A good workman respects her tools.
A great workman respects his craft.
Memphis Trace
A good workman respects her tools.
A great workman respects his craft.
Memphis Trace
I would counsel writers not to worry about using irregular verbs. Interested readers are almost never confused, irregardless—yes, irregardless is a word https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Irregardless, and a valuable one for certain uses—of which you choose between verbs. Pedants may snicker at you, but irregular verbs are a sure way for creating a voice for your non-stuffy character. Even if your POV slips up and gets one right instead of wrong, it is more of a commentary on pedantry than it is on communication to interested readers.
Memphis Trace
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Sorry I will miss this lively and interesting discussion in order to play golf for a few days in Charleston SC. The sacrifices we must make, but maybe I'll be lucky and sober enough to peek in on occasion. Carry on. Take care. Vern
Check in with Pat Conroy's spirit when you're forced to wait for that slow-assed group ahead of you.
Memphis
Memphis Trace wrote:For the record, my opinion of Atticus—on reading To Kill a Mockingbird a second time after having lived through years of Southern violence against blacks—was not that he was racist in the story...
I have absolutely no doubt that Atticus is a racist. He expresses that fact over and again.
Your surety from a partial reading of To Kill a Mockingbird as an adult that Atticus is shown to be a racist has piqued my interest as an aspiring critical reader enough that I intend to read it again. I've read it end to end twice and came away with the exact opposite opinion: that he was half again too good to be believed as a Southern-educated white man in Alabama in 1933. He qualified as a saint for me.
I very much think the issue concerning our conflicting opinions may be caused by the definition of the word 'Racist'.
After my last post in this thread, that we may define racist differently flashed through my mind, but I forgot to mention it. I am glad you thought to mention it. In most of the disputes I've had with men of good will in my life, it often comes down to having a different meaning for some of the words in the discussion.
Who knew? If you Google the following words; Racist definition ...then several definitive variations are found and some published definitions vary immensely.
Definition 1: a person who believes that a particular race is superior to another.
The example you gave “Atticus says cheatin‘ a colored man is ten times worse than cheatin’ a white man,” I muttered. “Says it’s the worst thing you can do.” is the utterance of a racially sensitive saint by the definition of racist.
I think it is the utterance to his children of a man who recognizes how massively the system had always been stacked against blacks in the South, and for a person to cheat a black was really the moral equivalent of kicking a man you stood by and watched be bound and gagged.
Definition 2 : holding a belief or doctrine that inherent differences among the various human racial groups determine cultural or individual achievement, usually involving the idea that one's own race is superior and has the right to dominate others or that a particular racial group is inferior to the others.
There is nothing I see in the statement “Atticus says cheatin‘ a colored man is ten times worse than cheatin’ a white man,” I muttered. “Says it’s the worst thing you can do.” that suggests Atticus believes blacks are inherently inferior or that whites have a right to dominate blacks. Indeed he suggests that cheating blacks is the worst thing you can do. I believe it is a statement that condemns the racist system that blacks were faced with.
Definition 3: a person who directs prejudice, discrimination, or antagonism against someone of a different race based on the belief that one’s own race is superior:
I think by this definition, Atticus comes out as a racial saint in To Kill a Mockingbird. Although he recognized that the system had exalted whites to a superior position, he was never antagonistic toward blacks. And in my memory, he did not discriminate nor was he prejudiced against blacks. I thought he bent over frontwards to discriminate for blacks. I will be most interested on my third reading of the story to see chinks in his armor that I didn't see on my first two readings.
So Atticus is definitely a racist according to definition one; he may be or maybe not be racist according to definition two, but is definitely not a racist according to definition three.
In my two readings of To Kill a Mockingbird, I found it the story of a man who was fighting against the state-imposed circumstances that put blacks at an insurmountable disadvantage. I never believed he was beset with the widespread Southern fundamentalist-Christian belief at that time that blacks were cursed by God: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Curse_of_Ham
An excerpt:
The story's original objective was to justify the subjection of the Canaanites to the Israelites,[4] but in later centuries, the narrative was interpreted by some Jews, Christians, and Muslims as an explanation for black skin, as well as slavery.[5]I've always assumed (based my judgment upon) definition 1: And Atticus certainly believes there are differentials in terms of superiority between the races. He feels these differences because they appear to be self-evident within his society. To me he acts like a Veterinarian who cares very deeply for the animals that he treats but at the same time doesn't consider the dog he is treating to be on the same intellectual level as he, the Vet.
I believe To Kill a Mockingbird shows Atticus to believe the differences between the races to be Founding Fathers' codification of a system of slavery and Southern reconstruction laws http://www.history.com/topics/american- … nstruction meant to restrict freed blacks and ensure their availabilty as a labor force.
Atticus doesn't consider the colored-folk to be his equal; hell, he doesn't even consider white women to be equal to the intellect of white men.
Atticus certainly doesn't consider colored-folk to have equal access and protection to the systems he has access to. As a lawyer, he would have been acutely aware of the legal doctrine in US constitutional law that justified racial segregation. It was a doctrine firmly adhered to in Alabama right up to and through the Brown v. Board of Education decided some 20 years after To Kill a Mockingbird took place.
Atticus is clearly an elitist and clearly a racist if judged by definition 1:
Here is a link to a wikipedia article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Separate_but_equal that may give you a bit of a look through my eyes; and a sense of why I didn't consider Atticus's recognition of blacks' unequal access to the protections of the law to be a result of their inferior intellect or morals.
