the poor critical thinkers.

It is the way humans have separated the wheat from the chaff ever since they started to communicate. You've advanced civilization even further than you expected to.

Memphis Trace

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njc wrote:

This was a book recommendation, not an invitation to a Jaegermonster bar fight.

You recommended a book written by an MFA in screenwriting, and I opine that a screenwriter has little to recommend for a novel/short story writer except in the broadest possible terms (i.e., have a protagonist). Your response almost proves my point in that you could not refrain from referencing LOTR, the movie series, and not the series of novels by Tolkien that barely resemble each other. If Matt Bird, MFA in screenwriting, has something for the novelist, does he actually use a novel as an example?

njc wrote:

This isn't script formula.  Yes, there's some large-scale plot and pacing advice but that's a small part of a big picture.
Item six in his big 13:  It's very hard to get audiences to care about any hero because they care about being hurt.

Every time I watch Jackson's Return Of The King there comes a moment, about two minutes after the cold open, when I ask myself if I really want to ride this emotional roller coaster again.

An invulnerable hero (the comic-book sort and many of the fantasy genre) is an extreme case of a character because he is not only not real but cannot be realistic, nor even an archetype of an ideal. So, your advice may, at best, apply to novel writing of a subset of one genre.

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In my Amazon review, I opine that the MFA should not be listed among Bird's qualifications because he states, in the firmest terms, that he had to unlearn the biggest lessons the MFA program taught him, and that the whole MFA program was a scam.  'scam' is his word.

What was that lesson?  Write from your heart, gut, or whatever organ you find rewarding.  Bird's lesson from the real world?  You have to write for your audience, in whatever medium.  Implied is that the greatest reward is winning the audience to your story.

We all judge books by their covers, in various ways.  I assert that the suspicions that you have formed, based on the cover, do not represent the book's content.  Only you can test that assertion to your own satisfaction.

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CFB wrote:

Absolutely, there is no determination of the value of the novella by the first three pages or first three chapters or all chapters until the very last word.

Anyone who thinks a sane person is going to read a 34,000 word (or thereabouts) novella with no merit until the very last word is obviously very proud of that last word. I suspect you should put that mindboggling word, whatever it is, a bit closer to the beginning. Take care. Vern

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What?  And give away the ending?  smile

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vern wrote:
CFB wrote:

Absolutely, there is no determination of the value of the novella by the first three pages or first three chapters or all chapters until the very last word.

Anyone who thinks a sane person is going to read a 34,000 word (or thereabouts) novella with no merit until the very last word is obviously very proud of that last word. I suspect you should put that mindboggling word, whatever it is, a bit closer to the beginning. Take care. Vern

I have already said that you have no quality of mind to read it, and that is one purpose for the prologue -- to weed out the feeble-minded.

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njc wrote:

In my Amazon review, I opine that the MFA should not be listed among Bird's qualifications because he states, in the firmest terms, that he had to unlearn the biggest lessons the MFA program taught him, and that the whole MFA program was a scam.  'scam' is his word.

The greatest preachers claimed to have been rescued from sin, though that certainly does not stop the collection plate being passed around.

njc wrote:

What was that lesson?  Write from your heart, gut, or whatever organ you find rewarding.  Bird's lesson from the real world?  You have to write for your audience, in whatever medium.  Implied is that the greatest reward is winning the audience to your story.

We all judge books by their covers, in various ways.  I assert that the suspicions that you have formed, based on the cover, do not represent the book's content.  Only you can test that assertion to your own satisfaction.

No, my suspicions are based on having read several how-to books regarding writing for commercial publication, and all of them were scams. How I might say they were scams is based on treatment of writing as if there were little difference between non-fiction, genre-fiction, non-genre-fiction, and TV/movie fiction except for a matter of marketing. Moreover, red flags go off when the "reviews" are all 5 starred.  And  "winning an audience to your story" is a feel-good platitude  that says nothing because no one will write for no audience even if there be a catharsis or the like effect in that writing.

If we are to ignore his screenwriting qualifications, what qualifications, tangible or otherwise, does he have? Does he, for example, point to a classic novel and analyze how it might written/marketed today? Something along those lines where he does distinguish a type of fiction that is not obviously commercial but may be made so, or is his advice to never write anything of the type that does not fit a commercial-fiction formula?

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njc wrote:

What?  And give away the ending?  smile

Implied by "until the very last word" is until the very last word has been read. I am quite proud of the fact the plot/characterization/theme cannot be determined in the first three chapters and prologue even if they are, in fact, all there, and the fact that even if a reader were to skip over and read the last chapter no such determination can be made. The book is an organic whole incomprehensible without having read it completely in order from beginning to end.

