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Hi everyone

This is just to let everyone know that I've started revising Northern-Skies and will spend much less time on the site during this time. I'll still pop in every now and again, but it will be very erratic and for short periods of time only. Work is also not helping!

That said, I'm planning to use the time to also catch up on the numerous recip reviews I owe quite a few people! I haven't forgotten you!!!

Thank you for the support and understanding!

I'll be back soon with Book #2!!!
And missing you guys too.

Cheers
Janet

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Janet, do you want us to continue reviewing your current online copy? I believe I owe you a review.

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I need to finish the book as well. I'll see what I can do to get that done quicker than otherwise.

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You guys can relax!!!! I'm only at Chapter 2 with the revision!!!! I'm not revising any faster than writing. sad

Amy, I definitely know you'll be okay even at your current pace, so all good!!!

Dirk, I'm not sure where you're at though. I can let you know when I'm done with a chapter.
Speaking of Dirk, have you posted a new chapter yet? I know I don't want to fall behind with the new revision.

On a unrelated note, we got a free turkey last week. So tomorrow we're cooking our first American Thanksgiving Chicken. Wish us luck!!! smile

And happy Thanksgiving to everyone (and a belated one for K and Dirk - I think Canada's Turkey Day was more than a month or so ago?)

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Hi Janet. I have a new turkey ... er, chapter up in the v3 book. I'm going even slower than my usual glacial place since my mother has a leg ulcer that requires 2-3 doctor visits per week. I'm the chauffer. Add to that one or two trips to the grocery store, and my own doctor appts, and the weeks just fly by. Chapter two includes edits from Amy, K, and Seabrass. I'll keep reading yours until you say stop. I now owe reviews to everyone.

Gobble gobble.
Dirk

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As the official Ohio turkey says, "Buckle, Buckle!"

Best way to cook a turkey is a refined skill, Janet. In an oven, with a 15 pound turkey, it can take almost 6 hours to finish cooking. There are quicker ways to go about it. I recommend looking at google for info on spatchcocking and then how to barbecue. Both are yummy.

Dirk, any unhealing ulcer can be a vascular problem. I don't know how the Canadian system works, but it might be worth asking the regular doctor if you can get a referral to a vascular center to see if there is anything that can be done. In America, they do vascular studies to see if the artery or vein is blocked. There are surgical grafts that can be done to improve flow and let the limb heal.

Everybody, I finally published a new chapter. Took long enough. I'm estimating 4 more chapters until I finish the book. Let's see if I can count or if I just let the storyline linger for a couple dozen more chapters as I describe the fighting.

In other news, the freelance editor that I hired is coming up on his deadline for his assessment of Dictates. I'm waiting to see what he has to say. I rewrote the first chapter of Acts to include Alina. My autistic son is still afraid of fire, and kept me from cooking eggs yesterday because of his anxiety. Work is much better but everyone has PTSD and is overworked and overwhelmed. I survived the transition to Epic (a new computer system) and I hate it. Thanksgiving was wonderful this year. My nieces came home from college, my brother-in-law didn't throw a tantrum, and my sister loved watching my son run around and play with everyone.

I threw up in the parking lot at work (classy) and still had to work my shift because there is no one to cover for me. My new car decides to suddenly lose power for no reason. I bought prime steaks for after-dinner Thanksgiving because my sister doesn't usually feed me enough. I'm about to start chopping mushrooms. Nom. Nom. 

In all, I'm just humming through an average month. It just hasn't involved much new writing because I assembled and revised Dictates to turn into the freelance editor.

Everybody else, give an update, please. We're in a slow spot and I don't want to lose touch.

A

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Had distractions. Was trying to get a demo box with my flasher circuit working for one family confab.  I finished Test Article 4, finding an interesting and possibly useful failure mode along the way.  Useful, that is, once I fully understand it.  I bought some materials for working with Surface Mount devices and got to the point where I could solder the beasties (that's 2.5mm x 2.7mm x 3.2mm) well enough, then started to assemble the final board.

And hit a failure mode that has me flummoxed.  I need to spend serious time trying to figure it out.  There'll probably be a Blinding Flash of the Obvious at some point.  And I haven't begun cutting the openings in the housing for it.  That's the sort of careful work I usually muff.

