Topic: feedback
Way into a short story I have this line:
Tears did not fall. Her face now meloncolic, of a frozen and statued composure that the best, the finest artists of the human form try to capture... but never can, probably never will.
Statued... can I use this word in this way? Well, I know I can, but does it work? This line is in initalics as if spoken by a very distant narrator
Tanks~ max