8.21 Titles used in apposition

When a title is used in apposition before a personal name—that is, not alone and as part of the name but as an equivalent to it, usually preceded by the or by a modifier—it is considered not a title but rather a descriptive phrase and is therefore lowercased.
the empress Elisabeth of Austria (but Empress Elisabeth of Austria)
German chancellor Angela Merkel (but Chancellor Merkel)
the Argentinian-born pope Francis
former president Carter
former presidents Reagan and Ford
the then secretary of state Hillary Clinton

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Earlier someone commented that members may be fearful of expressing honesty or providing a good critique for fear of being removed from Premium. Like anything in life, what happens to one, will happen to others. Jeff

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vern wrote:
jp wrote:

But I hope group members are not restricted to reviewing only each other. They can still review the works of people outside the Shred group, won't they?

They are no more restricted than any other group. Most works posted are listed in more than one group. Take care. Vern

** My understanding is that members who are confined to the "Shred Group" and *removed* from the Premium Group no longer have access to works posted on Premium, where the vast majority of works are indeed posted. Those sent to "Shred" can only read works by their connections and the groups they would have access to.

You may test it by leaving the Premium Group. I did, and got this message when I tried to click on several posts that appeared in the stream on the home page:  Not Authorized Please join one of the following groups to read this posting: TheNextBigWriter Premium.

So currently, anyone limited to the 'Shred Group' has access to those ten members and their limited connections.

Jeff

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It may not be my place to say this. It may not even be appropriate. Heck, I don't know. But I think everyone is missing the point.
The shred group appears to me to have been created to contain a *single* person, and that's that. And, a damn fine writer. Jeff

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Thanks for the considerate response, Sol.

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Another thought, how would a person "confined" to the Shred Group (with its climbing membership of six) receive quality feedback now on their own work? Jeff

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Hello,

I'm pretty new to the site also, but I've benefitted quite a bit from the honest feedback. It seems to me a writer won't benefit as much from watered-down reviews.

Editors may be good people, but they're not nice.

Perhaps another approach is for the moderator to give warnings before removing someone from the Premium Group? I agree with Gray, that the quality of reviews may suffer as a result of such measures, especially in light of not having clear policies and procedures to this effect. To me, that represents a breach of contract, as a paying member: to be removed from a group without following the site's own policies.

From a policies and procedures perspective, I reviewed the FAQs and policies of the site. Now I truly may have missed the part about how a member may be removed from the Premium Group. Normally a site like this would have a policy that could be followed regarding member conduct. Where none exists, the question of equitable treatment comes into play.

Besides lacking policy, there's the question of promotion. The site promises to "guarantee...substantive feedback" for new members. It may be argued that those who provide honest feedback and thorough reviews help to fulfill that promise, not detract from it.

Just my 2-cents. Jeff