However, although he is quietly confident of his racial superiority, Atticus never directs prejudice, discrimination, or antagonism against those of a different race. In fact the is opposed to those actions, and as such is clearly not a racist according to definition 3:
It is most interesting to me that you and others see Atticus's racial superiority in To Kill a Mockingbird where I didn't see it until Go Set a Watchman. I plead guilty to your accusation of being a skim reader. Both times.
Both times I read it, I became so immersed that I never saw any indication that Atticus felt he was inherently superior to blacks. ¿Maybe, as the boys down at the pool hall say, third time will be a charm for me?
And another thing I never thought about Atticus, until you raised it in this discussion, was that he was a sexist. I think you base this in part on "In Mockingbird. Atticus lets his young daughter run around in overalls; he doesn’t force her into dresses, because he is a good dad. He understands that she’s a serious person, but when Scout voices her indignation that women aren’t allowed to serve on juries, Atticus says, “I doubt if we’d ever get a complete case tried—the ladies’d be interrupting to ask questions.” He’s a good dad, a good patriarch—but he’s raising Scout into another version of permanent childhood. He doesn’t think a woman has the moral capacity of a man." Quote from link above.
I've emboldended the last sentence in your quoted material. I will note that the writer assigned the motive to Atticus of believing that a woman doesn't have the moral capacity of a man as his reason for his humorous explanation of why women weren't allowed to serve on the jury. I think this is an opinion of a person looking to find flaws in Atticus, at least the opinion of a person unlike me who confesses to being too immersed in the story to take this seriously. As I recall, Scout was doing everything she could to be a "boy" to gain equal access to the world with Jem and Dill. I guess that is why I would have read that as Atticus trying to be humorous, if I attached any motive at all.
Anyway, given this writer's accusation of sexism, I now am alerted to look for sexism in Atticus on my 3rd reading. I will try to keep in perspective, though, of just how awkward for the story for Lee to incorporate a father explaining to a 6-year old, regardless that she was as precocious as Scout, that https://www.aclu.org/blog/speakeasy/jury-ones-peers
An excerpt:
As late as 1961, the Supreme Court, in a unanimous decision, upheld a Florida law automatically exempting women from jury service. According to the court:
Despite the enlightened emancipation of women from the restrictions and protections of bygone years, and their entry into many parts of community life formerly considered to be reserved to men, woman is still regarded as the center of home and family life. We cannot say that it is constitutionally impermissible for a State, acting in pursuit of the general welfare, to conclude that a woman should be relieved from the civic duty of jury service unless she herself determines that such service is consistent with her own special responsibilities.
The ACLU, as part of its program to desegregate the judicial system in the South, included claims on behalf of women in cases it brought to stop racial discrimination in jury selection. In one of those cases filed in Georgia in the early 1970s, we challenged state laws that excluded women from serving on juries and allowed them to opt-out of jury duty.
I would add that it was only after years of women taking to the streets in America, that the white man's Constitution was amended in America to grant women the right to vote in 1920, a mere 15 years before To Kill a Mockingbird took place. Certainly not enough time for Alabama to subject the poor things the august responsibility of serving on a jury trying a black man accused of violating a white woman.
So there you have it;
Atticus is definitely a racist.
Atticus is definitely not a racist.
You can alter your POV to make either of these 'facts' true.
I am reminded about how much further I have to go in my aspirations to become a good critical thinker about what I read. I will confess to reading To Kill a Mockingbird a first time at a time in my life when I was turning over every Southern rock looking for a white civil rights hero. I believe that is why I was stunned 50 years later when I read Go Set a Watchman—to discover that Atticus was indeed a died-in-the-wool racist.
It also explains to me why I found Atticus to be a flat, and unbelievable character on reading To Kill a Mockingbird a second time, some five years before reading Go Set a Watchman. I was missing all the hints you were getting, the part of the iceberg Lee elided from To Kill a Mockingbird, to dignify my perception of the story of Atticus as the white hero I was looking for.
It also explains to me why I found Atticus a much greater hero after reading Go Set a Watchman. It gave me hope and a model for being a father and grandfather that would recognize and overcome the moral corruption pressed on me the by the history I endured and by my preconceptions to hide my moral corruption under the sort of good counsel Atticus dispensed to Scout.
Cheers!
Cheers to you too, Dill. As always, I really appreciate the energy you bring with your POV.
Memphis
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We lost another great one. Pat Conroy, author of "The Prince of Tides," "The Lords of Discipline." "The Great Santini," "Beach Music," and others has died at age 70. RIP, Pat Conroy. You turned what made you the man you became into wonderful stories.
Indeed he did http://www.pressherald.com/2016/03/05/e … ies-at-70/
An excerpt I found fascinating:
Although his mother was fearful of revealing family secrets at first, the book gave her a newfound sense of strength. When she filed for divorce, she reportedly gave a copy of “The Great Santini” to the judge as evidence of spousal abuse.
But the success of a 1979 movie adaptation helped heal family wounds. Conroy reconciled with his father, who often signed copies of his son’s book as “The Great Santini.”
Memphis
[SNIP]
Memphis (thanks!) has mentioned in length Harper Lee’s sequel novel ‘Go Set a Watchman’ and interested with a view to purchase and read a copy, I set about researching my potential investment of money and time.
Wow!
I mean WOW!
Turns out (directly from Lee’s pen this time) that Atticus is a racist!
[SNIP]
For the record, my opinion of Atticus—on reading To Kill a Mockingbird a second time after having lived through years of Southern violence against blacks—was not that he was racist in the story. My opinion was the opposite: that he was a goody two shoes champion for a beset black man. I found it difficult to suspend disbelief for his role in the story. I would have bet $5 against a rolling coconut doughnut that he wouldn't have survived doing what he did as Robinson's lawyer in Alabama in 1933.
