Topic: Lesson 4 - Show Versus Tell

Hi all,

Lesson 4 focusing on Showing versus Telling has now been posted. Please read through it and past any questions in the  forum or at the bottom of the article.

Please pay attention to the homework assignment at the bottom also.


http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … tell-21042

Sol

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Re: Lesson 4 - Show Versus Tell

Sol, I must tell you that this lesson has opened my eyes.  I was telling and never showing in my writing and now this realization has opened a new world.  I still have a lot to learn but thanks for this lesson.    Mike

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Re: Lesson 4 - Show Versus Tell

Hi Mike,

I'm glad you found it helpful!

Sol

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Re: Lesson 4 - Show Versus Tell

I am so sorry I did not proofread my assignment before I turned it in now. I used the same piece, though quite longer than what has been requested, was a good piece, I felt like to work with show don't tell and then especially good for me to use for verb tense especially after realizing I had changed tenses several times without noticing. Sorry for the oversight. Please look at my post for the present and past tense versions. I like the past tense a lot better. I think it's easier to work with and write in that tense.

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