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Dirk,
May be relevant: https://youtu.be/BymDPZ7TyNM . Start around minute 26 and give it at least 5 minutes.

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Is it the multiplicity of selves that you wanted me to take note of (for Joseph and Apollo), the fact that you don't have perfect knowledge but need to make a decision (which route to take in Israel), or having a watcher/judge?

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First and last, though it's all worth hearing.

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My watcher refuses to shut up about things I did wrong as a little kid. It's really annoying.

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Wa'tcher beef?

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I just finished populating an events table with cross-references into my best pilgrimage book. Long sigh. There's some missing detail for locations the author didn't include, but I can get that from online resources and the other (alphabetized) travel guides later. I'm sick of research, so I guess this means I'm starting the outline. Woohoo!

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I decided to research Capernaum (Jesus's base) yesterday rather than work on the outline. Allowing time for errands, it may take me until the end of the week to finish with the town (the remains of a synagogue, two churches (one "hovering" atop St. Peter's home), the remains of numerous stone-walled homes, what appear to be restored stone piers, and a modern building whose purpose I'll simply have to guess at). Thank God for tourists with cameras. I also found an online tour/guide for several of the key Christian sites. I hope to finish his video of Capernaum tonight.

Funny thing. Most of the pictures show the surrounding landscape almost completely devoid of green. I figured it was barren like many other desert areas of Israel and didn't consider seasonality. During growing season, the whole landscape is transformed into countless shades of green. I forgot that Galilee is incredibly fertile. Mostly grasses near the town from what I can tell. Virtually no trees until you get to the low hills in the distance. Everything around the town was probably cut down over the 1300 years that the town existed.

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it may be "mostly grassy" now, but a lot can change regarding flora/fauna in 2000 years. Could even have been vineyards or woody back then

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I agree. There will be a few occasions where Connor sees Christ in a location that's been reconstructed differently from its original design (e.g. no one knows where Jesus lived in Nazareth, but Connor will be able to see it without regard for modern homes that stand in the way). I'll add flora/fauna changes too. Connor can see it all in his mind's eye.

Thanks.
Dirk

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Good grief. I just spent 10 minutes looking for a note I had made about the First Jewish Revolt. I have handwritten notes that I take while watching videos. I looked through them repeatedly but couldn't find the note. That's when I remembered I have virtually all of my notes in a Word document. I've only been using it non-stop for a year, including earlier today. I need a good daytime weed. Counting down to Oct. 17!

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What do you do if the official Israeli government website disagrees repeatedly with multiple Capernaum tour guides/videos and Wikipedia? The Israeli site is incomplete, but it has painfully detailed (albeit useless) archaeological descriptions of the synagogue that I haven't found elsewhere, and it acknowledges the excavations led by specific Franciscan fathers. For example, two of my sources say that the large hall in the synagogue was for scriptural readings and that the smaller east room was for prayer. The Israeli site lists the large hall as the prayer hall. Damned if I do, damned if I don't.

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Ah, what a pickle

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More of a gherkin, actually.

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It's amazing how much misinformation there is on what seem like credible websites. I read on one site that the Sea of Galilee was saltwater. In reality, it's freshwater, fed by natural springs. Stuff like this could lead to big errors in my book.

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The folks on the Catholic forum, including two priests, were very helpful regarding the languages Jesus spoke. His native tongue was Aramaic, but he also spoke Hebrew and probably Greek. Hebrew was the language of the Scriptures, Temple, and prayer. Greek was the language of commerce and therefore the most common language of the Roman Empire, except in and around Rome, where Latin dominated.

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Dirk B. wrote:

It's amazing how much misinformation there is on what seem like credible websites. I read on one site that the Sea of Galilee was saltwater. In reality, it's freshwater, fed by natural springs. Stuff like this could lead to big errors in my book.

Learned something new. I thought saltwater was part of the definition of "sea" until today

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It's also known as Lake Tiberias, among other names.

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Note to self: reconcile official Israeli website about Capernaum with other sources.

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Anyone have any idea how a single row of columns can divide a room into three aisles along three walls?

The prayer hall was divided by a row of columns (16 in all), that created three narrow aisles along three of its walls.

I'm inclined to assume that "row" here doesn't necessarily mean a straight line. I'm guessing it's a continuous "row" of columns that runs along three of the walls.

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It could also be a u-shaped arc rather than a geometric straight line.

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Yes. That's what I meant, but you explained it with one word. Nicely done, Professor.

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Capernaum is done, with one day to spare! It's a ridiculous fifteen pages of notes and photos that will probably be reduced to just two pages when integrated into the story. I'm going to have to scale back the number of sites Connor visits, otherwise I'm going to need six more months to research the rest of them. Granted, Capernaum was Jesus's base and the site of most of his miracles, so 1.5 weeks spent on it is fine. Jerusalem is the real bear. I'll probably need up to a month to do it justice.

Got a cool new 8.5 x 11 printed book that follows in the footsteps of Jesus. Lots of charts, pictures, and additional information. The pilgrimage books and travel guides weren't enough, and the web and YouTube videos are full of iffy information. Here's hoping the author knows what he's writing about.

Also, I settled on the Israeli government website as a more reliable resource than the tour guide videos and Wikipedia, although Wikipedia is still one of my main resources.

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Ugh. Even after trimming the list of events in Jesus's ministry to only the most spectacular ones, that still leaves fifteen more events to research. So far, I've only done four, which took over three weeks. Fortunately, I have enough to start the outline.

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You're going to need a lot of cardinals to kill off in order to cover 19 events

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I don't plan to kill one per chapter, but yes it will be a large number.

I'm not sure yet how to deal with the fact that the police would normally put together a large task force to capture a serial killer, especially one killing cardinals in Rome. I'd rather not do a task force since it requires other unnecessary characters and a lot more information about police procedures, which I don't yet have. Even if I wanted to do it, I'd have to base it off how the US would handle the situation, since there's no information available in English about Italian police procedures. The Vatican's Secretary of State (the most senior position among cardinals) will be involved in both halves of the story (Connor, serial killings) as a proxy for an ailing pope (he appears at the end of book one). Since the Vatican believes it's the Antichrist, I'm considering having the cardinal insist on secrecy to avoid freaking out the whole world. That would allow me to limit the number of police personnel involved to a manageable number. There would be obvious rumors about multiple deaths and a possible serial killer, but the Vatican and police could deny it. They could get away with that because many of the deaths will seem like natural causes, accidents, even suicide. The number of outright murders is still up in the air. I plan to have a female police detective and her counterpart from the Vatican police as the lead investigators.

What do you think?

EDIT: There won't be a separate chapter for each of Jesus's events. Events in close proximity to each other in Galilee will be covered in the same chapter. Jerusalem will probably need two or three chapters.