I love reading books written by Christain Feehan. I just reread the first chapter of "Dark Storm." It is written in first person. It makes the writing very personal and the feeling that come through the writing are so fresh and true to the real feelings of a person. It is written in the here and now rather than what will or has happen.
But what I found interesting is not how the main character was written with the use of "I" . But how are the supportive characters written and how do you write so there is no sense of jarring for the reader. In this book the supportive characters are written in terms of the main character observing the actions of the other characters and listening to their dialogue.
I think further into this story "Dark Storm"  has another main character  that uses the word. "I". So it will be interesting to study the use of two characters using the same point of view - "I".
I will certainly study now a few books and the first chapter to learn some of the ways to write in the different point of view.
This has been quite a big learning curve for me as it has certainly made me think more deeply about  the use of the point of view in a story.

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(3 replies, posted in Intro to Creative Writing - Summer 2015)

Hi Sol,
Thanks so much for your quick response. Jasmine

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(3 replies, posted in Intro to Creative Writing - Summer 2015)

Hi Sol,
How does this work. Do you give feedback on our assignment. Or do we give feedback to each other.
Thanks so much
Jasmine

Hi,
My name is Jasmine. I cannot write. Well I have tried numerous time.  But I do love the process of creating stories in my head. I want to take the stories from my head and write them done. The stories may not be good enough for others to read, but I will be doubled thrilled with getting something down into the written form.
So this is start of big exciting writing journey. So let's go........
What do I love to write ... Romance and editorial stuff
When did I start writing. I have been trying since I was about 14 years of age.
My favourite author.. I have read a lot of Christain Feehan books as well as many other authors.  I Readl lots of romances.
What is fun and quirky about myself.... Well I love life and I try to practice that every day . I love my family with a passion. I am Nanna and I play like a kid.
I am looking forward to this writing course ......