Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B.
re "Siburassu"
I'm watching Netflix "Sinbad" a Japanese show. For Sinbad (shortened to Sin) they're clearly saying "Shin".
Maybe Shiburassu isn't that far off
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re "Siburassu"
I'm watching Netflix "Sinbad" a Japanese show. For Sinbad (shortened to Sin) they're clearly saying "Shin".
Maybe Shiburassu isn't that far off
Thanks. Shiburassu was too different from Seabrass, so I went back to Kobayashi. I'm looking for an excuse to use sea bass in the story in a meaningful way.
I may rename Babilus Danasius (the car recyclling plant manager) to Babilus Sibrassi or something similar. Or maybe rename Leonardo, the Crazed Cabbie.
Since they are saying "Shi" and meaning "si"... maybe you can get away with spelling it "si". I dunno. Hope a purist can chime in
Maybe Sibrasso or Sibrassi instead of Leonardo?
I'd use Charles, but the Italian version is Calogero, which is too different. Or ignore the the correct translation and use Charlo.
Chapter 26, Long Live the Regent, is up. Mostly cleanup and minor edits. The epigraph is new. I also reworked the opening to get to Joseph's anguish right away, as suggested by Seabrass. Joseph now has five passengers in his head. That's probably all for this book, although it will become increasingly difficult for him to remain in control, especially in book two.
Quick, go read!
Dirk
I get chemo tomorrow, but will see if I can find some time this week for Romans in Space.
ACME rules!
No rush. Yoda voice: rest, you must. It may help to tell you I'm only planning to do light edits at this point. Slap me around a little, grab the points, and go back to sleep. Seabrass's final edits are already included in most of the posted chapters, and I'm about to add K's edits, so it should be in decent shape by the time you see it. I'll take a few hours this week and update all the online chapters. Depending on how far back you're reading, I have some late changes to post.
I totally forgot about Acme (not ACME, since that'll get me sued) and Aussie as I was revising my latest chapters. I'll have to go back and see if I can find more use for them. Did you know that I once forgot to use God in an entire chapter? Had to make a chapter checklist after that, which I keep forgetting to look at. I now have five ghosts in Joseph's head, so it's going to be hard to use them all. There's particular overlap between Joseph's mother and Admiral St. James. I knew that might bite me eventually. I'd retire Admiral St. James, but she's his military advisor, which should come in handy in act IV.
I thought Roman history research was hard. Try coming up to speed on the inner workings of the Catholic Church and the Vatican (for my next book about the Antichrist). Especially with my memory. I need notes just for my notes. I've bought two books just to understand Revelation, plus Catholicism for Dummies. :-) Every time I go deep into Catholic documents (e.g., online encyclopedia, the Catechism, etc.), I need a religious dictionary. There is a large DVD set all about the Catholic Church that I will probably buy, but it's $70 used, so I'm holding off until I get over the guilt of how much I've already spent. Had to buy a Blue-Ray drive and software just to watch the damn Exorcist Anthology, which turned out to be mostly crap. If I had thought to check rottentomatoes.com first, I could have saved myself a bundle. The worst of the five films has an 11% freshness rating. I miss having access to US streaming. Netflix Canada is all we've got, and it's relatively slim pickings.
I'm now officially in act III of IV with my revisions (about 15 chapters to polish). Four months or so to completion, allowing plenty of time for Catholic research. However, after some discussions online, I decided not to publish Into the Mind of God until I return to the story (after my next book), which means probably four or more years from now. I'm hoping the Antichrist book will be more polished and make a better first publication. Marketing will be a time-consuming bitch, so I want to wait until I've done a better book.
G'night.
Dirk
Marketing will be a time-consuming bitch
for RG it's been harder than writing it. At least writing came naturally. And there are so many weird fly-by-night marketing agencies whispering promises in my ears
Check out BookBaby. They're affiliated with this site, I believe.
Chapter 27, Imperator Apollo, is up. Mostly cleanup, suggested edits, and a new epigraph. If the epigraph of this chapter reads a little like that of the previous chapter, it's because I swapped some of the wording around. Only 14 chapters left to edit! Woohoo!
Quick, go read!
Dirk
Interesting discovery. Apparently no one can accurately estimate the global assets of the Catholic Church, not even the Church itself. Most of the assets/income outside of the Vatican are held by the individual dioceses and religious orders for their own use. They're all separate corporations, most led by bishops. Only a small amount (Peter's Pence) is transferred to the Vatican, which has revenue in the low hundreds of millions, mostly from investment returns and tourism. Many of the assets have never been appraised, because the Church would never sell them (e.g., cathedrals, Vatican artwork from the Middle Ages, etc.). Most are on the books for $1.
One figure puts total Catholic Church spending in the U.S. at $170B annually, but most of that money comes from health insurers who pay Catholic hospitals for covered medical procedures, so it's not exactly charity. University tuition received from students is another big part of that total. The biggest Catholic charity in the U.S. spends about $4B annually. Another interesting number is Church collections. The average weekly donation in the U.S. is $10, although the source wasn't clear if that was per Catholic or per family. That totals at most $36B. That's not even enough for disaster recovery from one major hurricane.
In Germany, church members are actually taxed by the federal government on behalf of the churches, which then get the money. Try that in the U.S. :-)
It's going to be tricky imagining a Catholic Church rich enough to lead much of the world's response to accelerating climate change. I need a Church that grows exponentially 3-4 decades from now as people afraid of the end times return to God, and to the Catholic Church in particular. I was hoping for up to 2B Catholics by the start of the book, which is about 50% more than the current figure. On the up side, 30-40 years is more than enough time to build big companies like Apple, Facebook, or Google. If the Church could build or inherit that kind of wealth, it could make quite a dent and attract more followers.
