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Hey, my book does this a lot too, especially in the later chapters. The best way that Ive found is to put a

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And then pick up with the other character. This makes the break obvious and the reader will pick up on the transitions after a while. Another thing that helps is to leave some of what happened up to the reader. Let them piece some of the story together themselves. I started off with entire chapters being one character or the other, but it doesnt make sense to force the format when it could be much easer done in a simpler manner to accomplish the same thing.