And I see nothing, nada, that is racist in the statement you pointed out:
“Atticus says cheatin‘ a colored man is ten times worse than cheatin’ a white man,” I muttered. “Says it’s the worst thing you can do.”
Go Set a Watchman was the first hint I got that Atticus was a racist. And it made an even bigger hero (as a father and role model for his children) of him than I found him to be To Kill a Mockingbird both times I read it.
When I read Go Set a Watchman, I came to understand that what kept him alive, able to survive Alabama in his role as Robinson's lawyer was that he was still a member of the White Citizens' Council.
Memphis
When saying that act A is a worse moral violation than Act B, you may be saying any or all of three different things.
You may be saying that A does more harm than B. You may be saying that A shows greater moral depravity than B. You may be saying that A leads the actor to deeper moral depravity than B.
You may be saying two of them, or three. Does their badness add? Does it multiply?
I suppose you can chide Atticus for using an arithmetic metaphor where it cannot literally hold, or be held to. But his error is no worse than that of the little Friar in =The Bridge of San Luis Rey=, and much less considered.
I wasn't chiding Atticus for his arithmetic. I was using 22.73 times as compared to 10 times to show that I more than agreed with your comment that "... Atticus takes the world as he finds it AS THE WORLD HE LIVES IN. He tries to change it AFTER assessing it clearly and accurately."
Memphis
When saying that act A is a worse moral violation than Act B, you may be saying any or all of three different things.
You may be saying that A does more harm than B. You may be saying that A shows greater moral depravity than B. You may be saying that A leads the actor to deeper moral depravity than B.
You may be saying two of them, or three. Does their badness add? Does it multiply?
I suppose you can chide Atticus for using an arithmetic metaphor where it cannot literally hold, or be held to. But his error is no worse than that of the little Friar in =The Bridge of San Luis Rey=, and much less considered.
I really have no idea what you are talking about vis-a-vis anything I have said in this discussion.
Memphis
Misinterpretation of the 3/5ths compromise is one of the most insidious half-truths of our age. The 3/5ths clause did not take representation from blacks. It reduced the degree to which the =slaveowners= could count their =slaves= as bodies to gain representation.
What I said was >>> I'm not sure if it mentions that Negroes were counted as 3/5s of a man by the Constitution, the founding law of America. How did I misinterpret it within the context of my discussion about the value the Southern white man's system placed on the lives of black men?
I should have written that Atticus takes the world as he finds it AS THE WORLD HE LIVES IN. He tries to change it AFTER assessing it clearly and accurately.
I can't agree more with this, but I will try. To be historically accurate, Lee should have written, “Atticus says cheatin‘ a colored man is 22.73 times worse than cheatin’ a white man,” I muttered. “Says it’s the worst thing you can do.”
And there is still a long way to go before the playing field is truly level.
Memphis
Memphis Trace wrote:How is it any of those things?
How is it not any of those things?
I'll put those things here for easy referral as I offer my opinion. Condescending, patronizing, discriminatory, elitist, demeaning, superior, belittling, downright hypocritical from the man who also spouts that all men should be treated equally.And the statement you felt shows all those things: “Atticus says cheatin‘ a colored man is ten times worse than cheatin’ a white man,” I muttered. “Says it’s the worst thing you can do.”
Interpretation translated into a personal opinion, I suppose.
In my opinion it is akin to a 'carer' saying 'Be kind to the little retard children. Remember the poor little dumb souls don't know they are a dribblin' so.'
I would like to rephrase your 'retard children' statement to be more the equivalent of what Atticus said to Scout: "Atticus says we've got to try ten times as hard to keep from laughing at our idiot cousin. He'll be drooling all over hisself and not even know it. It'd be a ten times bigger sin to treat him bad than it would one of our other half-smart cousins."
I don't see that as anything but good parenting.
Atticus's statement indicates that the originators sentiment is that “a white man” is a factor of ten times superior or more advantaged compared to the “colored folk”. Whether that be in terms of vulnerability, susceptibility, intelligence, privilege or whatever. It is an elitist and condescending mind-set.
I think it is a statement of how much of a disadvantage blacks were placed at by the laws and institutions of the South at that time . The novel is set in the period of 1933-35. Here is some of what was going on https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/pos … udy-finds/
Blacks who fled the South were then met in the North with Sundown Towns http://sundown.afro.illinois.edu/sundowntowns.php Click on your state to find out if your town was a Sundown Town: "Nigger, Don't Let The Sun Go Down On You In ___."
“Atticus says cheatin‘ a colored man is ten times worse than cheatin’ a white man,” I muttered. “Says it’s the worst thing you can do.”
In my opinion (interpretation) it is a statement of pure bigotry but not from the mouth of a bigot character but from the mouth and mind of the supposedly un-bigoted character.
Pure bigotry? Are you saying he is showing bigotry toward a colored man or toward a white man who cheats a colored man? If I were telling my 6-year old daughter in 1933 how much worse it was to cheat a colored man than a white man, I would have put it at twenty times, at least. Atticus was speaking of what great odds colored men were up against in the system at that time.
It is scary because it shows the racism is inherent and deeply engrained or institutionalised and it shows that at his core Atticus is a racist and doesn’t even know it. In terms of the novel it a least gives the Atticus character some depth. Without it he is just a sounding board for ‘stock’ noble mantras.
