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They simply don't make comedians like these people anymore.  All you hear now is profanity and slut.  Who needs or wants to listen to that?  Thanks for sharing this link.  Brings back some good memories.

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Thanks, Rachel!

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Thanks, Max.  Appreciate it very much!

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Thanks, Randy.  You have also offered me much support since I joined TNBW.

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Thanks, Bobbie.  You've been one of my biggest supporters since I joined TNBW!

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With a minor tweak from a couple members, on May 10, 2019 my Western Poem Pikesville won second place in the off-site contest I entered it for.   So, just wanted to say thanks to those who reviewed it here.  Much appreciated.  Pikesville is still available for review on the New Poems page.

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Cool beans, Randy!  Well done and keep it up.

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My third chapter of Astatula is now posted. All feedback welcomed.  Thanks in advance!

JP, liked your comment about "Denial".  There is a story in that phrase...or well could be.

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I am new here and not familiar with your book but wanted to offer congrats any how.  Well done!

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Tomorrow I will complete the free seven day trail offered by this site.  Therefore, I suppose I'll have to decide what course of action I am going to take going forward as far as remaining with the site or not.  I have received much valuable feedback on the pieces I posted and want to say thanks to those who have supplied that input.  They know who they are.  Believe me, it has been far superior to the  site I am in the process of leaving.  In addition, over the years I have belonged to other sites and this one does indeed offer the best feedback.  Much appreciated.

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My name is Brett Matthew West and I just joined this site as well as this group.  I am in the process of finalizing my novel Astatula and look forward to your constructive critiques.  Chapter One is posted, and Chapter Two should be up and running later today.

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My name is Brett Matthew West.  I just joined this site and am looking forward to discovering what it is all about.  My main reason for joining is so I can finalize my book Astatula for publication.  The general overview of the book is:  orphaned at ten years old after his father perishes in a car crash, Cody Schroder becomes the ward of the sheriff of Astatula.  Can his guardian turn him, and his life, around in a small, west Texas town where a deranged mass murderer runs loose?  The genre contains elements of murder, mystery, thriller, and young adult.  I have posted the first chapter that I call Astatula and will have the second chapter up on the site today.  Any and all constructive feedback is welcomed.