TirzahLaughs's Profile
| Penname: | TirzahLaughs |
| Country: | United States |
| Web address: | http://acleverwhatever.blogspot.com |
| Member type: | Author |
| Member Since: | May 5, 2008 |
| Bio: | Born, lived, not dead yet, had a few good times, had a few cries. What more do you need to know? |
User Writings
| Title/Name | Date | Ranking | Reviews | Type | |
| May 14, 2012 | 151 | 101 | Novel | ||
This was my NANO book this year. It's rough.... | |||||
| Oct 20, 2009 | 44 | 400 | Novel | ||
Plum starts our story in jail, the story... | |||||
| Mar 21, 2010 | 422 | 17 | Novel | ||
Well people keep saying I should start my... | |||||
| May 17, 2008 | 1785 | 8 | Poetry | ||
REVISED--I moved the stanzas around as... | |||||
| Jul 12, 2008 | 1285 | 9 | Poetry | ||
Poem on moving to the suburbs. Do the stanzas... | |||||
| May 12, 2008 | 1586 | 7 | Poetry | ||
I love parts of this. Do you think the middle... | |||||
| May 10, 2008 | 3123 | 6 | Poetry | ||
A poem of someone who tries to show their love... | |||||
| May 5, 2008 | 2922 | 5 | Poetry | ||
Stanza three--is the last line workable? Is it... | |||||
| May 19, 2008 | 1755 | 7 | Poetry | ||
When I can't sleep and I'm going too fast, I... | |||||
| May 23, 2008 | 2407 | 6 | Poetry | ||
Is the verb tense right? This is about when... | |||||
| Jun 1, 2008 | 850 | 11 | Poetry | ||
I'm trying to capture a memory, a feeling.... | |||||
| Jun 8, 2008 | 2182 | 7 | Poetry | ||
This poem may offend you. This is a poem about... | |||||
| Jun 26, 2008 | 1530 | 7 | Poetry | ||
I'm interested lately in doing strong brief... | |||||
| Sep 21, 2008 | 194 | 15 | Poetry | ||
I'm working on this. Suggestions welcome. | |||||
| Aug 21, 2008 | 459 | 13 | Poetry | ||
This may offend you, but is it to simple?... | |||||
| Aug 4, 2008 | 3014 | 5 | Poetry | ||
The ending is solid? | |||||
| Aug 15, 2008 | 2763 | 5 | Poetry | ||
Is this stiff? Does it work as is? How to... | |||||
| Aug 19, 2008 | 1374 | 9 | Poetry | ||
This is a different poetic style for me. Does... | |||||
| Mar 3, 2010 | 574 | 9 | Poetry | ||
As usual, suggestions welcome. | |||||
| Oct 2, 2008 | 864 | 9 | Poetry | ||
My writing is stuttering lately. All... | |||||
| Nov 9, 2008 | 1275 | 8 | Poetry | ||
Work in progress | |||||
| Mar 26, 2010 | 1240 | 7 | Poetry | ||
Odd poem, needs the edges rubbed off.... | |||||
| Feb 4, 2009 | 196 | 16 | Poetry | ||
I finally wrote something NEW! All suggestions... | |||||
| Apr 9, 2010 | 1352 | 7 | Poetry | ||
Enough? Underdeveloped? Interesting? | |||||
| Feb 28, 2009 | 1735 | 8 | Poetry | ||
I'm in a writing slump. This is a piece I'm... | |||||
| Mar 11, 2009 | 1331 | 8 | Poetry | ||
Haiku---is it enough on its own? If not, where... | |||||
| Apr 19, 2009 | 304 | 15 | Poetry | ||
All feedback welcome. This is a new one that... | |||||
| Oct 14, 2012 | 242 | 12 | Poetry | ||
Its not my best work. I'm trying to get writing... | |||||
| May 23, 2010 | 345 | 13 | Poetry | ||
This sucks. Help? | |||||
| Jun 3, 2009 | 127 | 17 | Poetry | ||
Is this too plain? Need stronger descriptions?... | |||||
| Feb 16, 2010 | 809 | 9 | Poetry | ||
A very rough poem. I'd just love some feedback... | |||||
| Jul 10, 2009 | 93 | 18 | Poetry | ||
All feedback welcomed. I'm curious to what you... | |||||
| Jul 15, 2009 | 631 | 9 | Poetry | ||
Wiggy keeps suggesting I do a chaiku for the... | |||||
| Aug 28, 2009 | 1037 | 9 | Poetry | ||
Does it feel finished? Impressions? | |||||
| Sep 7, 2009 | 821 | 8 | Poetry | ||
I'm having some stanza issues. Something is... | |||||
| Sep 29, 2009 | 791 | 9 | Poetry | ||
A riff off the Collaborative Poem exercise.... | |||||
| Sep 30, 2010 | 1727 | 7 | Poetry | ||
not sure the ending works. | |||||
| Mar 3, 2011 | 160 | 15 | Poetry | ||
This poem is for 18+ only and has some bad... | |||||
| Apr 13, 2010 | 881 | 8 | Poetry | ||
Does this work as is? Suggestions welcome. Too... | |||||
