Re: The Sorcerer's Progress
I'm only working on 5 at the same time. I bow to the master.
Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi → The Sorcerer's Progress
I'm only working on 5 at the same time. I bow to the master.
You have got your plot lines worked out and your characters fully drawn. This new plot horror will be good for leading a good guy into serious mistakes (I'm thinking maybe Glaselle) and opening some interesting, foreshadowing questions (How do we tell history about this? Maybe we shouldn't?)
But the culmination of the thread needs to wait until Hell comes for things, handbasket in hand. I can't leave too much time to brood on this one, because folly-made disaster must follow fast and faster.
I'm only working on 5 at the same time. I bow to the master.
I'm working on a grand total of ....
wait for it ....
have you guessed it yet ....
ONE! And I can't keep up all the time.
You didn't start writing your story 18 years ago and piddle around without a group for 16 of those years. So keeping up isn't really a worry. You got your story into the gate and joined an online group right away. Someone had to hit me over the head before I took their advice and joined TNBW.
And your books take place at the same time, threads converging. Mine are sequential.
You didn't start writing your story 18 years ago and piddle around without a group for 16 of those years. So keeping up isn't really a worry. You got your story into the gate and joined an online group right away. Someone had to hit me over the head before I took their advice and joined TNBW.
I'll give you that! And yeah, it's not a competition, the only thing that matters is getting it done!
I'm slowly getting my electronics parts into some kind of order. A casual observer will see piles of neatly labelled boxes ... but won't be able to see the shrinking of the piles and trays that are emptying into them.
I beg to differ about the timing of hard spirits. Here are a few sources...not the best, but something.
Proof that distilled liquor (in bulk) was in production as early as 1495 according to taxation records. http://www.scotch-whisky.org.uk/underst … ch-whisky/
Text about the history of distillation:
A major development in alcohol during the Middle Ages (about 500–1500 CE) was the discovery of distillation and the subsequent production of distilled spirits. However, there is no agreement as to exactly when or where distillation was first perfected. Authorities disagree as to whether it was in China, Greece, Italy, Arabia, or elsewhere (1). However, strong evidence suggests that it was in Arabia (28–30). What is clear is that Albertus Magnus (1193–1280) was the first person to clearly describe the process whereby distilled spirits could be produced (1).
Physicians, monks, and others slowly became interested in distilling alcohol as a medication rather than as a drink produced for enjoyment or other purposes. It was a professor of medicine, Amaldus of Villanova (d. 1315), who apparently named distilled spirits aqua vitae (water of life). He wrote, ‘We call it [distilled liquor] aqua vitae, and this name is remarkably suitable, since it is really a water of immortality. It prolongs life, clears away ill-humors, revives the heart, and maintains youth’ (31, p. 172). During the fifteenth century a German physician identified over two dozen conditions that he claimed distilled spirits benefitted or cured (31).
Source: http://www.oxfordscholarship.com/view/1 … chapter-01
OK, while I'll agree that distilled spirits might not be in your world, they have travel (and therefore trade). Also, why would Merran already know this? Wouldn't she have to ask if whiskey was around and then find out that the only alcohol they have for sterilization is in beer and wine? This rest stop is a random moment. How does she know the drinking and vinting habits of a random rest stop?
I mean not in the world (universe), and not just in that particular World. None of these characters has even heard of such a thing, with the very slightly possible exception of Kirsey and Master Threckesrom.
Remember, in our world distilled spirits, even by your dates, did not become widespread untill the 1400's.
what time period is the tech of your worlds set in? There should be some homogeny since they have foot traffic (and therefore trade) between worlds. 1500? 1600?
The only cross-world trade is what sorcerers carry. Well, not quite but I haven't developed that yet.
The correspondence isn't exact, but a World-dependent mix from the twelfth century to maybe the fifteenth, with some things ahead or behind. (Kirsey's math is pushing the nineteenth.)
If they don't have distilled spirits, try wine? They had plenty of that well before JC
I took a jump ahead a bit to record something that's floating around in my head. But found that I need to get a few inconsistencies out of the topography. I'll be working on that tonight.
I lost a page of notes and spent about three hours more or less reconstructing it. I got a lot, and a few things I missed last time, but I missed things this time too. This is a list of disturbing things that Merran finds in her first few hours at the Academy. I've got three sequences to write for all this, and yes, I'm skipping ahead because a bunch bof ideas came together.
I'll work again this evening.
I created it. Two and a half days later it was not with any of my notes.
It will come out as soon as you have reconstructed it if your life is like mine! Good luck!
I'm not sure they'll ever get fully reconstructed.
I just tested the naked circuit board for the redesigned/rebuilt LDO 12v regulated supply. It doesn't work. I know where the wiring error is, but I'm not going to fool with it now. (It looks like there may be two complementary errors.)
Time to wash up and get to writing.
After this I have a long list of partially finished electronics. The first couple of items on the list aren't too big a deal, although they may take an hour or two. After that I have a somewhat larger project, though it should be straightforward (crosses fingers).
Just found an interesting spoonerism: Fire and Ice; Ire and Vice. There's something very ... political ... about it.
I'm not sure they'll ever get fully reconstructed.
I meant the original ones would surface the moment after I put the last period at the end of the last sentence.
So lucky I should be!
A quick status note on the part I'm writing right now:
I sat down with my notebooks sixteen hours ago. The first four I spent on other things. The next four I spent mixing other stuff with this material. It took two more to get fully immersed in it.
And then the story began to flow. Unfortunately, I'm logorrheaic and I'll have to trim it once it's typed up. But that won't be so hard. Right now the hard part is keeping it from all tumbling out, out of order; keeping myself in the same story moment as my pen. I stop to make notes for later parts and notes about things to fix in previous parts. I stop to check my shorthand spelling. I stop to go to the bathroom or drink more coffee. And then I tumble on, so long as I'm still in it. I'm feeling a whole lot of the emotions that my characters are feeling or soon will feel, and people who have seen me like this have asked if I am alright. The expressions on my face worry them.
Roughly divided, I have five sections:
Approach in black and white
Loss of innocence: enigma
Answers in the undying world of the dead
The precincts of the living: appalling and appealing
Thor: questions answered and questions unasked
I hope when this is done, Amy will smell clews ... and maybe even find a few. And I hope the foreshadowing runs deep into the story. (I also hope it's not too consarned trite.)
I've finished the first section and almost finished the second. We'll see if I can get to the third before sleep comes to redeem its rights.
And then I have to go and fill in what I missed, but first I owe Amy some stuff and I should do a review or two as well.
One and two done. I have a version of three that should splice nicely.
Got maybe half of one-and-two typed up, with the first edit-for-composition done in process. I'm near 1,800 words.
There's a LOT of description. Tolkien could manage it. I don't know if I can. You'll tell me.
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