To me it showed that Atticus recognized how racist the system was against colored men. You have picked out a passage that I will want to find when I read this again. Is it early in the story? It does shine a light on the Atticus of Go Set a Watchman. In Go Set a Watchman Atticus is still a leader in the town's White Citizens Council or some such.
I know this was written in the 60’s but I find it hard not to relate to the day-to-day and subliminally put this in the context of say, the white man, Hilary Clinton and the black man, Barak Obama and the solemn directive that one is ten times more superior to the other on account of skin tone and ancestory.
To Kill a Mockingbird was published in 1960. It was set in 1933-35. Hillary Clinton was born in 1947, Barack Obama was born in 1961. The Civil Rights Act was passed in 1964. The Equal Rights Amendment (for women) failed in 1979.
To me it seems that the statement is based purely upon the perspective of racial denominations and nothing else. The racist’s automatic, fundamental belief that an illiterate “white man” farm-hand of low IQ is ten times superior to the “black man” brain-surgeon purely upon the basis of their ethnicity. Essentially, to me, this is saying that one of those pair is a more important human being than the other.
What it says to me is that the white man, whatever his station in life was always favored in any transaction with the colored man. Atticus is reminding his 6-year old daughter that the systems and institutions are rigged to cheat a black man.
I can’t read this book; I have neither the time nor the spirit. I’m half-way into the re-read but I’m done. If it were a paperback rather than a free-to-read pdf, it’d be lobbed it into a hedge to join my first copy of this dirge.
In my opinion the first few chapters are sort of okay, but it degenerates after that.
Sorry. No hard feelings; horses for courses and all that. It is simply not my bag. To me it reads as a shallow sounding board for anti-racism mantras. It is as an appealing piece of literature to me, as say a Mills & Bloom or Harlequin novel where the romance premise is swapped for a racisim premise.
In terms of a story I think the author should have had Maudie Atkinson murdered and Tom Robinson accused. Much more of a whodunit with more depth and meat upon the bones.
But that’s just me. I love Dicken’s ‘A tale of Two Cities’ but others hate it. I really like ‘Gone with the Wind’ but plenty decry the novel. I am a great enthusiast of the novels of John le Carré and many of his titles are beloved to me, but there is a huge amount of readers who simply cannot stand his writing. Japanese eat dolphin and whale, the Koreans eat dog. Marilyn Manson and Slipknot are to some, as Beethoven and Bach are to others. An episode of ‘The Walton’s’ will make some viewers feel emotionally warm and glowing and others will be left with a splash of vomit in their mouths.
Preference and interpretation, we are all different, we all like different stuff. We all dislike different stuff. Likers like and haters hate.
I don’t like ‘To Kill a Mockingbird’ and that is from my gut. Like a spoonful of dolphin soup it is distasteful to me. Sorry, it just is what it is. The prose simply does not fly in my mind, it does not engage me, my attention wanders, I lose focus and become bored.
Apparently, there is a movie and I might try that in order to see how the story and prose translates from the page into a script with actors and orators.
The movie was nominated for 8 Academy Awards and won 3. Gregory Peck won for his role as Atticus. It was a compelling and moving movie for me.
Anyway, I’m moving on from this conversation; this novel because I have nothing of value to add. I’m glad that ‘To Kill a Mocking Bird’ exists, I feel that it adds to the rich tableau of Literature and I think this community has held a splendid conversation upon the novel and I’m richer for that. I fully respect anyone who likes or loves the the novel but I’ve discovered (or confirmed) that I really don’t like it.
My guess is that it is the favorite novel of many southern Americans of my age (72) who lived through the time of the life and death of Martin Luther King.
As much as I don’t like the novel, I do respect the success it has achieved and I also acknowledge the joy it has bought to so many people. I would also like to express my respect for the author Harper Lee and my condolences to her family and friends.
I have a whole lot of friends who refuse to read Go Set a Watchman because it reveals that Atticus was acting against his beliefs in To Kill a Mockingbird. In Go Set a Watchman, set some 20 years later, Atticus believes blacks are still not ready to take on the full responsibilities of being citizens.
I'm not sure if it mentions that Negroes were counted as 3/5s of a man by the Constitution, the founding law of America. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Three-Fifths_Compromise
Cheers! Dill
Memphis
j p lundstrom wrote:A respectful pause for the death of a gifted human being.
.....I'd wager a guess that it even seems condescending to some people. How insulting in modern times to say that a whole race is unable to solve their problems without the benevolence of one white man!
Condescending indeed.
A quote from the text....
“Atticus says cheatin‘ a colored man is ten times worse than cheatin’ a white man,” I muttered. “Says it’s the worst thing you can do.”Condescending, patronizing, discriminatory, elitist, demeaning, superior, belittling, downright hypocritical from the man who also spouts that all men should be treated equally. The very opposite of equality, Atticus treats a colored man with condescension but is so self-absorbed that he thinks it kindness.
This book is making me squirm on several levels.
How is it any of those things?
Memphis
Nathan B. Childs wrote:Big fan on both the book and the movie. I had a similar upbringing in the Fifties.
I've been saying this for years, so that makes it the truth in my neck of the woods: Scout isn't a fictitional character. Scout is Harper Lee, and Dill, the runt, is Truman Capote. They grew up in the same Georgia neighborhood. Rumor has it that Capote wrote the book for his childhood friend--but I chose not to believe it. For me the power of Harper Lee's voice is what makes TKAM one of my favorite stories.Oops! I was one state off;) Thanks for the heads-up, corra. Another fun rumor is that Harper Lee helped Capote research In Cold Blood.
Capote acknowledged Lee's assistance: https://dspace.iup.edu/handle/2069/757 But apparently not as much as she deserved.