| Feb 23, 2010 | 1967 | 6 | Poetry | ||
Does this feel stiff? This poem is about a... | |||||
| Apr 3, 2010 | 1957 | 8 | Poetry | ||
Too simple? Does it work? Does it feel bland?... | |||||
| Apr 4, 2010 | 1096 | 9 | Poetry | ||
Does the ending fall apart? | |||||
| Apr 8, 2010 | 538 | 11 | Poetry | ||
Experimental, I'm working more on the feeling... | |||||
| Apr 24, 2010 | 124 | 15 | Poetry | ||
A lighter piece. Does it work? Does it lack... | |||||
| May 8, 2010 | 1155 | 10 | Poetry | ||
I'm not sure this works. I think part of the... | |||||
| Sep 13, 2010 | 72 | 18 | Poetry | ||
This is a very old poem (15+ years) and I'm... | |||||
| Jul 24, 2010 | 862 | 9 | Poetry | ||
A poem written about several articles I read in... | |||||
| Jul 28, 2010 | 1098 | 8 | Poetry | ||
A new poem I'm playing with. The end works? | |||||
| Sep 6, 2010 | 270 | 13 | Poetry | ||
Does work? I think it's choppy. | |||||
| Sep 2, 2010 | 707 | 8 | Poetry | ||
It's meant to be a spoken word poem which is... | |||||
| Mar 5, 2013 | 1831 | 5 | Poetry | ||
A bit rough. ;) | |||||
| Oct 8, 2010 | 232 | 13 | Poetry | ||
I think my last few poems and this one are... | |||||
| Dec 15, 2012 | 1562 | 6 | Poetry | ||
editing voice poems. | |||||
| Jan 29, 2013 | 528 | 10 | Poetry | ||
New rough piece, too much repetition? Does the... | |||||
| Dec 20, 2010 | 477 | 10 | Poetry | ||
I've been rewriting some old pieces. I found... | |||||
| Feb 28, 2011 | 980 | 7 | Poetry | ||
Not sure if this works. | |||||
| Jul 6, 2011 | 723 | 8 | Poetry | ||
Rough draft of a poem. Feedback appreciated. :) | |||||
| Mar 17, 2013 | 2451 | 5 | Poetry | ||
Writing has been a struggle. Any help always... | |||||
| Jul 11, 2011 | 392 | 11 | Poetry | ||
Wrote this one weeks ago but it was never quite... | |||||
| Jul 25, 2011 | 569 | 9 | Poetry | ||
Wrote this years ago and just recently found... | |||||
| Oct 17, 2011 | 554 | 9 | Poetry | ||
A very, very rough poem I wrote at lunch today. | |||||
| Oct 18, 2011 | 387 | 11 | Poetry | ||
I think this one has great potential. I'm... | |||||
| Dec 12, 2011 | 158 | 13 | Poetry | ||
rough, simplistic--has good bones though. | |||||
| Dec 13, 2011 | 419 | 11 | Poetry | ||
another darker mood poem. Maybe disturbing.... | |||||
| Nov 19, 2012 | 868 | 9 | Poetry | ||
Rough poem, holiday blues | |||||
| Jan 8, 2013 | 147 | 14 | Poetry | ||
New poem, ending needs work. | |||||
| Apr 17, 2013 | 416 | 10 | Poetry | ||
I am in a writing slump. I keep trying to write... | |||||
| Apr 30, 2013 | 458 | 10 | Poetry | ||
Still trying to find my creative spark. Help... | |||||
| May 9, 2013 | 2086 | 5 | Poetry | ||
A simple poem. Too simple? | |||||
| May 22, 2008 | 809 | 10 | Short Story | ||
This story is about a man that is so caught up... | |||||
| Sep 7, 2008 | 43 | 26 | Short Story | ||
Does this stand on its own? Ending abrupt? A... | |||||
| Jun 13, 2009 | 2221 | 3 | Short Story | ||
This is a true story. I welcome ideas on how... | |||||
| Jul 5, 2008 | 812 | 10 | Short Story | ||
Is it spicy enough? To dull? What would you... | |||||
| Jul 15, 2008 | 52 | 24 | Short Story | ||
Looking as always for my ever present typos.... | |||||
| Aug 27, 2008 | 1100 | 9 | Short Story | ||
I dreamed I was editing this piece...so I woke... | |||||
| Jun 15, 2009 | 449 | 13 | Short Story | ||
I've been editing this story but I'm not sure... | |||||
| May 4, 2009 | 76 | 21 | Short Story | ||
No reviews are required. With the weather being... | |||||
| Jan 3, 2010 | 604 | 11 | Short Story | ||
There's a contest for a "WHy I Write" contest.... | |||||
| Jan 4, 2010 | 541 | 9 | Short Story | ||
A rough draft. Does the ending work? Too abrupt? | |||||
| Dec 23, 2010 | 670 | 9 | Short Story | ||
For the time travel contest. I know its not... | |||||
| Nov 4, 2011 | 1581 | 5 | Short Story | ||
And essay on bad says. | |||||
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