Thank you, the end of the chapter comes in part three. But your point is well taken. I'll be interested in seeing how you feel out it then.
26 2018-04-15 13:54:47
Re: Germ Line: Revolution - Stephen A. Carter (12 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
27 2018-04-14 20:43:20
Re: Germ Line: Revolution - Stephen A. Carter (12 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Part two of chapter 1 now posted. Looking forward to the reviews.
28 2018-04-12 18:34:47
Re: Germ Line: Revolution - Stephen A. Carter (12 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Gotcha. And thank you, Norm, for the glowing endorsement. If you have anything you want me to check out please let me know.
29 2018-04-12 15:48:06
Topic: Germ Line: Revolution - Stephen A. Carter (12 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Hi all!
I joined the group at the suggestion of Norm/Dirk. I enjoyed his critique and figured he might be onto something here. I'm just starting to dig into the site, and see it will take awhile to discover what is most useful. Right now I am selfishly deeply involved in getting my book finished, and am horrified at the thought of hiring an expensive editor and getting it wrong. So far the feedback I have received on the first portion of my first chapter has been fantastic. The quality of the commentary and suggestions is proving invaluable. I'm both humbled and very appreciative of the company within this site. I hope to connect with more of you as time permits. I would truly appreciate any feedback you can give on the edited version of my chapter, since I implemented most of the suggestions I've received so far. Also, since I tend to be selfish and self-absorbed, please let me know if there's anything I can do for you.
30 2018-04-11 16:49:18
Topic: Hi! Just joined the free trial. (0 replies, posted in Mysteries & Thrillers)
Thought this might be a good group to check out the first chapter of my thriller GERM LINE: REVOLUTION. I'd love your feedback.
TIA!
31 2018-04-11 16:41:36
Re: Passing on Some Good News (14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Outstanding!
32 2018-04-11 16:32:18
Re: Hi! Just joined the free trial. (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thank you, Randall. I'm looking forward to connecting with some awesome writers.
33 2018-04-11 04:15:29
Topic: Hi! Just joined the free trial. (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I've posted the first chapter of my debut novel, GERM LINE: REVOLUTION, and I know you're excited as hell to read the mind numbing ramblings of yet another neophyte. I'm so excited I'm about to pee myself in anticipation of your scathing and soul crushing daggers of wit. I truly can't wait so please, be brutal. If you can't be brutal, be frank. And if you can't be frank, be Frank.
TIA!