Meanwhile, I learned a new word just when I needed it.  Well, a new phrase: "false document".  It means a work (eg. a book) that exists only as a name within a work of fiction.  Like an Encyclopedia Galactica, or Fleetrow's Guide to the Universe.  Or The True and Complete Record of the Instructive Adventures of the Daring and Sagacious Count Hulhausen Lundersot, And of His Life and Times.  Only, as you know, I am trying to put a bit of that fictional work, complete with the Count's own recounting, and the sorcero-cinematic-virtual-reality experience thereof, into my own work of fiction.  (Maybe in another fragment, I could have the Count peruse a copy of one volume of the supposedly apocryphal Sorcerer's Progress.  Only I'm not sure my cheek is large enough for that kind of tongue.)

I spend Wednesday eve reading a trade paper copy of The Secrets of Story.  I recommend it HIGHLY to everyone here.  It is a rapid-fire discharge of Blinding Flashes of the Obvious, complete with stunning afterimages thereof.

I'll be visiting my brother for a few days starting 12/10.

I'm way behind in reviews as well as in work.  Amy and Rebecca, you should expect reviews within about 20 hours.  Oh, and Amy, I think you used tomato sauce before.  Just remember that the tomato is a New World plant.

Now for some rest.

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Amy, thanks for the suggestion. My mother has very poor veins in her legs that have turned her lower legs brownish from pooled blood. She has special tight stockings to wear to force the blood to flow back up the leg. I think she's supposed to sit with her legs up, but she walks around quite a bit, then is in pain every evening. She's been on antibiotics repeatedly. There is progress after almost two months. The wound care nurse says it looks much better, with significant healing. Another trip coming up to the advanced wound care clinic downtown next week. I hate driving downtown. It's like my first few trips on the NJ Garden State Parkway in rush hour. Grab your balls...

FYI, everyone else has been reviewed, except you. I'll work on that tomorrow. I owe K an extra review because his chapters are Tiny Tims compared to the elephants I'm cranking out at present. I want to flesh out my world this draft, hopefully in ways that keep the reader interested. I'm going to try and keep up with chapter edits as I write this draft. I really hope there's not a v4 ahead of me. It'll be 7-8 years total to write this thing, and it's only book one. If it wasn't for a chance to create a Christian Empire in the story, with tons of great stuff about the crusades to borrow from, I'd tack the final chapter of the trilogy at the end of book one and be done with it. Maybe just two books... There's a story I want to tell in the year 7329 AD that has been brewing for over a decade. It'll be fun to link then all together in one universe.

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*Expanded into a Haiku

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Norm d'Plume wrote:

I hate driving downtown. It's like my first few trips on the NJ Garden State Parkway in rush hour. Grab your balls...

Wrong remedy.  It'll frag both your situational awareness and your reaction time.

The first thing about driving in traffic, any, at speed any, is to realize that everyone ont the road is trying to go or stop someplace, and that they have different strategies and tactics for doing it.  If you watch other drivers with that as your base assumption, you'll see some plausible sense in what they are doing.

Some drivers are stupid, some are selfish, some are both, and selfish and stupid both translate into 'negative sum'--they get less from screwing you than you lose.

With that in mind:

Try not to force other drivers to react to you.  You give them the chance to make a costly mistake.

When you must violate the previous principle, let your movements leave them one very good choice and one obviously stupid choice, and be ready for the 2.6% who will choose the stupid choice.

Don't trap other drivers unless it's clear they are going to trap you.  Then let them escape as soon as it is safe to do so--and they have a better escape than trapping you.

And for heaven's sake, move briskly and soon whenthe light goes green.  Each time you make 12 extra people wait 90 seconds for the next light, you have p*ssed away 18 minutes of human life--other people's life, time which is lost to them forever.

And do what else you can to get other people through the light behind you.  For the reason given above, and because if you screw them, they are more likely to cut you off, trap them, or ride six  inches from your bumper.

More advice later, maybe, when I've got a real keyboard.

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Sorry I'm lagging behind, everyone! My entire family caught the flu, then that flu developed into bronchitis for my dad, a sinus infection for my mom, and strep throat for me. It's safe to say we've had a "fun" couple of weeks. Today's the first day I actually have some energy (despite the antibiotics), so I'm gonna be busy disinfecting the house and finishing projects that I couldn't do while sick. Gah! Hopefully I'll get to finish at least one chapter this weekend.

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Amy, let us know what you think of the editor's advice.

