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Tamsin Liddell wrote:

Speaking of contests, did you see this week's Reedsy winner, JR?

(I'm going to message you in private, too.)

Reedsy should be embarrassed.

Just another newbie winning with their first story that is riddled with grammar errors.

They're not even trying to hide the fact the contest is a scam.

I'd LOVE to see those screen shots of the former judges.

I've already filed a complaint with the Iowa Attorney General office. All the red flags I listed, aren't exactly legal in Iowa.

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Any idea when the next writing contest is?

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As long as they're free, judges aren't allowed to enter, transparent judging, and writers keep the rights to their stories and/or fairly compensated for use of their stories.

I don't have a problem with that as long as it isn't run like that certain website we know of who is more about the money instead of for the writers they claim to help.

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Tried all that, didn't work.
Unchecked title box. Picture loaded.
Rechecked title box. Title won't appear after saving and reloading page.
Seems to me the page is buggier than Iowa in August.

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Tamsin Liddell wrote:

I just uploaded a new cover for "Revels," so it's working fine for me. But that's a short story.

Ive been trying for 3 days to upload a cover for my.new book. Hopefully the webmaster or whomever can fix it.

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Uploading a book cover to my new book... Betrayal Behind the Horns, has not been working for several days.

Anyone else having issues?

whatta wrote:

Yikes, that's harsh!

I found myself being super polite to AI, thinking that I didn't want it pissed off at me. Then I heard a story about a guy who insulted AI and it responded with: "I know where you live," (!!).

Anyway, those are good tips on spotting AI reviews. Anyone who does that should be outed publicly so they don't get any reviews. (Or at least warned that their actions have consequences.)

I have Sarah Connor's number on speed dial. One day, AI will decide humans aren't worth saving.

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Thank you everyone for the answers.

I'd quote all of you, but that seems a little redundant.

I'll definitely be considering self-publishing.

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B Douglas Slack wrote:

I've sold quite a few paperbacks on Amazon, but I also admit the eBooks are a bigger seller. The paperback is offered by Amazon as a feature alongside the eBook button. When a potential buyer looks up your book, Amazon will present the eBook first, with another button right next to it stating it can be bought as a paperback. They use what's called "POD - or, Print on Demand." This means they store it in electronic form at their printing plant(s) and when it gets ordered, they run off that copy and ship it. What I like about it is that you can get "author's proof copies" simply for the price of printing, which is significantly less than the retail price. If you do this, you can take them to book-gatherings wherever they may be and sell them at whatever price you wish. I've done that many times and generated a bit of pocket money.

There is a minimum amount Amazon takes as their fee, but it is you who sets the selling price to maximize your royalties to whatever you think the trade will bear.

Bill

My novel Silence Echoes is a 127,000+ word epic with at least one sequel planned. Possibly a trilogy.

What does a novel that length generally sell for as an ebook and paperback?

Tamsin Liddell wrote:
J.R. Geiger wrote:

How about Spot?

This is actually a very very traditional name for a pet.
The Greek translation for Spotted One: Cerberus

Cerberus means spotted one? Holy spots, Batman!

I'm going to have to Google pictures of Cerberus to see if there are any depictions of him with spots.

vern wrote:

When AI starts telling all supporters of Trump how and why they should get rid of Trump in no uncertain terms any time he is mentioned, I might start believing it has merit in any type of communication. Take care. Vern

Wow... President Trump lives rent free in your head.

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B Douglas Slack wrote:
Tamsin Liddell wrote:
B Douglas Slack wrote:

Since I self-publish using KSP (Kindle Self Publish) from Amazon

Sorry to tangent this, but how does that work? Costs, support, etc?

No cost at all. KSP is run by Amazon. You "massage" your book using the software, then hit a button that uploads it to Amazon. In about an hour or less, it will show up as an eBook. 24 to 36 hours later, it can be bought as a paperback. Amazon even assigns a ISBN number at no cost.

Bill

Amazon will even make paperbacks if someone orders a paperback copy of your book? Do you get any input on the cover art? What's their percentage of the sales?

Do I really need an agent then? A proofreader/editor? Those things are expensive.

I made an image for the cover of "Redemption". I was using one I found on Google but didn't want to be accused of stealing it so I made my own.

Pretty proud of myself since computers and I don't usually get along too well unless I'm gaming. Sometimes that is a challenge.

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Kdot wrote:

about Harley Quinn murdering innocent children with explosive video games. This did not sit right with me and many others.

