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When I joined just under a week ago, I was blown away by the response I was receiving for my writing to the point I was not going to join after my trial period. However, after a few days now I have become to appreciate that folk here really what to help and I now feel privileged to have such a wealth of other peoples experience at my fingertips. I actually feel more confident in my writing knowing there are folk here I can run my first draft through without the embarrassment of it getting pulled to pieces once it gets e-published. So to all who have critiqued my writing so far, thanks for the advice. I hope in time to meet more people here. I'm already on Booksie where you can read all my writings. Please be kind LOL. Hope to speak to some of you soon.

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Could someone please review first chapter of Voyage to the Glass Sea. It's the second in a series. Thanks

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Hi Could someone please review 'In Between the Tick and Tock' for me. Its only two chapters. I want to get a feel if the story has legs. It's difficult to write a synopsis covering all the points, so if interested please ask questions. I'm not to bothered about a grammar, typo or punctuation check at this stage, just want a feel for the idea. Thanks for your time

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Hi Could someone please review 'In Between the Tick and Tock' for me. Its only two chapters. I want to get a feel if the story has legs. It's difficult to write a synopsis covering all the points, so if interested please ask questions. I'm not to bothered about a grammar, typo or punctuation check at this stage, just want a feel for the idea. Thanks for your time.