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(5 replies, posted in Free Verse Poets)

Make it four! and having rhythm makes sense to me.  I would get irritated if the rhythm was interrupted:)

After many hours waiting patiently for him, in her rocking chair beside the hearth, Henrietta hid quietly behind the door as she heard Frederick approach.

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(27 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Wow, that's fantastic! Congratulations.