Abstract:
Throughout the publication and promotion of Truman Capote's In Cold Blood, Capote admitted his childhood friend, Harper Lee, accompanied him to Kansas as his research assistant, but he never explained in detail what she did to assist him other than to say she accompanied him on interviews. However, once the book was published, her name never appeared in the acknowledgement page of the book. Capote allowed people to believe that Lee was only in Kansas with him two months and she never returned during the five years he was there to conduct research. It is true that Lee was in Kansas the first few months with Capote; however, she returned to assist him with research at Hickock's and Smith's arraignment, and she returned to Kansas many other times. However, Capote never revealed this information or Lee's major role in the research for In Cold Blood. It was not until the publication of Charles Shields' unauthorized biography of Lee, Mockingbird (2006), the world began to understand Lee's research conducted for In Cold Blood. Shields briefly showed several passages of Lee's notes in one chapter, "See N.L.'s Notes." However, what Shields revealed was only a small part of Lee contributions. By conducting archival research at the New York Public Library and the Library of Congress, and by conducting interviews with people who knew Capote and Lee, I have discovered Lee's exact contributions to Capote's research.
By examining Lee's and Capote's research notes, and by juxtaposing both of the writers' notes, one can see that Lee conducted a majority of the interviews with the townspeople, while Capote focused primarily on Smith and Hickock. This dissertation explores both writers' research note and shows what notes Lee recorded were used in Capote's published book. Their notes not only reveal what research they conducted, but also reveal their personalities and show that the two had major creative differences. This dissertation also suggests possible theories as to why Capote did not acknowledge Lee, because he suffered from narcissism. Because Capote did not acknowledge Lee properly, I suggest that this is one reason Lee stopped writing.
Memphis
corra wrote:njc wrote:Spot and correct the error, or be liable for "fifty lashes with a wet noodle."
Toe the line?
Got it in one!
I thought Dill was using a hybrid of "Tow the barge, walk the line."
Memphis
Looks like a decent pros and cons argument here from a teacher;
https://goodbyteaching.wordpress.com/20 … nt-page-1/
I'm reading a bit about To Kill a Mocking Bird, here and online. I have read Memphis Trace's comments upon the disparity between reading the novel as a younger person and then re-reading as a mature adult.
I guess I was 13 or 14yrs old when I read it. That's a good while ago (a distant memory) and I think I should re-read it now to update my opinion.
I appreciate your citing the teacher's reasons for and against including To Kill a Mockingbird in a curriculum.
It was never part of a curriculum for me, so my calling it my favorite story for 40 years was based on what I gleaned from it at about 25 years old. Compared to Faulkner and other less accessible writers, some of the appeal to me was in how easily I became immersed in the story. Some of that could have been because Lee wrote characters that were cliches for the time. I had no real way of telling at the time whether there were such heroic figures as Atticus fighting racism in the small towns in the South.
You, at half my age, and with the passage of history, were probably more grounded in whether Lee's Atticus was believable or a puppet to satisfy her agenda.
Because it was accessible, and I entered the world Lee created with suspended disbelief, and I lived in a world she was writing about, I was deeply moved and inspired by it.
When I went back to To Kill a Mockingbird, having experienced 40 years of reading literature and leading my life, Atticus did seem like a puppet for Lee's agenda, but I still couldn't help reading the whole story without scrutinizing the writing. I was glad to get Lee's Go Set a Watchman about 5 years later. Go Set a Watchman told me that Scout did not know Atticus was a closet racist. And it told me that Atticus was beyond heroic in convincing Scout and the world in To Kill a Mockingbird that he was an enlightened champion for civil rights. In Go Set a Watchman, Lee undressed Atticus.
After you've read To Kill a Mockingbird again, I'd love to hear whether you think Lee redeemed the story To Kill a Mockingbird with Go Set a Watchman. I am more interested in your view of Lee's storytelling than I am interested in your view of her prose. Is the prose so flat and the voice so unappealing that you want to throw the book into the hedges?
Faulkner said, "The aim of every artist is to arrest motion, which is life, by artificial means and hold it fixed so that a hundred years later, when a stranger looks at it, it moves again."
I'd love to know if the story, not the artificial means Lee used to arrest it, moves for you as a reader who wasn't forced to read it.
Memphis
Too quick for me to proper end the shivaree, he has sent them off, but I've warmed his chair at least.
Memphis
Memphis Trace wrote:To be able to add anything meaningful to a debate about the prose, I would have to read the story again with the idea of picking nits. So far I've read it twice and I can't keep my workshop mentality forefront. I become immersed in the story and forget that it is writing instead of reading.
Likewise.
Dill Carver wrote:It is politically correct to like the book.
I certainly don't love it because it's politically correct to love it. I have a brain, thank you. I love it because it's a good story.
At the age I started reading it, I was champing at the bit to enter the world of the literati. I wanted to read something accessible to me without having it mammocked by the critics.
There was much ado in my circle, from friends who had not even read To Kill a Mockingbird, about how powerful the story was. From what little I heard from the literati, it was a story told from the POV of a 6-year old, that told a big story. 6-years old was about my level of story sophistication when I was about 25 years old. I thought it would be a great onramp into the sophisticated world I wanted to enter.
To that point, I hap been sweating my way foggily into Faulkner and Sinclair Lewis—and trying to get good enough at reading stories to be mesmerized by Moby Dick
Is this a conversation about whether or not To Kill a Mockingbird is "great literature," or whether or not we love it? Dill, you're listing lots of reasons why you don't love it (fairly enough.) I've been responding in kind with entirely subjective reasons why I do. If you were asking in your original question if it's great literature, that's hard to say because I still don't exactly know what great literature is.