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I'm still working with The Secret of Story.  What's it like?  Well ...

Maybe the best book on the Vietnam war as a whole is Harry G. Summer's On Strategy: A Critical Analysis of the Vietnam War.  Col. Summers was given the job of making sense of several stack-feet of studies on the war, none of which could be woven into a coherent whole.  The US Army was recovering with a 'back to basics' movement, and one of Summer's lunch buddies suggested that he read von Clausewitz.  With nothing better to try, Summers began to read On War.  From the first page, from von Clausewitz's first step of logic ("The subject of war is divided into preparation for war and the conduct of war proper") Summers found errors the US made--and that continued on page after page.  In order to lose Viet Nam, the USA had to reject every principle in von Clausewitz's book ... and they did.

That's how I feel reading The Secrets of Story.  I'm going to spend a lot of time thinking and re-thinking.  Not that I'm doing everything wrong--I've got a few things surprisingly right.  Just not enough things, right enough.

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Quick update before I go to bed:

Mr American Chicken, our turkey, was still frozen on Thanksgiving Thursday. That's the bad news. The good news was that we didn't have hundreds of family coming over for Turkey! LOL

Mr C cooked it for us on Saturday and it was delicious. We had Turkey sandwiches on Sunday (our Turkey sandwiches still need a bit more work - next year, we're going to add some bacon). Had Turkey pasta Sunday evening. I had Turkey pasta Monday for lunch at work. We still have frozen Turkey in the freezer. But, we got into the swing of things.

Work is still crazy as. Planning to take some leave over Christmas. So looking forward to that. The tree went up this weekend. Pressies are done - just have to post the overseas ones this week. We're also busy with child passport applications - the two boys' passports expires this coming week. Cross fingers the Vancouver consulate will help us, otherwise we have to go back all the way to LA or San Fran.

Other than that, the site visit hasn't been finalised yet. I'll definitely let everyone know when I know more! I haven't forgotten about it or you yet!

And on this note, think of me. Snow has been forecasted tonight. I have to drive to work tomorrow - either in snow or on black ice. I just hope the idiots sleep in. The rest of the week looks like more snow is possible. Will let you guys know what happened and how well it went?! smile

Good night!
Janet

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The turkey is a tradition that drowns its slayer with leftovers in order to seek REVENGE.

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Unless you have a family like mine (three growing boys in the house). Then the turkey's gone two days later. I think we might be getting a bigger bird next year. tongue

Good luck in the snow, Janet! We've got a teensy skiff of it this morning., but it's supposed to grow through the day.

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I"m already getting accidents with people being dragged on sleds by 4 wheelers. And...then the vehicle changes direction...and then the rider goes whoopsie...

And there hasn't been a lick of snow in our area.

God, I can't wait for the cold. This global warming is letting people stay outside instead of holing up in their houses to stay warm.

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I suspect that the whoopsie problem is reduced when the roads are covered with wheel-packed snow.  The powered vehicles can't maneuver as abruptly and the sleds can slide to the side rather than overturning.

The cold will bring hypothermia and frostbite.

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amy s wrote:

I"m already getting accidents with people being dragged on sleds by 4 wheelers. And...then the vehicle changes direction...and then the rider goes whoopsie...

And there hasn't been a lick of snow in our area.

God, I can't wait for the cold. This global warming is letting people stay outside instead of holing up in their houses to stay warm.

Minus -10°C up here. -20°C overnight. -30°C with wind chill. That's 30° below the freezing point of water! I laugh at 30°. I'll be going out to club some baby seals later today.

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14F.  Cold.  -4F.  Bitterly cold.  -22F with wind chill--that is seriously, dangerously cold.

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This entire week is 30-43F with rain/snow for me. I am quite glad I don't live any farther north. smile

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We only had frost this morning. Lake Erie stabilizes our weather and we don't get cold as quickly. As opposed to Buffalo, NY. That city is downstream from the bad weather. Kind of like the toilet of the Great Lakes.

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24F when I was driving home today. It's official - I'm effin cold. A little bit of snow, and a little bit sticking around too. The two boys built snowmen - they're still standing after 3 days. Next week, more snow predicted.

Rewrite of NS is going well. Chapter 3 done and dusted. Some of it's new, some old.

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From Kate Paulk.  USA politics, translated into Aussie.  YMMV