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Talulah reflected that answering "No" to the question, "Hello, is any one in?" might have blown her cover.
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Talulah reflected that answering "No" to the question, "Hello, is any one in?" might have blown her cover.
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Another one?
Two women at a window, c. 1655–60. Bartolomé Esteban Murillo.
Or,
Intérieur, c. 1868-69. Edgar Degas.
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(Intérieur)
Cynthia sobbed and Gregory grimaced; with a full quart of clotted-cream spilled into the keyboard of their prototype laptop -- Windows '1865 was never going to reboot after this.
30 2016-05-20 21:11:24 (edited by Dill Carver 2016-05-20 21:14:21)
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(Two women at a window, peering into the Intérieur room)
"He's insisting that he said, 'Make sure that you pack plenty of sun-screen, but I thought that he'd said icecream too!"
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Intérieur: "Vera, I have no idea where the octopus went. Will you please stop packing?"
Window: "It's on the bed!"