Nor do I know what great literature is. I certainly can't pick what literature will endure as a guiding star for a movement through 65 years.
One of the things that makes (me) love a work is my suspicion of its impact. I'm not saying that's universal greatness according to everybody. It's greatness according to me. Which is what I thought we were talking about -- all of our personal views on why WE love To Kill a Mockingbird.
Even though I was right in the middle of the movement To Kill a Mockingbird helped inspire, I didn't have the foresight nor the retrospective critical thinking skills to realize its impact on the South I knew up close and personal.
I think it's a little close-minded and sweeping to suggest that everyone in the world who loves To Kill a Mockingbird loves it because it's politically correct to love it. Maybe some people do, but I work in a bookstore, chap, and the book flies off the shelves, still. Not by people auto-buying it because they should. These are mothers inspiring their children to read it. These are people who love the book because it is a friend. People whose eyes twinkle as they tug it up -- not because of some political agenda, but because the people in the story are friends.
For the whole of my life in which I have aspired to write and read critically, I have unashamedly claimed it was my favorite story without taking the time to reexamine my initial affection for it. I've recommended it to my children, to my friends looking for a good—and important—story to aspiring writers, to aspiring readers in reading groups.
About 5 years ago, I read it again to see if I still held my exalted opinion of it. Once again, I became immersed in the story. However, with my life experience, I found Atticus more of a device than a character. Now, having read Go Set a Watchman, I came to realize I had first read To Kill a Mockingbird with the sophistication of a 6-year old rather than the sophistication of a 25 year-old.
I love the sink-in quality, I love Atticus both before and after Watchman, I love Scout. I love the fact that it's one of my mother's favorite books, so we share it. She was very young when she read it for the first time. When I read it, I feel that I've gone back in time to her generation, and that I'm there beside her, reading it along with her back in her childhood. When I read it, I can feel a ghostly sense of my childhood self reading it -- the sense that a smaller me read the words and thought even as I am thinking again. I love it for that reason.
I came to it without all the benefits of your sophistication. I could really see the trees for the forest, but still was mesmerized, wandering lost in its thrall through the woods. I certainly had no encouragement from my family or from the politically correct to either read or not read it.
I'm not sure this sort of personal affiliation with a novel is actually debatable? Absolutely, literary components are -- like theme, tone, writing style. But that's not what I'm talking about. I'm not reading it looking for all of that. It may have all of that? It certainly has theme, and if it's forced, thank goodness for that, because somebody needed to say it.
I think US critics who claim it is politically correct, are ones who have had to retreat into their holes because there are so many readers who are willing to testify to its impact on them from an early age. Unsophisticated young people not bent on judging its literary merit, but its impact on the world all around them still find it a political and spiritual inspiration. It's easy for me to see why many southern politicians still consider it political correctness run amuck.
Great literature for me is made up of all sorts of things personal to my own tastes and passions. To Kill a Mockingbird fulfills whatever it is for me that simply clicks when I read. If I had more time, I could probably pull out passages that inspired me (the scene on the porch) for one -- but goodness, it's the characters, the simplicity of the coming of age tale, the grittiness of Scout's personality, her skepticism of her father which is surprised by his character, the line, "Stand up, Scout, your father's passing." It's the way it's all a symphony, sort of, which comes together in the line about the mockingbird. It's Jem, who reminds me of my brother. It's the fact that every time I read it again, it is the same, and it all starts over, and it's all so -- I don't know, alive. It's the next door neighbor who stands in her ashes and decides to go on. It's the snowman on a winter morning. It's the books Atticus reads Scout. It's the way she has to apologize for learning to read too quickly, and how I feel like grinning with her as she does it because that's silly. It's the Cunninghams. It's the court scenes. It's Mayella. It's Tom. It's all of it.
I fully agree that It's all of it.
I was neither sophisticated nor jaded enough, or far enough advanced in my literary aspirations, in my first reading of To Kill a Mockingbird to see the warts I saw after 50 years of aspiring to read and write great literature. Still, I couldn't help getting immersed. On reflection about my second reading, tt was easy for me to forgive Lee for making Atticus a "puppet for the story's agenda" once I read Go Set a Watchman.
It's hardly a best-seller due to avid readers choosing the title from the bookstore after perusing the shelves looking for something interesting.
You can't possibly know why people like the book. I'd absolutely pick it off the shelf based on the story description. This is the sort of book I'd have under my text book when I was supposed to be studying. This is the sort of book I pull to when I'm sick or sad and want a friend to keep me reading and sweep me away.
If the Mocking Bird prose was published here as unknown text from and unknown author, it'd get ripped to bits.
Not by me. Not for a second. It has voice, it has soul, it has grit.
It has voice for sure. And I suspect that the reason it immersed me twice is because it doesn't call attention to its grit and soul with soulful prose. I have been known to stop for long stretches to admire the grit and soul of my own soulful prose.
I won't demean Lee's hard work at this by saying 'tis a gift to be simple, because I have a vague idea now after 57 years of trying to write soulful prose just how difficult it is to make a hard job look simple and to be accessible to interested readers.
Memphis
njc wrote:Dill Carver wrote:I know that my teacher was frustrated about having to tow the line. In the after-school book club he could go off-piste and introduced us to some wonderful literature.
Wet noodle time, Dill. You do see your error, don't you
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I read that before, and still have no idea what you are challenging us to do.
Memphis
Conventions of the age. Literary style, as we know it, was still in diapers.