I could do the story with current numbers, although the Book of Revelation prophecies a worldwide religion, so it would be better if the Church was much larger to justify it becoming the Antichrist's main target.
Thanks. I'm just getting started. I need lots of details about climate change, including potential solutions, such as capturing co2 emissions and turning them into solids, or injecting them into the earth. Even if we started tomorrow, there is still a danger of a runaway greenhouse effect. What we need is a good old-fashioned mega volcano blasting ash into the sky. I may put one in the book.
The megavolcano is the most likely scenario. If you want MASSIVE irony, let it be triggered by an attempt to bleed off the heat (hope to delay the eruption by 10,000s of years) and use it for carbon-free geothermal.
https://wattsupwiththat.com/2017/10/30/ … edictions/
https://wattsupwiththat.com/2017/10/29/ … ntarctica/
https://wattsupwiththat.com/2017/10/27/ … old-kills/
http://notrickszone.com/2017/10/23/400- … 9jAb3.dpbs
Thanks for the links, njc. I've only briefly reviewed them, but will do so in detail before I start planning the main story elements. I'm leaning toward keeping climate change out of the book and going with the original, simpler premise of the Antichrist trying to seize control of the Church in the present. It would be far easier to write without having to become well-versed in climate science, not to mention having to project the story world forward 30-40 years. Dan Brown tried to include antimatter physics in his Angels & Demons book and got the fundamentals wrong. Studying Catholicism is hard enough.
My initial impression is that wattsupwiththat.com isn't trying to give a balanced view of climate change, but refute it. Some of the links I followed in your first article showed what appeared to be cherry-picking from the papers. I also saw one reference in passing to Breitbart News, which is not a site I would look to for unbiased opinions. I'll see if I can find it again when I read the articles in depth. I prefer "fair and balanced". :-)
Your last article talks about 413 papers that refute some of the arguments made by climate change supporters, but doesn't say how many papers were published reaffirming the general consensus. It's roughly 13,750 (97%). Below is a link claiming the remaining 3% of papers were flawed.
https://qz.com/1069298/the-3-of-scienti … ll-flawed/
I finally continued watching the Exorcist Anthology. The film with the worst rating, Exorcist: The Beginning (11% on rottentomatoes.com), was almost as good as the original film, in my opinion. I actually ended up buying the Kindle book for that movie. It's very well written. That leaves me just one more film in the series, Dominion: Prequel to the Exorcist, which is an alternate story from that of Exorcist: The Beginning.
The Catholic ritual for exorcisms only uses the line "The power of Christ compels you." one time, whereas the movies repeatedly uses "The power of God commands you. The power of Christ commands you." It's too bad that isn't part of the real ritual, since I was going to use those lines myself.
Always good to know what is out there before writing
You need to use Facebook to post the more interesting findings that you look up, along with footnotes to show where you found them. I think it could be your niche, Dirk.
I remember one of my acquaintances (who had tried to be a priest) talking about the saints and some of the story backgrounds. The patron saint of airplane pilots is a good one. St Joseph is my favorite.
St. Joseph of Cupertino was an Italian Franciscan priest who lived in the 17th century. He levitated. Poking him with pins and burning embers wouldn’t stop his soaring. “The Flying Friar” would only land when his superiors ordered him down. Pope Clement XIII gave him the nod in 1767.
My understanding from the person I learned this from was that they had to pad the roof supports to prevent injury so that St Joseph wouldn't whack his head during these ecstasies.
If you are looking for a niche on Facebook, then consider starting there. I'd love to read about stuff like that.
Oh, it was awesome to see your face finally. You look hot. Now start posting some stuff. Doesn't have to be pics of you. Maybe just neat sites that you want to share.
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Thanks, Amy. Somehow I missed your post above from two weeks ago. Posting the research to Facebook is an interesting idea. I've joined a bunch of writing groups, but have yet to join any Catholic groups. If I post on my timeline, do the groups see it?
Chapter 28, King of the Salves, is up. It's a cleaned up version of the same chapter from v2, including suggested edits from reviewers. I also rewrote the opening to make it more from Joseph's POV, rather than that of a neutral narrator. Given that the temperature reaches up to 50 degrees Celsius due to the Warming, I got rid of the convertible taxis. The cabs are fusion-powered, so there's plenty of energy to keep the cabs running and the air conditioners going. Leonardo's cab is specially equipped, since he's the Crazed Cabbie, and can eject its roof. The aero-hunters are open-air vehicles to begin with, since the guards need to be able to stand up in them and shoot at those they're pursuing.
Quick, go read!
Dirk
King of the Salves, is it?
Why not Lord of the Lotion or Baron of the Balm?
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Just finished The Exorcist (40th anniversary edition). Meh. Medically and religiously speaking, it's incredibly well researched, but the Father Karras character (a Jesuit psychiatrist) treats phenomena like mind-reading and telekinesis as facts of modern science, ruling them out as signs of Regan's possession. I'm glad those elements were left out of the movie. The prologue was a mess and the first few chapters didn't draw me in at all. The book was written in omniscient POV, with quite a bit of telling, and overuse of flashbacks. I don't mind omniscient if it's well done (e.g., Dune), but in this book, the author, William Peter Blatty, headhopped like a ping pong ball, including describing things that happen when no one is present to see them. Also, a heavy focus on excrement, vomit, and obscene masturbation involving Regan that took me out of the story. Nevertheless, none of the above got in the way of him selling 13 million copies, so what do I know? I got some useful research out of it, although I prefer the prequel, Exorcist: The Beginning, written by another author.
Now back to researching the Book of Revelation. I now have five books on interpreting Revelation, three of them written by Catholic theologians, and they all disagree wildly about the prophecies. One of the Catholic authors cites quack science about the ability of the U.S. government to use EMF-emitting technology to control our thoughts.
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