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Hi Everyone, I'm old but new. I'm basically Wilt Roberson! for some reason my account stopped working. Decided to start afresh and with that bring an improved version of my work.
Here's a description of my book "The Burning Lotus"
  In the shadows, Dorian loves to observe his neighbour. She makes him feel alive. Routinely peeping, Dorian is a witness to a crime. He soon finds himself caught in a world he has no business being
  in and, living with schizoaffective disorder, the one that lives in his mind. As Dorian struggles for balance, he'll learn what his existence means and what it takes to become a hero. This is still my first attempt at a book and I'm going strong (130 pages) but I'm focusing on learning a lot of the nuances I know I'm missing when it comes to writing. I am raring to go and willing to learn! I've posted the first 5 chapters  and would love any kind of feedback!

Thanks,

Smith (For now )