NOBODY has risen to my wet-noodle challenge.
I have no idea what your wet-noodle challenge is.
Memphis
Memphis Trace wrote:I bought a 50th Anniversary copy of the book about 5 years ago as part of my program to see how much the classics I've liked at first reading have improved as I've learned to read better. I was stunned about how I could no longer suspend my disbelief about Atticus. He came across as a cardboard character. It made me wish I wasn't such a great judge of a story.
I couldn't buy into Atticus either. A cardboard stooge, a puppet of the book's agenda.
As a young man when I first read To Kill a Mockingbird and before I learned how nasty the white folks in the Deep South were toward blacks, just about the time we were passing the Civil Rights Act, and Freedom Riders were being killed, and churches bombed, Atticus was a bigger than life hero for me.
When the Supreme Court overturned Virginia's anti-miscegenation in 1967 and there followed increases in interracial marriages, I thought it might be the product of educated, well-placed brave men in small southern who were in the vanguard of the fight for human decency.
After MLK and the Kennedys were killed, and I witnessed the burning of the Washington DC ghettos, I still thought it was the kind of heroism Atticus showed that helped along the fight for civil rights. After living through the failure of the states to ratify the Equal Rights Amendment and seeing how difficult it has been for Americans to embrace the whole concept of equal rights, and upon reading To Kill a Mockingbird again, Atticus felt like a prop created by a dreamer who hadn't yet seen how ingrained racism was in the fabric of American life. That is why I was unable to suspend my disbelief about Atticus.
On the other hand, when I read The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn and studied it in the early 1980s, Huck's solitary heroic decision in Chapter 31 to go to hell rather than turn in Jim moved me greatly. I still count it as the greatest moral decision in American literature. It would be another 25+ years after studying Huck Finn before I would read To Kill a Mockingbird again and come to see Atticus as the unrealistic creation of a dreamer.
I remember spouting as much, give or take a word, when writing a synopsis of 'Mocking Bird' whilst at school.
Did you feel Atticus was a puppet of the book's agenda because you didn't support the agenda? I recognized and supported the agenda, but I came to believe as an old man with the experiences I'd had, that such a heroic character would not have survived doing what he did at that place at that time in America. I had become hardened and cynical and I wanted an explanation.
(How I used to make my English Literature teacher squirm and grimace, frown, grin and laugh with my opinions upon the literature he fed us. I was irreverent and vociferous, young and impetuous, filled with passion and arrogance. He is a kindly and learned man, a gentle soul. He taught my daughters, in turn too. He shared with them and their respective classes, some of my old work that he'd kept for a decade and a half. One of my finest moments (self-indulgent pride) was to find that something I'd written at aged 15 became an 'example piece' for an English Literature teacher who trooped it out at least once to every class he ever taught from the day I wrote it, until the day he retired).
I also was a load at that time in my life for teachers. It does not surprise me that the memories from which I build most of my stories come from that period in my life.
And now that I have read Go Set a Watchman, and Lee has fleshed out the real Atticus, I better understand that Lee's artistic decision to treat Atticus from the viewpoint of a child in To Kill a Mockingbird came from her need to create a hero at that time. I think if she'd written it as an older person, Atticus would have been less of a cardboard cutout and more the real thing.
I wonder how much she had Huck Finn's Chapter 31 dilemma in mind as she was writing To Kill a Mockingbird through Scout's POV?
Memphis
The aim of every artist is to arrest motion, which is life, by artificial means and hold it fixed so that a hundred years later, when a stranger looks at it, it moves again. ~ William Faulkner
flowing pencil wrote:DANG.. I may get tarred and feathered as never was a fan of "To Kill A Mockingbird" Perhaps if I read it now after so many years.. I might change my mind.
Patricia/Flo
Hello Flo and Dill,
In blue, with you two, I will interleave my experiences about loving To Kill a Mockingbird for most of my life as an aspiring reader and an aspiring writer, and now as I come into the end zone of a life, about my experience in trying to figure out what the big fuss was all about.Whilst I do feel sympathy for the bereaved and respect for the recently passed author herself; bring on the those feathers and tar...
"To Kill A Mockingbird" ? I don't really get it. As childrens genre books go, it's okay I suppose... but it never fired me like others that I've read and I never quite got what all the hype is about? I suppose that it was one of the first YA books and possibly defined the genre, although as a youngster growing-up in London, England I never really got the connotations from the inherent racial divisions within the deep south of the USA. All I knew of America at the time was 'The Fonz' and 'Scooby Do'. I thought that American teenagers were all forty year old sanitized rockers and that all cartoon mysteries shared the same plot and three punchlines.
I grew up in a remote Virginia town that had no transparent racial divisions because there were no blacks—no blacks, as in zero blacks—to segregate from or integrate with. I was pretty much an innocent, untrained bigot. The only experience I remember with a black man before I went away to university came at about 4 years old (1947). My father took me with him to some place of business in Big Stone Gap, Virginia, and during his conduct of business I managed to wander away from him. When he found me, I was sitting across the street on a stone wall, helping a black man leaned against the wall eat a box of doughnuts. My father, scared white (from his usually rosy glow), caught up to me and shook me good before he hugged me with tears in his eyes and wanted to know what I was doing running off when he told me to stay put. I told him, I followed a blue man with a box of doughnuts.