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Bird uses many examples from both books and movies, some of what works well, some of what flops.  His resume is drawn from his successful work.

And since his emphasis is on Story, it seems reasonable to conclude that he is addressing principally the fiction writer.

Amazon lets you preview parts of the book.  Why not do that?

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Charles_F_Bell wrote:
vern wrote:
CFB wrote:

Absolutely, there is no determination of the value of the novella by the first three pages or first three chapters or all chapters until the very last word.

Anyone who thinks a sane person is going to read a 34,000 word (or thereabouts) novella with no merit until the very last word is obviously very proud of that last word. I suspect you should put that mindboggling word, whatever it is, a bit closer to the beginning. Take care. Vern

I have already said that you have no quality of mind to read it, and that is one purpose for the prologue -- to weed out the feeble-minded.

You obviously missed the part about thinking "a sane person" is going to read such a thing; those are the ones you weed out. Should you have reviewers to point to who have bravely gone where no man has gone before in a blind fog of irrelevance until the last word, I might suggest they have the incentive of the review process and possible reciprocation to lead them on to the promised land and possibly exempt them from the sanity clause -- maybe a pun there, who knows. Take care. Vern

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njc wrote:

Bird uses many examples from both books and movies, some of what works well, some of what flops.  His resume is drawn from his successful work.

And since his emphasis is on Story, it seems reasonable to conclude that he is addressing principally the fiction writer.

Amazon lets you preview parts of the book.  Why not do that?

Believe me, I did not post a reply to your OP without checking it out, and in spite of his protestations to the contrary he has screenwriter fingerprints all over it.  It is even in the advice that every author should care about his audience and particularly the advice #4 on audiences don't care about stories; they care about characters, and I believe that is false for most genre of novels but is partially true for movies because the medium is first,visuals and second, plot; it is the actor's job to look good and be good. A novelist has to expend a thousand words to imitate the 30 second screen shot.  And, of course,  his only examples are and can be only from from movies. His extended movie biz anecdote on John Carter is irrelevant to a novel writer. I don't even agree that the movie flopped because of some unlikable John Carter who I thought was a very likable hero; it is the story that meandered and fizzled from action scene to action scene there were a bit silly. The history of Mars part, yes, movie goers don't not like that, but a genuine reader would -- until recently when authors are writing novels as if they were movies not realizing that is the whole point of a novel versus a movie is engaged versus passive entertainment.

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I hope the existence if this novel novella is a gedankenexperiment.  To create such a thing would be a labor upon one's own sanity.

I am reminded of the character Wonko The Sane in So Long and Thanks for All The Fish.  Wonko lives Outside The Asylum because he, Wonko, is sane, and wishes to remain so.  Wonko seems a wise man.

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vern wrote:
Charles_F_Bell wrote:
vern wrote:

Anyone who thinks a sane person is going to read a 34,000 word (or thereabouts) novella with no merit until the very last word is obviously very proud of that last word. I suspect you should put that mindboggling word, whatever it is, a bit closer to the beginning. Take care. Vern

I have already said that you have no quality of mind to read it, and that is one purpose for the prologue -- to weed out the feeble-minded.

You obviously missed the part about thinking "a sane person" is going to read such a thing; those are the ones you weed out.

No, I am weeding out people like you. Engage yourself in Catch-22 of whether you are sane or not, but you have no keen mind, sane or not.

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njc wrote:

I hope the existence if this novel novella is a gedankenexperiment.  To create such a thing would be a labor upon one's own sanity.

I think a proper gedankenexperiment strengths mental discipline rather than weakens it. And what I mean most by until it is read to the last word is the realization that the story is a fantasy in the absolute sense and not in the literary-genre sense: imagination unrestricted by reality in that the main premise is an absolute impossibility whereas the "world-building" of fantasy-genre stories is based on possibility given thus and so, not-unbelievable, alteration of reality.

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I hope the novwllisf doesn't use 1000 in lieu of the 30 swcond screen shot.  A 140 minute movie would correspond to.1120 pages!

The media are different, but the customer's relationship to the story is mostly the same.  And you may have missed the examples Bird gives of books turned int bad movies, and why.

Bird does use books for examples, too, just not as often.  And grsphic media as well ... Tintin and V for Vendetta get consideration.

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Charles_F_Bell wrote:
vern wrote:
Charles_F_Bell wrote:

I have already said that you have no quality of mind to read it, and that is one purpose for the prologue -- to weed out the feeble-minded.

You obviously missed the part about thinking "a sane person" is going to read such a thing; those are the ones you weed out.

No, I am weeding out people like you. Engage yourself in Catch-22 of whether you are sane or not, but you have no keen mind, sane or not.