I'm reminded of a scene in Miller's Dark Knight Returns where Joker released his laughing gas into a stadium and kills like then thousand people. I don't recall if the artist depicted children in the crowd, but presumably they were present and also innocent. I don't recall any backlash for it though sad

Believe it or not, I never read Miller's Dark Knight Returns.

I'll definitely put it on my list now.

As far as Joker is concerned, he's always been a Richard Cranium. LOL

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I just posted this morning the prologue and first chapter of fan fiction I wrote called "Redemption".

The project was born from frustration and love for the Batman universe and it's characters. I grew up on Batman and let's face it... he has the coolest cars and gadgets. AND with enough money, ANYONE can be the Dark Knight.

Several years ago, there was a storyline about Harley Quinn murdering innocent children with explosive video games. This did not sit right with me and many others.

Yes, she was a villain, but murdering children came way out of left field and it was definitely not in character for her.

Seeing things like that, I  thought... I can do better.

The story is a project I've been working on for a long, long time. I hope it sticks with you. It's a story about hope, redemption, family found, and family lost.

All characters, settings, and intellectual property referenced in the story are the exclusive property of DC Comics and Warner Bros. Entertainment. I make no claim of ownership and have no affiliation with, nor endorsed by, DC Comics or Warner Bros. Entertainment. The story is not intended for commercial use, and no copyright infringement is intended.

The story takes place in an alternate timeline and reality. Character ages, relationships, and events have been reimagined to explore new emotional and narrative dimensions. While the characters remain true to their core identities, their circumstances and histories have been respectfully altered for creative purposes.

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It hasn't even been a week and I'm already dying. LOL

I poured EVERYTHING I had into it and I know it's a long shot to break through in this industry.

I'm sure there are grammatical and a few spelling errors in it. If there isn't... I must be a better writer than any other in history. LOL

It's hard to believe my novel grew from just 2 simple lines on the back of a D&D character sheet in the backstory section.

The more I played the character, the more I realized there was a story that needed, demanded to be told.

As far as submitting to other agencies, I can. They just suggest not submitting to more than one agent at their agency.

The agent I chose is, in my opinion, amazing. She's got a great track record and she's open-minded. In her bio and her wish list, she's not sure what she's looking for until she reads it.

She loves stories about family and my story has that in spades with a bit of D&D lore and Greek mythology thrown in for flavor.

She represents several writers in the fantasy genre so my novel probably fits into that category best.

Where words fail... silence echoes

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After months of sweating and worrying about the story of my novel, "Silence Echoes", being stolen, I sent it to a reputable agency and one of their agents that had a good reputation and track record of success.

Now the wait begins.

But also, Tamsin and her line reviews of my short stories have shown me my writing needs some tweaking. I'm definitely taking the suggestions to heart.

I just hope the story of my novel is good enough for the agency to consider it.

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Tamsin Liddell wrote:

I've grown frustrated with Reedsy's weekly contests, so am pulling all of my work off of it.
Which means that I'm going to put them on here, since the whole point of doing this was getting feedback to help me improve.
In addition to the Joan Dark stories that I've been putting into "Before Dark," I'm adding a bunch of short stories that have nothing to do with anything else.
Some of these are particularly rough, I fully admit. I've been getting better.
Anyway, feel free to review them. I'm not intent on publishing them any time soon, but I probably will go through—as things to fiddle with—and re-edit them as they go. So feel free to inline if you prefer. Or let me know what works and what doesn't, in a general review.

Danke.

Did I start a movement?

Thank you for telling me about TNBW! ????

How about Spot?

In honor of Data's cat on Star Trek the Next Generation.

Or...

Stay... cats never come when you call them anyway. LOL

Tamsin Liddell wrote:

I'd give this a thumbs up or a like, but…

big_smile

Thank you! :-)

I'm a 57-year-old veteran, aspiring writer, lifelong Dungeon Master/D&D aficionado, lifelong KISS fan (obviously), and a gamer since the days of PONG! in the 70s.

I've never had any formal training in writing other than composition, American Literature, and English classes in Jr High and High School. Those classes I pretty much got D's in because I was bored and couldn't just write about things I didn't like. I had to be inspired by more than essays and book reports. UGH!

When I write, I'm not like other writers with notes, outlines etc. I am the embodiment of chaos—I improvise.

My mind is a whirlwind of wild ideas, shaped by years as a Dungeon Master and a relentless “What if...?” mindset. If it sounds off-the-wall, odds are it will end up on paper. Ares can attest to this, he now owns a space station. More accurately a Death Star.

A few months ago I finished my 127,000+ epic (hopefully the first in a trilogy).

