I probably won't be able to do serious reviews for 20+ hours.
In general, I still have all sorts of problems with the openings, less with the confontation. Once we get to Tell Me True you have a compelling story, even if there are parts to be tweaked.
A few questions: How much do you want to depend on the reader having read Acts? What do you want the reader to understand about Kha and the circumstances when he reaches Aerie? What do you want the reader to understand about Kha and the circumstances that cannot be expressed in 120 words of clean exposition and narrative summary?
So, what state of mind was Kha in when he took the Black Staff? Did he do it willingly? What do other characters (like, say, Anver, but excluding Lucas and Maalok) know about how Kha found and said about the Black Staff?
How important, truly important, to the characters and the plot, are Kha's distrust of herbals?