Coming from one with your unique judgment which seldom melds with reality, I will take that as a compliment, thank you. Take care. Vern

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njc wrote:

I hope the novwllisf doesn't use 1000 in lieu of the 30 swcond screen shot.  A 140 minute movie would correspond to.1120 pages!

The media are different, but the customer's relationship to the story is mostly the same.

Can't a novelist put the visual of Danny DeVito in the role of the action hero instead of Tom Cruise: short, dark-haired, round-shouldered, italianate, and if the relation to the story is the same, why can't DeVito play Jack Reacher in a movie just the same as Cruise because Lee Child's Reacher looked as much as Devito as Cruise (not at all)?  The novel has narration, and that is its strength, and the movie has the visuals, but narration has power to do much more than visual description. I think the novel will die out, maybe it has already, because of a false equivalency drawn between them. It'd be like trying to make music be like speaking rhyme delivered over a beat going on in the background.

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The deatb of the novel is not immenent, and will depend, I think, on whether the failure of our exucation system accelerates.  Perhaps also the publishing industry will play a part, as it already has.  If the 'gatekeepers' regain control and dictate that we only read what they deem fit, it could go badly, especially if the gatekeepers grow further and further from the reading audience.  But if the self-publishing routes remain vital and people like Sad Puppies succeed (go to the source to find out about SP, don't rely on the media) then cheap ficion may again thrive.  And good fiction has thrived when cheap fiction has thrived.

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njc wrote:

The death of the novel is not imminent, and will depend, I think, on whether the failure of our education system accelerates.  Perhaps also the publishing industry will play a part, as it already has.  If the 'gatekeepers' regain control and dictate that we only read what they deem fit, it could go badly, especially if the gatekeepers grow further and further from the reading audience.  But if the self-publishing routes remain vital and people like Sad Puppies succeed (go to the source to find out about SP, don't rely on the media) then cheap ficion may again thrive.  And good fiction has thrived when cheap fiction has thrived.

From what I can tell, the non-traditional publishing path is encouraging pulp-fiction quality as if on steroids.  Indeed there has been a genuine market for low-brow story-telling (and I don't have a problem with that) -- that had little to do with "characterization" beyond stereotypes, and forget about thematic content. Movies also have taken up pulp fiction market. "Cheap fiction may again thrive" is what I mean by the death of the novel even if there continues to be stories presented in the written word. The ideal would be as one might have seen it in the mid-2oth century with a reasonable mix of high- and low-brow and  the rise of genre fiction but always balanced with what was labelled literary fiction in the '60's but has died out in some rush to homogenize literary culture into certain acceptable political-social values marking a move backwards since the mid 20th century.

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Charles_F_Bell wrote:
njc wrote:

The death of the novel is not imminent, and will depend, I think, on whether the failure of our education system accelerates.  Perhaps also the publishing industry will play a part, as it already has.  If the 'gatekeepers' regain control and dictate that we only read what they deem fit, it could go badly, especially if the gatekeepers grow further and further from the reading audience.

The ideal would be as one might have seen it in the mid-2oth century with a reasonable mix of high- and low-brow and  the rise of genre fiction but always balanced with what was labelled literary fiction in the '60's but has died out in some rush to homogenize literary culture into certain acceptable political-social values marking a move backwards since the mid 20th century.

Could an unknown-author Robert Heinlein be published today?  And you might answer 'certainly through the self-publishing route' but compare the sci-fi self-publishing Wunderkind one-note Hugh Howey -- is Howey any comparison to Heinlein?

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I don't know Howey so I can't say.  Most of my reading has been light.  But Sarah Hoyt, one of the Sad Puppies principals, has a series starting with A Few Good Men which is supposed to be quite serious in theme and thesis.  From what I hear, you might approve.

Nor do I know how far along Howey is.  Remember that Heinlein changed as he went, from Podkyne of Mars to Farnam's Freehold and And I Shall Fear No Evil to Stranger in a Strange Land and Time Enough for Love, to the self-parody of The Cat Who Walked Through Walls and To Sail Beyond the Sunset (which closed off his worlds and characters so others couldn't hack-write on them).

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njc wrote:

I don't know Howey so I can't say.  Most of my reading has been light.

Howey is "light."  His Wool is a perfect model for today. Start with an excellent Bradbury-derivative short story and squeeze as much you can  from it with little effort to add value in plot, theme, characters by KDP publishing, clever marketing through internet buzz, transitioning to traditional publishing, and finally movie deal in which the formula for a main character supplies womyn's fantasy and men's T&A quest. His new series project: It wasn't easy for Molly Fyde being the only girl in Flight Academy, but getting expelled was even worse. Abandoned by her family when she was young and now tossed from the only home she's ever known, her future looks bleak.  $$$