I've been approached by numerous publishing houses and agents, but they all want money up front. Sometimes THOUSANDS.

Through my own research, I've found that reputable publishers and agents pay the writer for their manuscripts, NOT the other way around. The literary field is riddled with landmines for writers like myself who have no idea what they're doing or who to trust. BUT I do know enough to stay away from organizations who require me to pay them for the "privilege" of them publishing my work.

I'm here, thanks to a fellow writer (Tamsin Liddell) who saw the same things I saw at another website (it shall remain nameless) and recommended TNBW.

That other website, through my own experience and publicly available information raised questions for me and many others who were posting stories there.

The following list of things that made me pause is NOT intended to accuse or defame:

1. Judging Panel Transparency
The website lists HUNDREDS of judges; at least 200 of those appear to lack bios, credentials, or any visible writing experience. This absence of editorial background makes it difficult to assess the integrity of the selection process.

I recently received an email from a representative who, in response to my query, stated: “Bios aren't required, it's totally fine for judges to be new to the platform.”

This response confirmed that a lack of public credentials is an intentional part of the selection process, which further reinforces my concern about the experience of the judging panel.

2. Lack of Conflict-of-Interest Policy
I did locate that judges are STILL able to participate in contests. I quote the rules directly below omitting the website name:

"As a judge, you'll get the following perks:
- You’ll have a hand in shaping Prompts community of over 640,000 writers.
- You'll be featured on the ***** Prompts judges page, allowing you to introduce yourself to other writers and readers.
- YOU'LL STILL BE ABLE TO PARTICIPATE IN OUR WEEKLY CONTEST."

THIS IS A CLEAR CONFLICT OF INTEREST!

Having judges, who are supposed to be impartial, entering the same contest they are judging is akin to the fox guarding the henhouse—a setup that undermines trust in impartiality.

3. Compressed Judging Timeline
Entries were “screened” and then hopefully “accepted” up until the day before a winner and short-listed stories are announced. With the volume of weekly submissions, this turnaround seems far too short for meaningful editorial review.

It raised questions about whether stories were being read with care, or simply skimmed for surface-level appeal.

4. Winner Trends
I noticed a recurring pattern of first-time entrants winning and then disappearing from the platform. While this may be coincidental, the frequency raises questions about continuity and community engagement.

It’s hard to build a literary culture when winners vanish and long-time contributors are rarely acknowledged, beyond being short-listed.

5. Broad Licensing Terms
The submission agreement includes a “non-exclusive, irrevocable, perpetual, transferable, sub-licensable, worldwide, royalty-free license.” While I understand the need for publication rights, the scope of this clause feels disproportionate to the lack of ANY compensation.

Writers had to pay to submit, and in return, they surrendered broad usage rights—often without knowing how, where, or when their work will be reused, translated, or edited.

6. Marketing Emails
Whether submitting stories or not—I received promotional emails offering paid coaching, masterclasses, and publishing packages. While these services may be helpful to some, their timing and tone felt more like sales outreach than literary support.

The contest began to feel less like a celebration of craft and more like a funnel into paid services.

7. Lack of Feedback
Despite submitting dozens of entries, I NEVER received ANY editorial feedback or constructive critique from ANY of the HUNDREDS of judges. The absence of engagement made the process feel transactional rather than communal.

For emerging writers, feedback is often more valuable than a prize—and its absence is deeply felt.

8. Shared Concerns Among Entrants
I had spoken with numerous other writers who had noticed the same patterns—opaque judging, disappearing winners, and aggressive upselling.

9. Legal and Ethical Implications
While this DOES NOT accuse ****** of violating consumer laws, it raises legitimate questions that could be relevant under certain jurisdictions:

•     Conflict of Interest: Allowing judges to participate in the same contest they help adjudicate could be seen as deceptive or unfair under consumer protection standards—especially if entrants are paying to participate.

•     Licensing Terms vs. Compensation: The broad rights granted to Reedsy, combined with the lack of compensation, might raise concerns under unfair contract provisions—particularly if writers are unaware of how their work could be reused.

•     Marketing Practices: If promotional emails are triggered by contest submissions and framed as literary support, but function primarily as sales funnels, that could be viewed as misleading advertising.

WHEN A COMMUNITY BEGINS TO FEEL LIKE A MARKETPLACE, SOMETHING ESSENTIAL IS LOST.

Needless to say, I removed my stories from that other website, reclaimed my voice, and took my proverbial ball and went home.

I look forward to sharing my stories here and engaging with all of you.

So travel with thy pen and parchment in hand to a land where chaos is the only order.