It was enough to make him laugh, and to make the escapade memorable enough that he told the story—with my punchine—every time he got the chance. Otherwise, I think I would have forgotten it. I went through my formative years not knowing I was supposed to hate, fear, pity, feel intellectually superior to, and sexually inferior to blacks. When I strayed out into the educated parts of the South (1961), where the young people had grown up being taught how they should integrate with blacks, I was quickly uptrained about why I "was supposed to hate, fear, pity, feel intellectually superior to, and sexually inferior to blacks."
I learned about blacks in my early 20s in the early 1960s; about the same way I learned about girls in the early 60s: From other young people who knew even less about them than I did, but who had been taught to avoid them unless I was somehow using them for my purposes.
Having 3 sisters, I did not much see how it was right for me to use girls for my purposes, but the girls didn't always co-operate. I fell in love with most every one of them who'd give me a second glance without body slamming me.
Within a year or two of this, I read To Kill a Mockingbird. It was early in my aspirations to become a reader of good stories. I was attracted by the title, and probably recommendations, and I went into it with the burgeoning feeling that I liked words enough that someday I'd be able to write books that would win the Pulitzer Prize and make me rich and famous.
"To Kill A Mockingbird" sells well because it is one of the mandatory childrens book titles within the schools English Lit curriculum (at least here in the UK) and has been for decades. As I mention, I'm not particularity enamored with it as a novel, but I've had to personally purchase three copies, one for each of my children in-turn as they traverse the school system. Lord knows what they do with book when they are done with it, but each requires a new copy when it is their time (along with the obligatory Lord of the Flies, Animal Farm, of Mice and Men and Shakespeare Plays).
I'm guessing, without knowing anything about it, that a lot of copies of To Kill a Mockingbird were bought by the parents of high school students in the north of the U. S. of A. required to read it. I am guessing that a lot of copies were bought by students in the south of the U. S. of A. because it wasn't allowed to be taught in their schools. I'm also guessing that a lot of copies were bought by students because their parents and preachers and other guiding lights were condemning it as a nigger-loving, Communist plot to deflower Southern white girls. A perfect storm to make it a classic.
Thousands and thousands of parents buying these books year upon year as a course requirement for their disinterested student kids because some misguided intellectual soul feels that it is a mandatory classic.
I'm guessing there was more than one intellectual soul who decided it was something that should be read and discussed at the high school level. Just as, I'm guessing there was more than one intellectual soul who decided it should be banned at the high school level. Between them, these intellectual souls were unwittingly conspiring to create the classic it has become.
It's hardly a best-seller due to avid readers choosing the title from the bookstore after perusing the shelves looking for something interesting.
I'm guessing that you are right that all the controversy surrounding the story is a big driving force for why To Kill a Mockingbird continues to rival the Bible in sales, at least in the southern U. S. of A.
I remember my mum moaning about buying me copy when I was at school. Intensely studying a book that doesn’t interest you is an excruciating punishment for a young teenager and I think I lobbed it into a hedge the first chance I got.
Were you old enough to have an opinion about what constituted great prose when you were lobbing it into the hedge? When I read it I wasn't. It resonated with me for the same reason cowboy movies resonated with me. It drew a clear cut picture of a young person wanting to know about niggers for a young person who wanted to know about niggers. It drew a clear cut picture of a courageous parent charged with drawing that picture for her in a hostile environment. For me, it was the right story at the right time.
No doubt, my being ignorant of what constituted great prose at that stage of my aspirations to read great prose contributed to my deciding, and maintaining for 45 years, that it was my favorite book. I can't speak for the Pulitzer judges, nor do I know their criteria for selecting their prize winners.
My comments represent a personal opinion upon the book and fact as to why it it such a big seller. I welcome a challenge and if anyone is willing to show me the error of my ways and extol the virtues of this novel in the form of a review, then pop over to 'the write club;' the creative writing and literature discussions group forum...
I bought a 50th Anniversary copy of the book about 5 years ago as part of my program to see how much the classics I've liked at first reading have improved as I've learned to read better. I was stunned about how I could no longer suspend my disbelief about Atticus. He came across as a cardboard character. It made me wish I wasn't such a great judge of a story.
Thankfully, I was able to forgive Ms. Lee when I read Go Set a Watchman and saw that Atticus was actually more heroic than I thought when I encountered him as a young and foolish dreamer, looking for a hero about race.
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I still haven't read To Kill a Mockingbird for the purposes of judging the greatness of the prose. I can say, though, that each time I read it, it struck me as rich and efficient reading in which the writing did not detract from the reading.
...and we can debate the pros(e) and cons
To be able to add anything meaningful to a debate about the prose, I would have to read the story again with the idea of picking nits. So far I've read it twice and I can't keep my workshop mentality forefront. I become immersed in the story and forget that it is writing instead of reading.
Memphis
A respectful pause for the death of a gifted human being.
But come on, folks! She wrote ONE book! And while it was a great book in its day, it reads dated and b-o-r-i-n-g nowadays. I'd wager a guess that it even seems condescending to some people. How insulting in modern times to say that a whole race is unable to solve their problems without the benevolence of one white man!
She said what she had to say, and it struck a note, but that's all she had. There remain plenty of other problems of the human condition that still need tackling, and other talented writers are working on them.
Many civil rights lawyers credit the book as their first inspiration for becoming a civil rights lawyer. To Kill a Mockingbird was a bestselling novel and made into a movie that was nominated for 10 Academy Awards and won three. The book won a Pulitzer Prize.
Harper Lee published two books. Go Set a Watchman was published in July of 2015.
What have you done to tackle the other problems of the human condition?
Memphis Trace
Yes, I just read that her novel was second only to the Bible.
I hadn't heard that. I've been telling people the Bible would eventually overtake To Kill a Mockingbird
Memphis Trace